The Original Wizard

A very good book! As long as there is no collapse in the future, we can continue to develop steadily like this. I sincerely look forward to it!

Everything was fine, until the author inexplicably created a system panel for the protagonist's apprentice, and I felt that the style of the book began to go astray.

It's well written, with very unique ideas. I think it's another masterpiece of a wizarding genre.

This book is nice and organized. But Meng Xin read this chapter and said he should be careful, he might get poisoned. I personally believe that a work is a world, and we must abide by its settings and rules and understand it with our heart (whether rationally or emotionally). Some comments use the concepts of other works or personal opinions and interpretations as a basis to raise questions or criticisms, or personal interpretations of the descriptions in the article (other chapters say) are introduced into thinking about reality or history, and criticized, or even directly attack the author or other book friends. These practices caused me discomfort. (Do not reply, I only read books, I don't like to reply to book reviews, please like ε-(=｀ω´=) )

Alas, I'm so tired from watching it. Now I have to quit after watching it for a while and take a look at something else before I can continue reading. Come on, author, you write well.

Spread the glory of wizards to thousands of worlds

Travel through the heavens and plunder the world's resources

Will there be a floating city siege?

The attractive beginning is enough to cover up some minor shortcomings in the newcomer's writing style. The background environment setting is also very novel. Most Western fantasy games are in medieval style, but this one is actually an ancient Greek city-state. Paired with some mythology, it tastes great. The plot progress is quite impressive. Rhythm control is difficult for newcomers, especially the Western fantasy genre, which is prone to nonsense, but it can be an advantage for the author. The beginning is generally easier to write, and I hope that I can still reach this level when it comes to clues to various events in the later stages. There are some detailed narrative issues, and many details and even paragraphs appear redundant. The characterization is slightly lacking. The most obvious thing is the character dialogue. When telling a story in words, words can be said to be the place that best reflects a person's personality, and this is the biggest problem of this book (I think). Also, don't make a show of yourself with your words! Very poor reading experience! I haven't finished reading yet, that's all 🤭

Once again I saw the imprint of my thoughts in an online article, and I felt uncomfortable saying some of them. This thing, in the eyes of many authors, seems to have only various advantages, and the huge flaws seem to be swallowed up. As a new organization, because the environment is complex and dangerous, it can be used during its initial development. But the protagonist as a researcher, or the author himself, must have an objective understanding of this thing. This thing itself is a creative obliterator. Especially for an organization like this that requires the creativity of its members. If you impress others with loyalty, they will still think you are wrong. Is it possible that you can make mistakes? Will their critical thinking still exist? Once the number of such people exceeds a certain limit, the entire organization will become homogeneous and turn into a magical religion. It seems that there is a group of people struggling and researching below, but in fact they have become the protagonist's tools, and only the protagonist can do all the pioneering work. Ideological stamps, unless you are printing detailed rules and regulations of hundreds of thousands of words, the simpler the constraints, such as "loyalty", "braveness", and "unity", the greater the destructive power will be later. Either collective homogenization, or differences in the understanding of one or several concepts, and once the differences occur, it will never be healed After all, we have all learned from Ma Yuan and know that movement is the fundamental attribute of matter. Material development is the death of old things and the birth of new things. As for the thought stamp, it fixes certain parts of your thinking. Is this thing really that useful?

In the early stage of the divine book, wizards should respect wizards rather than believe in them, otherwise they will be no different from the original gods. In the middle stage, when fighting demons and punishers, they should unite the power of wizards to face the enemy. With the wisdom of wizards, they should be able to exert a power of one plus one that is far greater than two, instead of letting knights die. Otherwise, the protagonist will be done with research alone. Isn't it good to break through level three by one person? The protagonist spent so much effort to get so many wizards, but in the end it was of no use. In the end, he relied on the knights and the protagonist for protection. So what's the point of this wizard?

I found out that the author is not very good at writing. He made more than ten pictures of his men fighting life and death, and the protagonist was always on the way here on horseback. . . . Is this what the protagonist did?

I have read Entering the Cultivation of Immortals, The Arcane God's Throne, The First Seeker, The Man at the Top of the Food Chain, The Technological Wizard, The Journey to Dimensional Ascension, and Let Go of the Witch.

I'm speechless... My hometown is often infiltrated and robbed every day, and a lot of people die every time. The deaths are very meaningless Every time one of his men is about to die, the protagonist is still on the way, and even almost catches up, he has to stop and rest until all his men are dead before catching up The book is a good book, but sometimes the plot arrangement is very awkward...

The requirements can be self-justified and can be based on realistic theories or fantasy weapons. Please note the general theory or fantasy basis. There is no guarantee that it will be adopted, but as long as it can be justified, try to adopt it. The format is as follows Name: Basic: Power: Can be divided into different grades, the growth type is the best 😁

It seems that the author is single, and his writing about romance is a mess 😏

It was about a year ago when I first read this novel. I read about fifty of them in one go, and then I realized I couldn't read any more. , Because there are very few books of this type on the Internet, not to mention the starting point, and I was very afraid that the author would become a eunuch, so I started to read it, and now it has more than 500 chapters and 1.3 Million words. Well, now I have to start reading it again! The setting of this book is very attractive, even if the author suddenly stopped writing, I would still read it~

I have only read more than 30 chapters. It is very interesting. I hope it will be the same in the future! A small reward of 10,000 yuan is not respectful.

Damn it! After this book, other wizards will no longer be able to read 😭

Love, love, this is the real wizard who does not believe in gods and seeks the truth in the world. The wizard's road is never-ending. The world is material and there are many truths that are unknown.

What wizard? I believe that wizards pursue truth, conquer all planes, are selfish, crazy, schizophrenic, and pursue eternity. Looking greedily at the infinite world, using the blood of all living beings to illuminate the light of wisdom in the darkness ahead!

First of all, congratulations on signing this book. Both the author and the readers feel relieved. The following comments: 1. The core highlights of this book should be the relatively pure flavor of ancient Greece and Rome and the independent exploration and development of the system that is different from the general upgrade text. I hope it can continue to maintain its characteristics; 2. The current power system feels relatively rough and simple. Of course, this may be because the background information has not been fully developed. But from the current point of view, it seems that the author plans to return all power systems to runes. Will this approach be too simplistic? After all, the settings such as runes are biased towards the legal system. The original hero system essentially became a mage with a sword and shield and other cold weapons, while the protagonist created a mage with a staff and a magic book. In most settings, the physics department can also form its own system. After all, differentiation and diversification bring richer experiences to readers, and the author has more room to play. 3. The intensity of hallucination and mental spells seems to be a bit over the top. For example, the function of throwing runes is to throw, which is relatively simple, while hallucination runes directly contain most of the contents of hallucination spells, and their operability is too powerful. The same is true for charm spells, which have similar problems. Finally, let's talk about my personal reading preferences, let's take into account readers' feedback: 1. I am a little tired of plots in which the protagonist uses the ability to change vests or do clones to perform actions. After all, there are too many such works in Qidian. From the hit "Lord of the Mystery" to the contracted and difficult-to-deliver book, this type of routine is almost indispensable. Of course, it is not incomprehensible if necessary. After all, this treatment can free the characters from the various restrictions brought by their previous identities and facilitate the development of new stories. 2. Personally, I hope that the protagonist's behavior will be more prudent and try not to take radical actions. To put it bluntly, it is best to farm and develop steadily and not to be reckless. Especially for the protagonist who is calm and smart, it is best not to commit suicide. I wish this book will get better as it gets written!

I can only say that the writing is great in terms of research and development, but it is a little bit toxic in terms of characters and plot.

Read it all in one go! Very exciting! Hope to come on!

The protagonist also needs to develop wizards and collect intelligence among the nobles. The nobles are basically divine descendants, but not everyone can become extraordinary. There are also people with low strength who cannot make progress. There will always be people who are unwilling to be mediocre. When there is a direct way to transcendence without blood, someone must try. Once you become a wizard, you will inevitably break with the entire class, which will make it more credible. Moreover, divine descendants can also be directly regarded as the original prototype of bloodline warlocks. Bloodline warlocks must be bloodline. Imprisoned by the source, if you want to go further, you must tear apart the power and authority of the source gods to form a new bloodline source. This is an irreconcilable contradiction. These are all forces that can be developed. Using aristocratic status to collect world intelligence, develop resources and divine knowledge for the wizard organization is an inevitable way, because many things will never be known without a certain social status. Wizards can never develop by working at the bottom, and must have higher-level helpers.

It is good to tell the truth and pursue the truth, but writing about the research process without writing about the sense of accomplishment makes it difficult for people to want to read. And the writing is so sad. Although the overall development is upward, the plot and writing style are mostly focused on writing tragedy. It just doesn't have anything to do with the protagonist, so what's the use of writing the plot? Just to torture people!

A path-breaker with the spirit of overcoming obstacles He is a pioneer in seeking truth He is a wise man in exploring knowledge He is a guide in spreading civilization He is also a ruthless seeker

How to put it this way, I always feel that every time I encounter a big event, the protagonist is water skiing, and then waits for a few apprentices to die or cripple a few apprentices before coming out to take the kill. The sense of existence is a bit weak. I don't know if it's my imagination 😅

Can any good friends tell me that when the protagonist went out to the Northland for the second time, there was no such embarrassing emotional scene with Dana? Compared with the first time out, the style of painting changed drastically.

After reading dozens of chapters, I immediately subscribed and supported it. It is so difficult to find a book now. The author is great and the writing is so good. 😁 I have been reading this book for ten years and this is the first time I have posted something. Please improve it.