I Have a Doomsday City

The main story of this book is that the protagonist Song Jian is an orphan and has suffered from various problems since childhood. Enter the game and recognize your father everywhere. You can upgrade by killing monsters for free, and you will get doomsday coins for equipment and skills.

This book has a lot of bugs and the details are garbage. 1. Professional bug. Is the Swordmaster a legendary or epic profession? But there are no professional passive skills or talents. I guess the author took the sword wielder as the protagonist's temporary over-occupation, so he didn't even bother to think about the professional skills. Even the active skills learned from the sword wielder tutor were copied from Jin Yong's novels and LOL Raven's Q skills. 2. After the protagonist contracts the little black dragon, the system notifies the protagonist that he is the first player to obtain a pet and needs to maintain the upgrade system and issue rewards. This is obviously contradictory to the previous one where Ke'er got the pet Xiaozi, not to mention that the protagonist had 9000+ players before, so it shouldn't be the protagonist's turn to get the first pet. I can't stand it anymore when I see this. If the author can't write down the details well, he shouldn't write this kind of game article or attribute article, otherwise it will be completely unreadable.

The settings are pretty good, but there are a lot of issues. First of all, the existence of the little girl, the first fourth grade student, does not have the IQ of my niece who is 6 years old. At least she wouldn't say something like (eat meat, fragrant meat). Secondly, the preface often does not match the postscript. I said earlier that he has reached level 6. I don't know if he has been upgraded in the middle, but he is at least level 6, but he will become level 4 in the next chapter. What is going on with you? If you don't have an outline, at least look at what you have written before writing the next chapter. But you don't. Then, the protagonist's EQ and IQ are not as high as mine in high school, so I understand why he sends flyers. Do all newcomers have to send flyers? I guess it's fake! It was a waste of bullets from the beginning, and there were all kinds of tricks in the middle. The IQ was 3 at the beginning, which was also a foreshadowing. Otherwise, you can see for yourself later.

Firstly, the introduction has been smashed to pieces by you since you met Ke'er. I suggest you change it. Secondly, please, author, please write an outline. This is not a running account. Many things were foreshadowed in the past and then disappeared later. Did you forget or did you deliberately dig a hole and not fill it? The third skill equipment monster data looks very messy. For example, in the maze, the level 20 BOSS is called Red Fire Beast and later called Wisp. At the same time, after earning 5,000 doomsday coins and going home, when it is time to spend money, it is inexplicably gone. It is messy and tiring. Fourthly, I feel that the IQ of the pig's feet has been weakened a lot by the author.

Is this a doomsday novel? It looks like a game novel, but when it reaches almost 1,000 chapters, it feels like it is about to become a novel about cultivating immortals. With the addition of artificial intelligence, it is almost completely different. There are also some problems with the plot. For example, the Charm of the Abyss can be used as the third level, but it will still be used later, and it will be no problem. Also, the sixth level of the manor can be upgraded to the first level of the gathering place, but the gathering place level is gone. And many things are foreshadowed in the front, but not filled in later. For example, the shelter was just built, the tree, the tree shepherd profession, the protagonist did not respond once, he might rebel and suffer heavy losses, but nothing happened. There is also the 101 gathering place and the organization called Reaper of Gods (I don't remember the name of this organization, it's been a while) and there is no follow-up to the pursuit of the protagonist. Also, why did Duan Jian, the protagonist's mentor, smile evilly after the protagonist became a sword master and left? There is no plot happening later, and the fat man mentioned by Duan Jian should be able to lead a plot, but there is nothing at the end. Finally, to summarize, the author is not good at foreshadowing and has many small problems. He is not comparable to some level 5 writers. It may be because he has not saved the manuscript or other reasons. If he cannot fill in the holes, I hope he will not do so much foreshadowing. But the overall plot is okay, which is why I can continue to watch it. Also, this book is positioned as a doomsday type, but when you look at it later, it becomes completely different, and you can't see any shadow of doomsday. Either the author's positioning is wrong, or I may not have seen where it's coming from. Finally, I would like to make a statement. I only commented after reading more than a thousand chapters, and these are just some of my personal opinions after reading so many chapters. If you don't like it, please don't comment. Thank you.

I couldn't stand this book until I reached Chapter 5. Many authors below level 5 don't understand why their data is so poor. One reason is that when you want to write something funny, you often just write the protagonist as mentally retarded. But being mentally retarded does not mean being funny.

I saw someone in the comments saying that the title of the book is actually nothing. What the author wanted to express may be that the protagonist chose this title after upgrading the safe house to a city in the later period. I have read many books like this. It is similar to the infinite flash kill in online games. Whoever you can kill in the early stage will have to wait until the middle and later stages. It is not a brainless white article, so I feel there is no need to criticize it. However, I am confused by the logic of the author's setting. Let's just say that the tree servant is not very obedient. The first time you devour the loot that fell from the explosion, you should at least ask about it, and then get the owner's permission before devouring it. If there is anything better, it will be gone. , Or set it to the protagonist after the battle to see if there are any good things, and devour the worthless ones for you. You can make some money by selling those, so that the protagonist's strength can be improved at least one step faster than others. However, most of the loot in that battle was swallowed by the tree. It gives me the feeling that the author clearly allows the protagonist to have adventures one after another, gives the protagonist cheats, and then forcibly slows down the protagonist's strength improvement. Shouldn't the gap get bigger and bigger if you use cheats? I found that this is the case in many places, such as the Demonized Ant King, who grows up and then leaves? Wouldn't it be equivalent to cutting off one of the protagonist's hands? Wouldn't it be easy if the ant emperor helped fight the boos? In this way, the gap has widened again, but why did it need to be cut off? The author should reflect on it. Since the hook is enabled, don't suppress it too hard, just suppress it a little. Otherwise, how can you call him a protagonist, right?

Don't read the ten comments when reading a book. The nine stupid comments are all comments that are not good or bad before you have finished reading the author's aftermath. Then they will affect your mentality and say it is too poisonous. In fact, although this book is said to be a bit poisonous, it is not as poisonous as they say. If you are a book lover, you can still read it or you are a new reader. Nowadays, most old bookworms are bookworms. Just like I have been reading books for seven years. At the beginning, I was not worried that there were not enough books, but that I was not reading fast. And the author's update speed. Now I don't worry about the lack of new good books. I look for good books that are slow to update, and I can't find other books. I usually look for hours and can't find them. When I find them, I am influenced by some people's comments about how they say they are too toxic. I persuade them to return a few chapters and say whether the protagonist is good or not. Then when I read the book, I will subconsciously look at the flaws of the protagonist, and my subconscious will amplify them. In fact, some flaws have no impact on the entire book. Let me complain to the author about some big loopholes. None of these apocalyptic novels are based on reality because there are no zombies in reality. There is no apocalypse. It is impossible for the author to travel through the world and experience it before writing a book for you. He can only rely on his own imagination. Many people are not twisted and dark in their hearts and do not save others just for profit. And the author does not have such a dark and twisted human nature. His inner subconscious has changed his way of writing books, which is not so dark. In fact, this book is an apocalyptic novel and the main character is not that stupid. This is quite acceptable. If you feel that the main character is stupid or the author's thinking is too crazy, you can give feedback to the author. Then you can think better and talk to the author together so that the author can improve more and avoid the author's aftermath at the end of the book. If you don't read it, you will just make random complaints and get into the author's mentality. After all, the author's imagination alone is not that strong. In fact, this book can be read without being as stupid as those little white texts. I still recommend reading it if you are short of books because most people are short of books now.

What about Chapter 1019? Is the author great? ?

Using my 10 years of experience in novels, this book has a good plot. Please update it. I feel that the subject matter is good and it is quite attractive to read.

What kind of rubbish is written? I saw the little girl in Chapter 10 and was persuaded to quit. Didn't I say it was my own doomsday city? The title of the book was a lie.

The author is too holy. I have something to share with others. I don't dare to kill people. I have objections to killing. I have all kinds of holy mothers. If the subject matter is not good, I really want to delete it.

The more I watch, the more boring I become. Is this a game for one person?

The world is yours. If you cannot control the trees you plant, it means there is something wrong with your control and logic🤨

I want to ask, did Loli die in the end? If it's not dead, don't watch it, or maybe change it.

There is usually no good end to trying to sell something like a sheep's head. After reading the introduction, I thought it was unique to the protagonist, but it turned out to be a game played by at least tens of thousands of people. In an instant, many people felt cheated, and their favorable impressions dropped slowly. After reading the book, you will read it with emotions. It will be better if you change the introduction.

Why add a quirky little girl! Why! ! Why! ! !

I read Chapter 94 and was poisoned to death. There is nothing I can do. I spent all my money on a tree spirit guard and it still didn't obey. I just grabbed the equipment that the master exploded. I didn't get any experience points even in a defensive battle.

The last ending was so bad... I didn't expect it... I advise you not to read it. The first one is fine. If you don't want to write about the second one, just treat it as the ending... And no one will. I was quite disappointed after reading it. I was expecting what would happen if it affected reality... But I ended up showing you this...

Recommended votes, please give me recommended votes 😭😭😭

What surprises me most about this book is that even now, there is no female protagonist. This is the only advantage of this book, and the others are gone.

I thought I could do it, after all, the settings looked pretty good! However, I persisted until almost two hundred chapters in and I was about to be poisoned to death! ! ! To be honest, although I am a female reader, I always read books from the perspective of the protagonist! This protagonist can't get any benefits from the halo! He gives people things, acts as a babysitter, and escorts them everywhere! And the protagonist himself doesn't have as good a chance as the supporting actor! All the good stuff goes to the supporting characters! The protagonist is either tricked to the point of internal injury or is treated like a fool! ! Ahhhhhhhh! ! ! The more you talk, the angrier you get! ! !

There are too many situations that you can set by yourself. I guess the author doesn't even know what he wrote before.

It's extremely poisonous 1. It was agreed that one person's doomsday city would be accessible to others, but others could also enter it. What's this? 2 The man didn't save him and the woman licked him desperately. He was able to leave but he didn't come back because of a little girl who tried to kill him twice. 3. When the girl was chased by zombies, the kite would have disappeared according to the characteristics of the weapon. She would be alert and happy for a while. Is a little girl worse than a security guard in the apocalypse? 4. Say goodbye. You really treated me like a poison bottle.

Written by someone who didn't graduate from high school? The logic is messed up. I just said that the health dropped by 90% and the attack was only 10%. I immediately killed someone of almost the same level. . . I am also speechless. . . Abandoned! !

I can't stand it! A bunch of bugs and a bunch of pitfalls!

Except for being slower, everything else is good. There is nothing poisonous about it. Come on, bald man.

Chapter 4: Death from poison, a novel routine from seven or eight years ago. It's better not to look at it

The author writes very well, the subject matter is novel, the writing skills are sophisticated, the IQ of the pig's feet reaches the level of wisdom, not the Virgin Mary, the world structure of the book is reasonable, there are no bugs, and the introduction is also very good. I give ten points. It is very suitable for the enlightenment education of infants and young children. Come on💪. Disadvantages: There are a few flaws in the description. I suggest the author go to elementary school and re-study, so that he can write better.

Damn, have I read this book? ? ? ?