This Spiritual Energy Is Deadly

I have been reading for two hours, and I have a preliminary understanding of the author and the work. Overall, the flaws are not concealed. Judging from the beginning, the author's word processing skills are very good, and he can control this kind of Crousu style work. The vocabulary is very precise, the writing is relatively transparent, and there is no useless information for the reader to sift through. However, the article still has some minor flaws in the program. The first skill to control the article is to plan the end of the article. Behavioral motivation is very important. Only with motivation can the character's behavior and thoughts stand up. The protagonist's motivations are not clear enough. Judging from the first hour of reading, the protagonist seems to have carried out a lot of things in a very orderly manner, which is very fulfilling, but the protagonist's decision-making at every step lacks clear motivations and is more of a forced business. Does he want to become stronger? Or want to find out whether the source of your plug-in is harmful? Or are we looking for a way to travel back in time? The author did not make it clear at the beginning. The article keeps arranging emergencies, life counts down, and there is no time to think. The protagonist has been passively coping without taking the initiative to create opportunities. The protagonist has always wanted to find the boss behind the scenes, but the reason is vague. It reads like he wants to uninstall the plug-in. So I hope the author can clarify in the outline what exactly the protagonist is going to do? Even a novice novel will clearly arrange various stepping stone plots to force the protagonist to have behavioral motivations to become stronger.

Even if I, Wang Jingze, can only play Quanqin! I also want to finish this crappy book! Please feel free to collect and watch!

This book is like Knives Out of the Sheath. The author's intention is to depict the entire world from the first perspective, just like a Russian matryoshka doll. He starts with the smallest one, and then adds details through supporting character descriptions to add a larger world view, layer by layer. The disadvantage is that the plot is too messy, like a matryoshka doll with a lot of wool hidden in the middle. It is annoying, and the gems must be forcibly pulled from the original world to be used as tools to kill gods, and the setting is forced. So he said it was a slap in the face, and I think he is serious.

The author actually wanted to write a story about the collision between modern times and Cthulhu, but the writing was actually not very good. It hasn't been too long since the book started, so I'd like to make some comments. First, there is no horror atmosphere at all, and I can't feel the fear of the incomprehensible monster. Just an ordinary monster. There is nothing but an extra intelligence-reducing halo. Secondly, since we are writing about Cthulhu, we can't make it the same as the upgrade stream. It's too white. What everyone sees in Cthulhu is to see the author's imagination. To put it bluntly, it's curiosity. More often than not, the plot is unimportant. The author obviously could have written it, but he didn't care at all. He treated it like a novice and upgraded it, which is very boring. For example, when I saw this lifespan at the beginning, I was really surprised. I felt that there were too many things that could be written about the protagonist in the modern era of Cthulhu with this unique lifespan display. For example, the ancient gods secretly grabbed the lifespan, and the protagonist was in various places (the airtight building is very good, it can be seen as a divided relic). With this lifespan, he can predict the time when the ancient gods here will wake up (the lifespan limit). You can also convert many things with the help of life span. As a result, I wrote a murderous intent exchange for life span, which was too nonsense, and the exchange ratio was too high. It can be said that the protagonist got through the Novice Village without any danger. It is simply impossible to write about the thrill of the protagonist constantly extending his life at the limit, and the protagonist can be said to trade his lifespan for things casually. In such a limited lifespan, shouldn't it highlight the protagonist's wisdom and sophisticated calculations? Under the limit, break through again and again, escape for your life, and avoid unknown monsters. Find out the rules of this place. The author made me feel like he was borrowing a bit of the Cthulhu style from the current starting point, and what he wrote has nothing to do with it.

To be honest, the writing is very good. I read the latest chapter in one night. It can be said that it is the best Cthulhu novel I have read so far. The plot is well controlled, preventing readers from seeing the direction of the plot, and the timeline is handled well. The metaphor of beads and ropes is very clever, and it seems that the second foundation has a different explanation, so look forward to it. At the same time, the treatment of gods and dependents is also very good, basically consistent with the feeling of being unknowable and invisible. The story is basically smooth, with the feeling that the truth is difficult to find out. The more clues there are, the more pitfalls there are. The stronger the technology, the weaker it becomes when faced with that indescribable existence. However, it does not really reach the point where the Cthulhu Mythos seems to be very strenuous, there is no need to fight, and it will go crazy when you see it. In the end, the reader will understand the paradox. It can be said that it is handled very well in an online novel. If all the pitfalls can be filled in smoothly, it will be a really, really good book. It is closer to Cthulhu originalism. Mortals have a good grasp of the powerlessness when facing gods. The tricks given to the protagonist also make the protagonist's uniqueness well reflected. Finally, the author seems to have some self-doubt, but in fact it is completely unnecessary. If you want to read a fantasy fantasy about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger or an urban romance about pretending to be a slap in the face, you really won't read this book. Write a good copy and round out the story. It is much more necessary than those plots. Come on, author.

This is about my doubts about the description of time in the book and my thinking about time. The book writes that time is a pseudo-concept. Time does not exist. Time is just a scale for people to observe changes in the universe. This concept is understandable. However, the description of the world as a string of pearls later conflicts with time being a pseudo-concept. Time is a pseudo-concept. What I understand is that we in the past have disappeared, just like a program that constantly replicates itself and then deletes the original file. The copied program is now, and the deleted one is In the past, you could use time to record two programs before and after copying, but the past program has disappeared. You cannot see the past program (disappeared) through time travel. Using pearls to have different time worlds means that you can use four-dimensional coordinates to represent the world. If you can time travel, it means that the past and the present exist in parallel, just like the two-dimensional coordinate system (length and width) after adding the concept of height becomes a three-dimensional coordinate system. Let's talk about the grandfather paradox of time travel. There are two conditions for the grandfather paradox to occur: 1. Being able to time travel and 2. Being able to kill the grandfather. I don't think parallel worlds are time travel. It's more appropriate to call it space travel, because when you arrive in a parallel world, it's not the past of your world. Assuming that time travel is really possible, will the grandfather paradox occur? There is a plot in the later period of "Xiling Empire" where the protagonist and his daughter from the harem travel through time. The method used is the father + mother = child method. Simply put, a pair of parents are born as children. Then by deceiving the world into thinking that the father + mother then gave birth to a child, the child born in the future appears in the present. At this time, there is an idea. If one of the father or mother dies, will the child still exist? I don't think it will exist. The grandfather paradox actually stipulates that you can kill your grandfather, so will you be able to kill your grandfather, and then the world will collapse instantly and time will go back to before your grandfather was killed? (This assumes that time travel is possible. If time is a pseudo-concept, time travel is not possible, just like you cannot drive to a place that does not exist)

I just started reading the subscription chapters, and I think the author's writing is actually very good. The plot is also very coherent and has a lot of foreshadowing. As for the issue of murderous intent raised by other readers, I think it is just a difference in the power system. If you accept the author's setting and read it quietly, you can understand the author's intention. To be honest, the author's achievements are not directly proportional to his subscription. I personally think this book is very good in the current era of novices. If you read it patiently, you will truly realize that this book is actually on par with Lord of Mysteries. What an immature view, it's ridiculous.

To be honest, my impression of this book was okay. The author obviously has a good story, but unfortunately, you can't tell it very well. The subject matter of New Ghost Story is indeed very novel, but the story of New Ghost Story relies more on narrative techniques than ordinary online novels. I personally think that the main problem with this book is that you add too many things to the story, which makes the climax of the story not obvious, or it is always in the atmosphere before the climax, so the reader's emotions are not well aroused. Higher highs don't do that effectively, only lows do. I hope the author will continue his efforts in the next book.

This book I just ordered recently is very well written. I hope the author will stick to this style. What surprised me the most was the 2006 chapter. I can tell that the author is an old gamer and can get a lot of points. The IQ of the protagonist is not low! ! ! It's just that I don't have access to much information. To paraphrase a sentence in the book, "What is common sense in the eyes of many senior executives is secret to ordinary people."

This plot reminded me of the first part of Prototype. The protagonist also woke up with residual blood in his face, and there were people chasing him. He also lost his memory. What's more, you thought I was Lin Mo, but in fact I am the mother body of the psychic virus!