The Great Dao Atlas

The protagonist has to redeem himself and start cultivating again every time he enters a new world; novels written in this way are generally criticized as toxic. However, if the story were written differently, with the protagonist sending out clones to other worlds to cultivate again, virtually no one would criticize it. Of course, some readers dislike clones, but they are a minority.

The synopsis is a bit off. Let's put it this way: the protagonist becomes a saint in the primordial world, but he thinks he's a puppet of the Heavenly Dao and wants to transcend it. He abandons everything to slay immortals and comprehend the path to immortality, to cultivate in the vast and mysterious world.

I have no idea why he keeps traveling through time. He doesn't want power, he doesn't want laws, he doesn't want comprehension, he's just wasting his time traveling.

Keep it up. Don't repeat the mistakes made after the last Emperor's Chronicle.

To put it simply, in the first world, the protagonist became a supreme god with the hope of transcending and becoming the controller of the primordial chaos. However, he abandoned everything to reincarnate, and his achievements in the subsequent worlds were still inferior to those of the supreme god.

The Holy King, Immortality, and Star Emperor Is the author really going to write these three books? Later in the story, even a random passerby can easily defeat everyone else mentioned in the synopsis.

The author intends to write "Journey to the Immortal Realm," but the problem is how many people have read it now? It's a novel from so many years ago. Even a bookworm like me, who's been reading for seven or eight years, has only heard of it. If you write it, most readers won't know the original plot, and the settings are similar. You're writing a fanfiction, so in this situation, how many people do you think will read this volume?

The supreme god in the Panlong world loses power elsewhere. Don't talk to me about world suppression; only worlds surpassing the Panlong world truly exert suppression. Without surpassing it, there's no point in discussing suppression.

What is the meaning of Harry Potter?

I'm speechless. Panlong became the supreme god, then went to Harry Potter and the Type-Moon universe. I'm outta here.