My Luck Is Just Too Good

The author has a suggestion: what's the most profitable thing to do if you're lucky? Materials science!! Currently, there's very little research or study in materials science. Materials science mostly involves repeatedly testing raw materials. If you're lucky, you might create the ideal material on the first try. A high-quality material can transform countless industries; a single material could potentially represent a market worth tens or hundreds of billions of dollars.

Garbage, the casino area is disgusting.

The casino scene should never have been included. First, it was too abrupt, and second, Fang's character wasn't very likable; it felt like moral blackmail and lacked a central theme. I hope the author finishes that section.

The main character is just a goofball...

The author is utterly ignorant! Macau, as one of the world's four major gambling cities alongside Monaco, Atlantic City, and Las Vegas, and the only city in China where gambling is legally permitted! Even if you win millions, or even hundreds of millions, no one will touch you; you're guaranteed to be safe and sound in Macau! Preventing gamblers from leaving after winning money?

Wow, this is ridiculous! Didn't the author do any research before writing the casino plot? Even a simple Baidu search wouldn't reveal a story where winning tens of thousands gets you noticed by the casino owner, then winning millions leads to being threatened into participating in a gambling king competition.

Your writing is good, and your writing style is excellent. The protagonist isn't a lunatic or a narrow-minded fanatic. Your downfall lies in your lack of experience. For example, your approach to things like the "God of Gamblers" competition is almost child's play, and the same goes for short video software. Developing software of this complexity requires at least 20 weeks, even with teamwork.

Having money but not daring to tell their parents, seeing their parents work so hard—if the money's source were illegal, that would be one thing, but money from a legal source is something they're afraid to mention? I have utter contempt for authors who write about protagonists who are rich but hide the source of their wealth.

This is a simplistic, light-hearted story with no exciting moments. The author's perspective is limited, and the book reads rather childishly.

I suspect the author's writing is completely detached from reality. Buying a 2000 RMB computer is one thing, I won't complain. But a casino cutting off hands for 1 million RMB, and a gambling tournament with a 10 million RMB prize? Military training with an hour of standing at attention, a five-minute break, then the cycle repeats?