The Pokemon Youngster in Shorts

The protagonist wants to adopt a fighting pet. If you have any good suggestions, please leave a message downstairs.

The protagonist's name has a lot of meaning if you understand it in Japanese. Mumu means multiple trees in Japanese There is a saying: Don't hang yourself from a tree That (tree = woman) Liangren means husband in Japanese [Mumu Liangren=husband of many trees=husband of many women]? . . . What are you implying, author?

I want to ask, am I the only one who has a feeling about this book? Every time I open it, I want to read it but I can't stand it. Delete it! I feel it's a pity that I have the urge to open it every time, but when I do open it, I can't stand it. I summarized that this may be the shortcomings and advantages of this book (funny🤪). It is very interesting to read, but maybe I have read too many novels, and I have no patience for some novels with too slow pace. But this book has been on my bookshelf for a long time without being deleted, which proves that this book is very good. It just requires some patient readers,😅😅😅. PS: (The reason why I posted this post is simply that I couldn't bear it anymore. The author said that you haven't even finished the first semester of middle school after writing more than 400 chapters. You wrote more than 20 chapters for a club competition!! 😆😆) Don't worry about why I only read more than 400 chapters. It's just that I can't stand it until halfway through. I can read it for so long intermittently, which is good.

The author's writing is quite good. I don't know why some people keep making fun of it here. Unlike other Pokémon fan fiction, it's not like the kind of talent that suddenly becomes king-level or something. The talents of each Pokémon under his hands are as if they are invincible. The writing is very warm and good, and makes people want to read it! I support you, I support you, I support you. 👍👍👍! ! !

The author's writing ability is much better than that of the previous book, but it still seems inconsistent. The author writes about mobile phones, chat software, payment software Zhizhibao, shared bicycles, taxi-hailing software xxHitch, as well as live streaming software, cartoons like the story of Ring Bear, and some movies. These things make me feel that what I am reading is not a PM article. The sense of violation is too strong. In many places, I feel that this is a piece of writing that combines the settings of Pokémon with reality. The writing in other places is okay and more reasonable.

I have read some. I have been exposed to Pokémon for 7 or 8 years. I have also read a lot of fan fiction, but the cultivation of Pokémon in this novel is a bit strange? This gives me the feeling that the author doesn't seem to understand Pokémon. Why did Pidgey have to practice physical attack first? Pokémon fans who know the settings of Pokémon Mega basically know that Pidgeot Mega takes the special attack route. The plot is a bit delayed, but in the later stages it becomes a bit like the kind of mindless pretense and slap-in-the-face novel. If I were to write about the original Pokémon world setting, I would still prefer a plot where Ash goes on a trip like that. If you want to write a college-style novel, I suggest you write an urban Pokémon novel. In fact, I feel good about the urban background (except for the disgusting person who slaps the disgusting person in the face) and the original world background (except for the disgusting person who gives the mythical beast at the beginning). After all, most fan fiction belongs to the category of novice writing, and it is impossible to write as well as a master like Mao Ni. Currently being updated include the leader of Qingquan and Tingshu, Teacher Lu from Beichuan, the supporting role of Silent Elf, the Fifth Heavenly King, the Top of the Mountain... The ones that have been completed include Darkness Rising, Aaron, the legendary trainer... These are already the highest quality elven texts currently available. Personal opinion: You can actually watch it without thinking. It is suitable for those newbies who have never been exposed to Pokémon. Old players can't stand it. The poison points are a bit fatal. You can still read it if you don't have enough books. My request: As long as the setting in Pokémon is not adapted and the writing is too disgusting, it can still be read. It is considered average among Pokémon novels.

①Silly Hippopotamus——MEGA Silly Hippopotamus

I immediately ordered it and couldn't stand it anymore. I won't say much about the setting and writing. These are all decided by the author. I don't like dark genres, but the Qingshui-like plot coupled with frequent pretense and slaps in the face are not my cup of tea. The biggest dissatisfaction with this book is that the protagonist looks like everyone in this world is stupid and only I know best. However, I don't see it from the plot, where do you understand it? I just hit my head and an idea comes from nowhere, and then I am right. I got it right the last time I tried it, but it just didn't work. There is also a plot at the beginning where Bobo practices physical attack which is very strange. As a time traveler, Mega Bi Diao should know. And even if you don't take mega into account, Bi Diao has more special attack skills than physical attack skills. The strength of special attack and physical attack is basically the same. Consider mega a sure special attack. Also later on, Bobo was not defended, saying that it was special development to avoid mediocrity. I didn't look too far behind, so I didn't know what this golden finger looked like. But if there is no upper limit, it will definitely be full. If there is an upper limit, can you add physical attack? If you can't wash it, then the carving will be ruined, right? There are too many questions like this. It feels like the author doesn't know much about Pokémon. It's not just the game settings, it doesn't match the animation settings either. I personally feel that if you write a Pokémon fanfic, you have to have at least one side of the anime and game specials, otherwise it won't be a Pokémon fanfic, but it will become a Pokémon novel fanfic (or maybe a fanfic of a second-gen fanfic?). If you insist on writing about fantasy, it's better to write about fantasy. It will be a bit disgusting for serious Pokémon fans. Although I didn't order everything, I spent a little money and complained a little bit. If the author doesn't like it, just delete it.

I would like to discuss the identity of the protagonist's brother. According to the description in the recent chapter, the protagonist's brother Toya is currently a quasi-god trainer. When he graduated from the intermediate school, he was already three stars in the arena. In order to win over Toya, Kanto directly sent a quasi-god Yukira. Toya wanted to give Yukira to the protagonist, but the protagonist refused because he didn't want to waste his brother's opportunity. Then here comes the problem. Although I like this comparison now, judging from Toya's strength, it is a bit unreasonable for Bobo to be the initial elf of the beloved. When Bobo was chosen as the protagonist at the beginning, he explained that the family was a commoner and could not afford the initial baby tax. It was not that he disliked the Yusan family. Taking the one-star Liangren Arena as an example, there were tens of millions when there were many of them, and currently there are more than six million. When Momoya graduated from middle school, she already had three stars in the arena. You can imagine how much a game costs in an arena. When I first opened the book, based on the author's description, I thought that the beloved brother was a researcher with "special" interests, so I didn't dare to let the Toya Gang choose the initial elf. As soon as he appeared, he was a genius trainer. With such a brother, it would be a bit "forced to be a commoner" by giving the good man a civilian start. From the fact that Liangren can help Mushan help find the dragon bone, it can be seen that Liangren is not a pedantic person and is willing to owe others favors, let alone his own brother. In terms of the choice of initial elves, compared with a Yu Sanjia with high probability of excellent qualifications and a Bobo with uncontrollable qualifications, I feel that a good person would not choose Bobo. So it doesn't feel very reasonable to assign Toya the identity of a genius trainer. Note: I just want to discuss the logic, and generally speaking, the shorts boy is still very readable in the pm article. So please go away.

The author who came from Bug Catching Boy wrote a book. There is no cheating protagonist or stupid villain. The writing is very real and high-level. Subscribed