The Demon Inn

As I get older, I now like this kind of leisurely and leisurely writing. There is no love, hate, fight and killing like fantasy cultivation, and there is no iconic opening scene where the protagonist is dumped and his family is destroyed.

Entertainment building, idiom solitaire, the formation is arranged, I will start first: dragons are flying and phoenixes are dancing

Shopkeeper Yu's buttons, my aunt's lightness, the color of the coconut cake, the black girl's recklessness, the rich man's stupidity, Hu's mother is far handsome, the weird Hui, Dabai's insanity, Xiaobai's ghost, the little monk's kindness, Cao'er's virtue, the beauty of King Donghuang, the majesty of the god-killer, the greed of King Nanhuang... All kinds of things, fireworks in the world.

The first hundred chapters can be used to make gods. It embodies a grand worldview in a small town that looks ordinary but is extraordinary everywhere, creates a group of lively and lovely characters, and adds a personality system and food explanations, which is especially better than the text version of "Wulin Gaiden". I also imagined that the final map of previous upgrade novels, where the so-called enlightened people gathered, probably looked like this town. But then it is all the way down, with too many elements, fragmented movement and static, the main line is stiff, the branch lines are messy, the characters are inconsistent, and the writing style is completely different. For example, after becoming a mother, the character's fate and mentality completely changed. On the one hand, the character's encounters became richer, the map expanded, various crises came, and the protagonist's strength increased dramatically. On the other hand, the character's personality collapsed, from being plain and promising, warm and soft, and not stingy with money to being a female protagonist The meaning of life, regard money as life, love to pretend to be present, and at the same time be stupid and confused. The article changes from being light-hearted and natural to just being funny when the crisis is high, and only talking about love in daily life. The sitcom atmosphere and nonsensical baggage can no longer suppress the various logical problems, making people feel stuck in the throat and uncomfortable to read.       ，，，，， It's a pity for the amazing opening chapter, so I will read the author's new book and support it if it has the quality of the first hundred chapters.

Chapter 1 The white fox advises the team, is it a meritorious deed to steal other people's things and release them? ? This is a thief system. As long as you use reasonable means to get it, I won't say a word, but you just get drunk and steal it. What is the difference between you and a human trafficker? Are you the protagonist? ?

You, the special girl, have to trick me into coming in with your light-hearted and funny writing. As you write, you become a mentally retarded Long Aotianwen. Are you, the special girl, cheating me out of money? ? ? ? 😡😡😡

I have read a few chapters and asked a few questions. The system is set up to exchange merit for things. I understand that the protagonist should do more good deeds. But did the author forget that doing good deeds will bring merit and doing bad deeds will also lose merit? Saving the fox is good, stealing the fox is evil. If the merits and demerits are equal, there should be no reward or even punishment! Because doing good is no reason for you to do evil. The reputation of a restaurant that sells Tianshi wine is the most important thing. You get someone drunk and use a jar of wine for four bucks to talk about things. It's a big problem. When you open a restaurant, you have to clearly mark the price. What is the difference between the protagonist's behavior and the behavior of the protagonist who has spent fifty-nine before a meal and five thousand and nine after a meal in the past two years? Also, this daily task is very unreasonable. You call it merit. You should get it by doing good deeds. What is the point of adding merit to customer satisfaction? You can either ask for points or change the daily tasks so that you look completely nondescript! I hope you don't blame me for speaking poorly. I personally like this type of novel and the author writes it very well, but because of these problems, I always feel that the whole novel is very awkward. The protagonist is originally a kind-hearted person, but these things make the protagonist look like a virgin bitch. It was indescribably uncomfortable. Finally, for those who like this kind of novels, I recommend you to read "The Doomsday House". The content is quite similar to this theme and is also very good except that the author feels that he is getting gray. (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

Recommended by others in the book wasteland. I couldn't stand it until chapter 25, but I couldn't stand it anymore. Goodbye. The starting point is really not good anymore.

With so many recommendation votes, I thought it was pretty good, but I was so disappointed. I started to waste money without any strength at all. I always do business at a loss, and I don't know how to do business at all. The price purely depends on my mood. At first glance, it seems that it was written by a woman, and the basic logic is flawed. I really don't understand where these comments came from. I was tricked into it by the comments.

This book is very well written, why isn't it popular? 🤔