The Everyday Hero

Many people say it is bland and tasteless, but I think it is just a steady stream. How can there be so much mindless pretense in daily life, and the beauty in the ordinary is endlessly memorable (can I say it is because the appearance setting is very interesting to me? The right "pretend" makes me feel very comfortable. Especially station B is really a very pleasing point. It is not as smelly as the live broadcast platform, and it can also show the aspect of appearance). I always feel that this is not the first time for the author to write online articles, at least for me, the rhythm is really good. Secondly, I think the identity of Chiba Synergy at Night can be expanded. I always feel that there should be more scenes here, instead of just being an interactive link with Chiba. Of course, these are my personal opinions. I hope the author can stick to his own creative ideas and not be coerced by some malicious comments. Because it is a free entry, I can only give a small reward to express my excitement. It is really a good book!

I would like to give the author a suggestion. In terms of the ratio between upgrades and the life department, I suggest you add more upgrade content, because the life department requires a lot of life knowledge and experience. If your writing style or experience is not good, you will not be able to write good content. Instead of doing this, it is better to focus on upgrading and supplement life, right?

First of all, I would like to apologize to everyone for waiting for so long. I am also very sad that this situation has occurred. On the one hand, it took me a long time to get over my last book. I had been preparing that book for more than half a year, and I couldn't get rid of the regret that I couldn't finish it. It wasn't until I got sick recently and my brain was confused for a long time that I suddenly realized that I couldn't stay where I was and hesitate any longer. Over such a long period of time, I wrote several beginnings and a dozen drafts one after another, but the results were not satisfactory. Of course, this does not mean that the new book that will be released soon will meet my expectations. In fact, I am never satisfied with the work before I start a book, and I always feel that the next idea will be better. But I know that this idea that the next one is better is actually wrong. Therefore, my book will always stay in a very initial stage and then be replaced by the next idea. As for the third reason, it is still related to real life, so I won't elaborate on it too much. The new book will probably have an academic style and focus on daily practice (I guess the rhythm will remain the same as the previous book, I personally don't like too hasty narrative rhythm), but the combat system, world background, and power background will be completely different. Please understand. When the book is released, I will leave a message in the comment area and notify everyone of the opening chapter. I'm really grateful to those who have been supporting me until now. Thank you very much.

Isn't it on the shelves today? Why was it taken off the shelves?

I announced the purchase of a large amount of Teacher Qin's shares 😁😁, and Yuzi's mission of catching fish in river basins all over the world is also very good. I look forward to the plot of Xiaoguan going on a trip in the future. I have always loved reading novels about food, travel, and daily life, including the chapter about Bozi Soda. When I saw this chapter, I said, some people talk about water, but I think life is just like this. Where can there be so many ups and downs, most of them are still long and thin water, and this kind of writing is very delicate. As long as Yuzi doesn't collapse in the later stage, I will keep chasing him!! (whisper bb: I hope some of the plot arrangements are not too deliberate, such as a mission to act bravely, and something happens around the protagonist in a few days and he needs to be rescued, which is comparable to someone who will never grow up) I am an elementary school student, but in fact, we ordinary people basically don't encounter much crime or anything like that. This kind of feeling is very routine. Of course, the above is just a personal suggestion. If anyone disagrees, then I am wrong 😁😁)

I want to improve it. Author, you can figure it out.

After it was put on the shelves, there was obviously not much content about the system or upgrades until around 180 years old. Some of them reappeared. Before the shelves were put on the shelves, the upgrades and daily writing were interspersed. After the shelves were put on the shelves, it was obvious that a large section was composed of daily articles, without upgrades as a support for the content. If the writing is not good, it will feel a bit like a running story... But it is a bit difficult if the protagonist has been strong all the time and there is no other extraordinary content in the world (it can't always be about saving people, so what? The appearance of the saint in front of a small person can be a good climax, but it is too exaggerated and feels boring) (deviating from the purpose of daily writing) But I think the author's part about the upgrading of military force is really good. The attraction of Tai Chi and the mention of the future "Shenra Tianzheng" in the article can give people a good feeling of upgrading (growth). This is very attractive and gives me the motivation to continue reading... And there is a feeling. The plot part... The author should be careful... The back of the Little World book really made me feel a little uncomfortable (it's a bit not to my taste, but there will always be people who like it, right? It's always hard to explain...) But this is a good book, I have recommended it and gave it a monthly pass, please support it, come on💪

I read a book review saying that Yuzi was unfortunately infected. I don't know if it's a joke. If not, I must work hard and get better!

The storm part was very awkward to read, the author must not be familiar with the seaside climate. To popularize science, tropical cyclones, also known as typhoons, are completely different from tornadoes. When a typhoon is generated, its intensity does not reach a very strong level immediately. It takes dozens of hours to slowly intensify. The intensity of a newly born typhoon is not very high. Tornadoes are just the opposite. They are very powerful when they are generated, but their impact range is not as large as a typhoon's radius of hundreds of kilometers. In addition, after a typhoon is formed, it will be included in the radar surveillance, and the warning may have been issued hundreds of kilometers away. It will definitely not be suddenly issued and have a big impact immediately like in the novel.

The writing is very good and the rhythm is well controlled. Good luck to the author.