The Pande Empire in Another World

To be honest, the author, horse-and-blade warfare has always been the mainstream, and most of the readers are fans of horse-and-blade warfare. What they expect is to constantly recruit troops and fight to become stronger, rather than strategizing, and changing their minds with those people. I suggest the author write less and try not to write, otherwise it will dissuade many people. Recently, the author, you have been writing about the Duke. It is too long and there are too many chapters. I have not read much except voting recently. I have stopped reading as soon as I read the chapters. I hope the author can pay attention to it.

I would like to make a suggestion. It is best to have a mercenary guild and a knight's guild in this world. You can establish a mercenary group or a knighthood. You can recruit soldiers openly. Or you can enter the mod world copy of Pander to develop your troops and join the knighthood. Otherwise, if you write so many chapters to help the village kill a tiger, when will you be able to see riding and slashing?

Nowadays, most eunuchs write about riding and slashing, so come on, authors! !

I feel that the protagonist is a good person, but not a likable person to the readers. Perhaps because of writing reasons, the author is willing to write that the protagonist makes selfless contributions to other supporting characters, but readers can only assume the role of the protagonist, and have no feeling for other supporting characters. It is difficult to accept the protagonist's constant "selfless dedication"

Chapter 18: Poison to death. Use the thinking of a well-fed person to describe the hunter morality of a group of starving people. Give up the spoils of death to satisfy your own moral sense. Really why not eat minced meat?

After staying for one night, the protagonist sighed: This favor is too big. I don't understand, what kind of big favor is this?

Pandor's prophecy is a shame that I will never forget in my life. Which great god >o< made this mod. I was beaten over and over again by a group of bandits, and then I obediently went back to fight in the twelfth century 😭

90% Of this book is nonsense. Who cares about your protagonist's psychological journey? What we want to see is your protagonist becoming a lord and farming for hegemony. I'm really convinced that I missed such a good subject in vain.

It's so poisonous that I'll split it open. It's okay to kill the tiger and bury it, stupid b

It is recommended that the author read his novel from the perspective of a reader and find out the shortcomings