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Let's talk about something that I quit watching after just one minute. First of all, martial arts masters and strong physiques. Anyone with a normal IQ would choose a martial arts master because it comes from experience. Physique can be developed. Can you be called a martial arts master if you don't have more than ten or twenty years of experience? So goodbye I choose yo-yo
It's not that I miss black people, I just have some opinions after reading most of them. I feel that the male protagonist is very mentally retarded and has no common sense in life. Many of the cooperative methods are not what normal people can do. There are many poisonous points, especially the matter of arresting human traffickers. It is even weirder. He knocked down two human traffickers and simply tied them up with shoelaces. There were two unconscious children on the ground. He dared to leave them all behind, saying that they were left to the police, and ran to catch another human trafficker by himself. Is this what a normal person can do?
The protagonist is a calamity, he has accidents everywhere, and there are too many trivial things.
It's full of poisonous things and murders with knives. I've never seen it in more than 30 years of life. I haven't seen it in college dormitory rankings. The probability is one in 100,000. I haven't seen it in social gatherings. I haven't seen it in KTV singing when someone grabs the microphone and pretends to be cool. The author has never gone to college. He forcibly combines jokes from the Internet, but he doesn't know that those jokes are all bad jokes and ridicule.
Please, please don't use the eldest, second, and third tiers in your college roommate relationship, okay? Just speechless? And none of the dormitories near me have people taking pictures like this. Isn't it embarrassing? . . . . It's 2022. .
The plot is blunt and the male protagonist is mentally retarded and unlikable, so I gave up on it.
Shennong couldn't bear it anymore and withdrew it first. Here is a summary of the problems in the book. Shennong is welcome to add: 1. The article is too streamlined and not concise enough. It can be seen that the author wants to describe the psychological process of the protagonist through action, but it is too watery. The protagonist does everything. It needs to be described in detail 2. There is basically no emotional description, and the ups and downs of the protagonist's mentality are completely invisible. At present, the protagonist seems to have no mood changes about anything, just like a Buddhist, making it difficult for readers to have a sense of substitution 3. The early choice is one Poison points, a strong physique is indeed important, but if it is not to improve a large amount of combat effectiveness in a short period of time, it is not necessary, let alone practice by yourself. Even if there is a bonus, it is not as useful as experience 4. The author does not describe the world enough. This book only records the protagonist, foreshadowing and digging holes. It can be said that I know nothing about all kinds of writing techniques 5. The choice of the protagonist is very confusing. From the moment I saved people and left, the logic is very confusing. I am afraid that because college students have such good skills, they will be found out. Many of the subsequent choices are even more outrageous. The specific space is limited and I will not go into details.
I didn't insist on finishing the chapter. I had to control the gangster and run away quickly. The reason was because a college student suddenly had such good skills. I was afraid of arousing suspicion. Could it be more far-fetched?
It is a society governed by the rule of law, but the people around the protagonist are either forming gangs and fighting in the streets, or various big men drugging, beating, molesting, chasing girls, or engaging in various criminal crimes such as fraud, abduction, and knife-wielding injuries! Please, the protagonist is just a poor college student, not a savior, please write a normal plot!
The part about catching the traffickers was really about forcing them to quit. At the beginning, I knew how to call the police, but later on I had clues about the traffickers but I went to the police myself. It was just a fool's errand.