Joan the Mage

This book can be called a qualified DND article, but it cannot be called an excellent online article. 1. Lack of highlights As a mage, the essence lies in the release of spells. But I felt like the mage combat in this book completely lacked creativity. For example, the phantom sound technique can be used very coolly in stealth operations. It can simulate the enemy commander's orders, farts, cat meows, etc. Grease can be set on fire to increase damage. When the Razor Boar slides past Grease, it can be set on fire. Stone Shaping can fix the enemy's feet with stones when they pass through the swamp, and then shoot them. When the cavalry charged, a low stone wall blocked the front, causing the horses to stumble and blocking the charge. 2. Lack of cool points. People who like DND will feel so awesome and cool when they see Tears of God. But ordinary readers don't have such a big reaction. The caster fight here is like you hit me, I hit you, and then they get close to melee, poke their eyes, and bite their necks. Is this what a mage should do? The mage should be cold and cold, using his wisdom to trap his enemies. For example, to fight the Wild Boar Prince, you can find a big stone, cast the shrinking spell, and when you throw it into the wild boar's mouth, cast a magnification spell, and then cancel the shrinking spell. The big rocks can also be replaced with bombs, caltrops, or some destructive spells can be added to them. This way you can show off after you finish the fight. You, who is covered in blood after beating the mage, do you think you are Naruto? All the strength has been lost 3. Lack of exciting battles. Following the above point. For example, in the battle between Dragon and Snake, both parties are spellcasters, so it can be a very exciting battle. For example, the dragon and snake girl cast a wild laughter spell, and then the mage blocked it with a spider on his clothes (changed the setting, and the wild laughter spell was a ray), but pretended to be laughing wildly, and used a backhand to break the dragon snake girl's wings, causing her to fall from the air. The dragon and snake girl canceled the magic, canceled the mage's transformation, and made him fall. Seeing that he was about to fall to death, the mage transformed into a tree man and drank the magic potion. Instead, he crushed the dragon and snake girl to death. This kind of reversal and battle is more of a battle of wits and courage, and can show the wisdom of the mage. I feel that the current mage's understanding of spells cannot match the level of 24 points of intelligence. Is what he has increased really been intelligence? I suggest the author read "Heart of Canaan". The battle between mages in it is really exciting, especially when the protagonist fights the black flame mage and understands what a battle between mages is.

This book is based on the concept of "testing poison", non-toxic, and not old and miserable, but it does not belong to the Long Aotian type or the hot-blooded type. It belongs to the slow-burning type that you can read with your head. It is recommended to read a few chapters before abandoning it if you don't like it. The protagonist's character is well described. Many female friends feel that they don't know which one is the main palace, but the descriptions are very good. Let's treat them as wings and become angels. 😁

A grand and rigorous worldview is the basis for a novel to surpass ordinary online novels. After a while, there will always be people who get tired of online novels that combine unreasonable settings and excessive pursuit of the pleasure of upgrading, and turn to great works with a grand and rigorous world view. This novel is the best quality work I have seen among dnd novels. The Qidian website should pay more attention to such rare works. I advise the author to continue to be cautious with the content in the book. Although it is already the most successful DND novel I have ever read, I hope that this book can continue to improve the world of Vasre, so that the author can create new stories based on this book in the future. Although I have not read The Court of the Far East, this does not prevent me from appreciating the grand world of Vasilei composed of two very long novels.

A very good work, with the same rigorous style as the Far East. Personally, I feel that the plot is the core of a novel. In the early years, Taoda's works had more twists and turns in their plots. Now, although the style has changed to adapt to the market, can the plot be more prominent on a rigorous basis? In addition, I would like to ask in what aspects does Peach Blossom University use to construct a more rigorous world? I also want to draw a fanart atmosphere map for this book in the future. Do you have any suggestions?😃

Post your thoughts after reading Chapter 121. First of all, this book is a rare traditional master fantasy book that complies with DND rules; Secondly, although it is a book with strict settings, it does not get into boring rule descriptions. The story is written with flesh and blood, the text is relatively sophisticated, the emotions are real and not artificial, the emotional details are well received, and there are no redundant explanations. Finally, let me talk about the current shortcomings or suggestions. It is best to reduce the setting things or the length. Reading is really focused on the story and emotional expression. It is taboo to write these things in long paragraphs. This kind of writing is boring. The best way to write is to slowly and gradually integrate into the story, rather than show it out. If the setting could be more streamlined, it would be a rare masterpiece.

Four chapters of recommendation votes. I hope this book doesn't have so many financial lessons.

Thanks to Far East Book for your long-term companionship. I believe the author's new work will be more exciting and interesting.

A group of rich people who are not short of money go hunting wild boars for a few thousand gold coins and medals, risking a 10% to 20% mortality rate? Then he casually gave the gold coins to the protagonist... What are the wealthy people trying to do?

It's obviously a fusion of American colonial history and dnd. It's a good idea, but it's too historical and doesn't feel like dnd. In DND, senior professionals are the protagonists of the world. What are capitalists? How many magic circles do you know? Colonization is no problem, but what about the senior professionals who support it? Where are the Archmage and Legendary Mage? Without these colonists to open up a new world, you're kidding me. The same goes for the protagonist who is studying at a magic academy. How can a small local trade union prevent Master from finding a job? Could it be that these people can automatically refresh the magic scroll? Normally, the master of DND is the biggest capitalist and the biggest boss. What is the industry union? If you don't serve the master well, you want to buy scrolls and do business? The red-robed wizards will understand that the low-level mages inside are quite miserable, but externally they are all great masters. Without the support of the mages, how can you develop a colony? The result is great here. Master has become a humble laborer. Look at Fangwai Zhiyi next door, who is also developing a colony. There are no great mages or even legends behind the forces there. This is the normal pattern of the DND world. Unless there are so many mages that the streets are ruined, the profession of mages must be at the top of the food chain.

In fact, the protagonist is really quite hypocritical. As a descendant of aberrant blood, he has a convert's enthusiasm for humans, so he struggles too much and is always afraid of deviating from the position of humans. Real humans don't overthink like him when faced with a choice. He can neither "man-made the spirit of all things" nor "the world is unkind and treats all things as stupid dogs". He claims that his rational reality is always illusory, and he also likes to think about grand narratives, so he deserves to be entangled to death.