The Dad’s Otherworldly Restaurant

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As a food writer, going out to gather material is a perfectly legitimate reason! [Daily Life] As a full-time writer and a complete homebody, with a girlfriend who's also a homebody... I have virtually no social life, and my biggest motivation for going out is finding food! Hot pot, maocai (a type of Sichuan street food), skewers, cold pot fish, Mapo tofu, bobo chicken, fatty intestine noodles...

[Entry Contestant] I'm here to offer my congratulations. One of the pioneers of the restaurant system novel genre.

Sigh, I want to see Qingyu in women's clothing again. It's so painful. I want to see it again. Does anyone else feel the same way? If so, please support me!

Dude, if you're going to say kids are cute, how can you just say "That little girl is so cute"? What exactly does she mean by cute? You need to describe it! There's absolutely no imagery. Details, details! Some language and gestures, like: /Her little fists clenched on her hips, her big eyes wide, her eyelashes fluttering, her little pointed ears twitching, a "humph," a turn of her head and her…

This is hilarious; they've even deleted the posts now. Doesn't the author have any idea whether the later chapters are padded or not? If you want to make a living, fine, but don't padded so much. I've read over a thousand chapters, and at most 600 are actual plot points; the rest are just filler or rambling. I don't even want to read the later ones. And I'm not even allowed to say anything? Tell newcomers to think carefully before reading the paid chapters.

I read this book when I was in junior high school, I read this book when I was in high school, and now that I'm working, this book is still on my bookshelf.

Is it finally finished? At least 2.9 Million of the 5.29 Million words are filler, 700,000 words are dry and padded, and only 1.69 Million words are the essence. I gave up after reading over a thousand chapters. After all, I came to read a book, not to look at a sea of ​​water. I hope the next book won't be so padded.

I still have over 200 chapters left to finish, but I just can't continue... The writing style is okay, but it's too weak. Often, reading a chapter feels like I haven't read it at all. The author tries to cram too much content in, resulting in a disjointed and ultimately poorly written story. Here are my personal triggers: 1. I really can't stand harem novels.

Factors that discourage readers from reading this novel: 1. The daughter's character is unconvincing; it's obvious the author lacks experience interacting with children. The character is flat and hollow. 2. The food descriptions are unconvincing; similarly, the author clearly lacks a passion for cooking and the dedication to mastering it. 3. The work's focus is unclear.