There's a Xianxia World in My Home

If nothing else, compared to the elements, there are a lot more female characters, but the facial expressions are too serious. It can be said that there are no memorable ones. After pushing a lot, it is like pushing the figures. The only one who has some impression is probably the King of Angels... And the focus of the narrative is very strange... The last book and even the middle period have been promoted all the way without any ups and downs. Although you have written several books, your progress must be seen in each book. It is not good if you are even regressing. Writing a book really requires an outline. Don't write just as soon as you start writing. And don't just have an outline like the last book, but also have detailed outlines.

Suddenly a new book was released. It seems that the performance of Krypton Gold Hero is not good. I was originally hoping to write 2 million words like Tower of Elements.

After chasing the krypton gold, I'm chasing new books again. Please leave your name first 2333

It's so poisonous. The title is Xianxia World. I saw a few pictures of the game world. It's so poisonous that I spent more than 100 points to complain about it.

The quality plummeted after it was put on the shelves. Things with tens of thousands of merits exploded immediately. I got first place in the assessment for no reason. I got 700,000 experience for no reason. I got special rewards for no reason. It was embarrassing.

From the beginning of my reincarnation, I felt something was wrong. A protagonist who was such a bad guy actually arranged to be reincarnated. His realm was unclear. It made my scalp numb.

It's a short story, the theme is good, but the author's logical skills and social experience are very poor. I stopped reading after reading 200. A world is about to be destroyed and occupied. The protagonist's sister becomes a star. There are even groupies. I don't know if you are trying to make up for the word count or you are just out of your mind.

It was a good subject matter, but the author made me see intelligence and retardation.

It would be better to write as few disgusting plots as possible, as they drive away many people, and there are many depressing plots that do not contribute to the main plot. For example, the protagonist gave precious meat to his parents to improve his body, but the parents didn't know the value and gave it away, but his body was still weak. Another example is the strengthened clothes drying pole I lost it because I was stupid, and I couldn't find it after looking for it for a long time. Now it has been picked up by someone and sold at a high price. Many plots can be skipped lightly and an explanation can be given after the incident. Can a detailed description of the protagonist's depression, regret, anger but inability to express it in detail like this make the protagonist's image more three-dimensional? Or make this world more real?

I feel like I can still save something... Forget it, I'll go with peace of mind! I read it for ten minutes and read a few chapters. Let's talk about my personal opinions here! The subject matter is not new. The biggest problem was that the first few chapters gave me the impression that the logic was illogical. The protagonist's thinking was different from that of ordinary people, and he was like an emperor. 1: I went in and killed the monsters and dropped the beautiful ingredients. I took them out and cooked them for fear of being poisoned and lost them. The dirt I brought back from my shoes felt like a treasure and was hidden in the refrigerator. Second, the protagonist first felt distressed about a thousand yuan mobile phone and then went online and spent ten thousand yuan to buy a set of protective clothing. Then buying a bag that costs 100 yuan means that the price of the bag is very cheap? Then he introduced that the monthly rent of his house is 6,000, and his salary is 10,000? When I picked up my mobile phone, I would like to say that it would be a pity to lose the mobile phone I just bought? ? ? Third, after fighting monsters again, wild boar meat and dogmen were lost. Did the protagonist lose the wild boar meat? Get dog meat? Four, borrow 12 taels, earn 200 per day? (It seems like this) I don't know why, I don't know if I am a friend or an enemy, so I sign a forced IOU? I thought that I was the best of the Shennong clan because I had experienced hundreds of battles, but reality taught me that I was just a scumbag with poison resistance five! This book is definitely going to be a hit. Nowadays, novels are all in the same routine and are not interesting at all. How special the protagonist is! It's so impressive that it's engraved in my brain when I take a radio to express my gratitude to the author for his hard work in writing such a good article. A bow! Two bows! Three bows! The ceremony is over! That's it! My funeral is over! Let's all disperse!