The Little Restaurant

I suggest adding more content and stories about food. Halfway through, it inexplicably turned from a food story into an urban love triangle drama, which almost made me give up. The author's descriptions of the emotions were too stiff. This kind of content, if well-written, can draw the reader in; if poorly written, it drags down the overall score.

What can I say? The author's writing of emotional scenes is too awkward. Halfway through the book, he suddenly switched from a food article to an urban romance article, as if he was eating a dish and found a cockroach in the dish. I basically skipped all the emotional scenes. If the author can't grasp the emotional scenes, I suggest not to add emotional scenes. It's really awkward.

Who will be the female lead? Is it Meng Wanqiu, or has the female lead not yet appeared? After all, I've already seen some really cheesy plot twists in this storyline: her mother doesn't have much time left and wants to see if she can have a grandchild or something, and Meng finds out and has no choice but to agree. Such a melodramatic plot!

Honestly, this book made me incredibly awkward, especially when the recommendation letter was compared to Ren Xiao'e's. It made me feel quite embarrassed. Most of the time, I read this book for the food, but it devoted a lot to descriptions of human nature and various scenes involving the older generation. I'd like to suggest the author reduce these descriptions. Thank you.

Are all books these days toxic? Other books and novels talk about food all the time. But this food-themed novel just rambles on and on, writing one chapter of the main text and five chapters of rambling nonsense. The main text isn't even as clear as the rambling. Author, are you a member of a biological weapon?

I liked it at first, but ever since the so-called school beauty appeared... I initially told myself we weren't from the same world... But after less than three chapters, all sorts of complicated entanglements started... I couldn't stand it anymore... The romance was too awkward... Goodbye...

Is the protagonist young, rich, or incredibly handsome? Does every woman fall for him? Real-life ordinary people don't have that kind of dramatic flair. Forget about romance; it just feels awkward.

It's obvious they're trying to imitate a food supplier. If they had written it well, that would have been fine. But after reading thirty or forty chapters, it's clear that their writing isn't good enough. They force sentimentality, and while they're trying to write something heartwarming, they also insist on writing disgusting plots. It has to be a love triangle, and the male lead is a hypocrite.

Why are there so many romantic subplots in food articles, and they're so incredibly awkward...?

This is so melodramatic! I can tolerate urban romance, but this is about a competition. I tolerated you being ruined the first time, and then you begged me to quit on my knees the second time? Have you forgotten why you participated in the competition in the first place? This is utter garbage and I'm telling you to quit!!!