A Roll Call of Great Men

Pros: The writing is pretty good. Disadvantages: 1. Procrastination, having to mention things mentioned over and over again, which seems boring. 2. Dream of Red Mansions is a fictional world, and the characters in it are all fictitious. However, the author insists on setting it to the end of the Ming Dynasty. It seems boring and easy to skip the plot. Moreover, the Dream of Red Mansions novel is not a historical novel, but a fairy tale. The author made a big mistake in applying history. 3. Some of the plots at the beginning of the novel are too intellectual. The protagonist in the novel was a leading cadre before time travel and liked to read Dream of Red Mansions. However, after he traveled to the world of Hou Lou Meng, he met people named Xue and Jia who had no sensitivity at all. This is very intellectual.

It's boring to repeat a lot of content over and over again, it's too procrastinating.

At first glance, it looks like an old author. The protagonist can rise from a maid to an emperor just by farting. Analyze it. After many chapters of water, let's fart again and do it again. The word count is good and the manuscript fee is good, but the story is fragmented. It's the kind of book where you can skip 100 chapters after reading one chapter, and then read another chapter, and the story is still coherent. Not suitable for listening to books.

The plot of the work is exciting and reasonable, and the writing style is brilliant. Overall, it is quite good! It's a pity that the male protagonist's words and deeds are too hypocritical and have double standards!

The writing style is indeed good, but it's just too watery. There are only two to three hundred words in one chapter that really promote the plot, and it's not just one or two chapters, it's like this for the vast majority of them! Not to mention skipping to read the main text, I almost want to skip reading the table of contents...

The explanation is too detailed, which affects reading.

The author's bottomless obscenity towards the woman in the Red Mansion is so disgusting

Stallion writing, this problem is too serious, classic purebred stallions, you fall in love with one when you meet one. Skipping all the relationship-related content, this article is indisputably a very, very good article (someone did point out some other problems in the comments, but they are minor problems). What I like best is the part at the end where he is pushed to the throne of God. There is not so much pressure, but it is not exhaustive. When the atmosphere is up, he is pushed directly. All in all, good reviews.

Sure enough, it's like a foot wrap, grinding and grinding, even if you are setting the stage, even if you are explaining, who can stand it for more than an hour without saying anything serious. The plot doesn't move forward at all.

The writing is very good, I like it very much