After I Turned the World Upside Down at Hogwarts, Hermione Took Me Out

Is it too deserted? (><) Then let me send you some good ones! ₍₍ (̨̡ ‾᷄ᗣ‾᷅ )̧̢ ₎₎

Following the comments of the Guardian Knight brother, I feel that this is a pretty good Hermione cook seedling, so cheers for the author.

What you like is not the original Hermione, who is indeed not beautiful, but the Emma. Although Emma is not good in character, she is good in appearance.

Me and my Grapevine Wand in the Yard of Eagles

Complaints about the original work The savior should be Harry Potter's mother, Lily, right? Hey, I get angry when I talk about this. The defensive magic on Harry Potter was imposed by his mother. It was this defensive magic that saved Harry Potter, and also reflected the Killing Curse and beat Voldemort to a pulp. In the end, people didn't say much about Lily, but praised Harry Potter... Why not praise Lily? I'm really speechless, and I don't know what the original author's logical thinking is.

I have read about seventy chapters, and I don't know if the author is a new author. If so, it is okay to write it as it is now. If it is a new account of an old man, I feel that it has failed. From a reader's point of view, I personally feel that the description of details, especially the description of all aspects of the characters, is very simple and not full, especially when the villains appear one after another, as if they have insufficient IQ. If it is about the group of children around the protagonist, it is okay, but the part about catching Voldemort is like setting up a trap to catch a wild boar. Also, the portrayal of the protagonist's parents is very stereotyped and rough. In other words, when the protagonist behaves, the parents should react accordingly. I think as the protagonist should be the most important character beside the heroine, why do I feel that the protagonist's parents are like subordinates. Furthermore, the climax of each part of the plot should be the emergence of contradictions and conflicts, such as threatening Old Crouch, capturing Voldemort, conquering Fudge, the minister's election before and after, etc. If you know the original work, it's easy to say, but if you don't, it can only be said to be too pale. In the final analysis, the excitement of the novel lies in the rivalry between people. The more profound the characters are portrayed and the more intense the conflict, the more exciting the novel will be. In fact, the author wrote the emotional scene between the heroine and the hero very profoundly, but maybe it was because it was so profound that he neglected the characterization of other people. I personally suggest that the author take a look at HP's other fanfics. There are very good references for the author. I wish the author better and better at the starting point.

The aborigines... Their heads are really strong...

Ah... Are they really not updated anymore...

Fantasy novels are basically written about daily life, and when reading Harry Potter fan fiction, I like to read about magic. There is a reason for my poor performance.

I just like this unabashed title