The Little Restaurant

I suggest you write more chapters and stories about food. Halfway through the book, it inexplicably changed from a food article to a small urban love triangle theater. I almost couldn't make it through. The author's description of emotions is too blunt. If this kind of content is well written, it can draw readers into it, but if it is not well written, the overall score will be improved. It is recommended to refer to life-style games and food starting from making noodles. Recently, system food articles are very eye-catching. I hope the author will write them carefully ✊

What can I say? The author's writing of emotional scenes is too awkward. Halfway through the book, he suddenly switched from a food article to an urban romance article, as if he was eating a dish and found a cockroach in the dish. I basically skipped all the emotional scenes. If the author can't grasp the emotional scenes, I suggest not to add emotional scenes. It's really awkward.

Who will be the heroine? Meng Wanqiu or the heroine didn't show up? After all, I have already seen the bloody plot after writing this plot. Her mother was running out of time and wanted to see if she could have a grandchild or something. Then Meng found out and had no choice but to agree. Such a bloody plot, right?

To be honest, I felt quite embarrassed when I read this book, especially when I compared it with Ren Xiao'e with the letter of recommendation. In fact, most of the time I read this book just to see the food, but this book has a lot more descriptions of people's hearts and various plots about the older generation. I would like to give some advice to the author. I hope these descriptions can be kept as small as possible. Thank you.

Are all books nowadays toxic? Other writings, nothing to do but something to eat. This person who writes snack articles will ramble on when he has something to do. He will write one chapter of the main text and five chapters of nonsense. The text is not clear yet. Author, are you a member of the biological and chemical weapons industry?

I quite liked it at first, but since the so-called school beauty came out... I told myself at the beginning that we were not from the same world... But within three chapters, all kinds of entanglements came out... I couldn't stand it anymore... It's such an awkward emotional drama... Goodbye...

Is the protagonist young and rich, or handsome? Does every woman like him? How can ordinary people in reality have so many dramas? Don't ask for an emotional drama, it's awkward to watch.

，，，， It has to be a love triangle, and the male protagonist is a double-edged dog. This is the second book in so many years that made me feel sick after just twenty or thirty chapters. The hero's brother cheated on her, but he still forced himself to love her. Hey, he had a fight and then went to a nightclub for a day. It was really just me who cheated on her, but I'm a good boy.                                                                                        but the main characters of the girls in this book all have no big problems (except for their attitude towards the two men), but neither the male protagonist nor his brothers are normal. I read the first few pictures after the settings were a bit similar to Yuan Gui. I was really disgusted by the result. (I am male)

Why are there so many emotional scenes in food articles that are so embarrassing...

It's so stupid. I can't bear it in urban love. I participated in a competition. The first time I made you endure it, but the second time I knelt down and begged you not to participate in the competition, you still tolerated it? You haven't forgotten why you participated in the competition, right? It's so rubbish, I have to quit! ! !