Wasteland Search, Fight, Extract: I Became a Shelter

As a reader, you can understand the author's treatment of the player (Killer Awen), but if you put it from the player's perspective, I did not cheat, there was no malicious game, everything was within the rules of the game, but I was banned inexplicably. To be honest, this kind of plot has a bit of an impact on the perception of people who usually play games, and it makes them a little angry. Thinking about it, this is mainly due to the conflict between the world view designed by the author and the current gameplay. It is recommended that the author simply define search and extraction as searching for supplies, attacking hostile NPCs, and safely evacuating. NPCs are real people anyway, and theoretically the combat difficulty will not be much different. However, PVP elements are retained, but not as the main game experience. Players who kill people and seize treasures are wanted in the game. According to his attack Bounties are set for the number of players killed. The main gameplay can be designed to assist the outgoing team of the Ship of Theseus to complete searches, rescues, clear out bandits' dens, set up new safe houses, etc. Players can receive certain financial rewards for completing tasks. The materials searched during the mission will be sold after evacuation. In short, don't be too rigid in the general search, attack and withdrawal gameplay. After all, the situation in the novel is really different from the general search, attack and withdrawal. Of course, my idea may not be correct. I just hope to provide some help to the author.

The title was called Search, Fight, and Withdraw, but I didn't finish two chapters and changed it to an open world exploration. Then I couldn't write it anymore and changed it to a farming story. Halfway through the story, I changed it to an adventure story of the grievances and grievances of indigenous NPCs. Recently, I suddenly had a whim to create a future desert apocalypse in which the main character does not exist. I think of it one after another, just like those female video authors. The description of the plot is also very fragmented. When the plot reached its climax, it was suddenly put aside and turned to another line of close-ups. A pile of holes was dug and forgotten, and no one could remember to bury it. Remember, no reader will like multi-line descriptions because they are inconvenient to read.

I abandoned the book, and the settings are being changed all the time. As we go to the back, the settings become more and more complex and the plot becomes more and more complicated. Moreover, the settings are changed inexplicably and without any warning. Even the theme is changing. People are attracted by the search and withdrawal. What the hell is going on at the back? It feels like becoming a god again, inexplicable, giving up.

After reading more than 40 chapters, the protagonist felt that the economy was about to collapse and wanted to open a lottery to consume players' funds, but he thought he had no trump card... It really made me laugh. Isn't there a muscular woman and a new shooter man on hand who have not been added to the player character list? They can be directly put into the prize pool as new characters. Here... The top prize is directly given to the new character, and it is a limited skin. The other prizes are coupons for various weapons, equipment, and medicines, as well as coupons for various random weapons, equipment, and drugs. The final consolation prize is some clothes and decorations, and ten consecutive draws give new character fragments, 100 of which can be exchanged for new characters. How much money the protagonist wants to make depends on how dark the protagonist's heart is 🙂

Writing on gauze, why don't you do virtual reality? Why do you have to do something that breaks your mobile phone?

When I read the reviews before, I felt that it was a bad book, but after actually reading it, if you can ignore some of the more contradictory settings and random filling of values, the overall reading experience is actually okay. As a result, after the collider created the multiverse later on, the enjoyment began to drop sharply. In the latest chapters, the protagonist was even more exhausted. I don't think this kind of self-pleasure writing method is very desirable, and it also deviates from the setting of the novel itself. It is written in a foggy way, and there are some Riddlers. In fact, it is not suitable for the form of online novels. The full score is 10 points. If you give it 6 points in the early stage, then it will be about 7 points in the middle stage. Now the last few chapters, I estimate it is only 4~5 points. Really poorly written.

It's a mess, here it says that resources will be consumed when players die, but then they let players fight against each other, and don't let players collect resources and kill anthropomorphs.

I don't understand Taojiaozhou was scolded for being so stupid because of the evacuation point The author is also pursuing the design to a strict standard Those who play Taojiaozhou will definitely go to your comments to vent their emotions It's like turning their own readers' community into a garbage dump I'll attack you for killing 6/40 before evacuation You will lose 2/3 if you follow up Designed the rat character and forced him to fight Then Hezhou planned to go to a table

In order to attract traffic, the author has insufficient energy in the early stage, so it is a complete failure to set players to be able to PVP. You can set up PVE in the early stage, and open PVP at a certain level.

I just posted a comment not long ago (50 chapters ago) saying that it was very interesting, the third-line narrative is great, but there are some hidden dangers. How long has it been, a month? Man, I can't even understand what's written, and my grades have plummeted without even guessing. What are you doing, brother? If you can write a novel and the audience can't understand it, it's your first job.