A Mysterious World Under Steampunk Skies

The protagonist lost his memory in the dream world. After reading many chapters, he couldn't find it back. He was very depressed and wanted to know what kind of memory it was.

Also, the protagonist's power system is a bit unclear.

The biggest flaw in this novel, after I read at least 250 of it, is just four words: there is no main plot! The protagonist always goes with the flow. After getting involved in various things, he just plays there. After playing out, he doesn't know what to do. Then I walked around and inexplicably entered another event circle. In short, there was no upgrading flow like a normal novel. It didn't feel like it was mainly about improving strength. Instead, it felt like an adventure diary. It's not a question of slow popularity or not, it's a question of whether anyone likes to read this kind of novel with a complicated network of relationships. If someone likes to read it, then they must continue to read it. Some people just don't quite understand the various relationships in it and feel it is very complicated, so they don't want to use their brains to remember it. Because when the author wrote this book, he also wrote about small events one by one (similar to I am God!), Which means that after this event is over, you may not need to remember several people, but if you did remember them before, it is difficult for people to accept. It's okay to look at it when you're bored, but if you want to treat it as a normal grass jelly, then save it!

First of all, the signing of the new book has been completed. Congratulations to myself! Congratulations! The second issue is the update of the new book. Before it was put on the shelves, one chapter was updated every day, at 7pm, and the word count should be more than 4,000. After being put on the shelves, there should be two updates for a period of time, each chapter is more than 4,000, at 12:30 noon and 7:00 pm, or 7:00 pm and 11:00 pm, which one is more suitable? As for the ninth-rate idlers who don't know how to be eunuchs, they just focus on new books after get off work and can only find time to code a little while at work, so updates will be very unstable and there is no fixed time. I have also tried to imitate other people's dual-player, but there are always situations where the plot characters of the two books are confused. Xu Changqing will appear as a guest star in the new book for no reason, so as Cai Shaofen said, I can't do it! ! ! Finally, I hope we can spend another nine years together!

The protagonist does not improve his own strength and participates in useless things every day. It is unacceptable and he can accept his slowness. However, the protagonist is too independent. Strength is the king. Shouldn't biochemical people pursue power more? Then there is that old man who paid a negligible amount of words and asked the protagonist to go to such a dangerous world to get feathers. He is a typical uneasy and kind-hearted person and gives him feathers? It's a dream, what you give is not proportional to what you get, and there is an obvious concealment. The protagonist's life is not taken seriously at all. The protagonist is shocked when he comes out. If he has the strength, he should be killed by that old man. There is nothing wrong with it.

The male protagonist was quite intelligent at first. . I don't know why it happened later, maybe the author got married or something happened. It started from the male protagonist killing decisively alone to leading the cheerleading team to conquer the world. The female protagonist was quite independent at first, but later she became a cheerleader who followed the male protagonist to pick up things. . . This is leading the cheerleading team to conquer the world. Why do you ask? It's been a long time since I've been single to conquer the world, and I'm starting to feel uncomfortable and itchy.

First of all, Jiucheng-kun's ability to write stories is acceptable, but for some reason due to work, he added the wrong skill points over the years, and he went from a seedling who could become a great god to the water god he is today. Ninetowns' standard water methods are the extension method and the copy method. Pig's Foot meets passerby A while walking on the road. Generally, novels will briefly mention it and then continue with the main line. Nine Cities is different. It describes A's psychological history, blood origin, and family background, and then develops B, C, and D from A's body, and then unfolds it in the same way on Bcd's body. After describing it, you will continue to open dungeons and describe it to passers-by... Don't do this kind of writing anymore, okay? No one is interested in knowing about a side character who only appears once, so why don't you just write about the protagonist honestly? It can be said that the later period is getting more and more complicated. Can you tell the story well? Don't talk about the setting anymore. Moreover, there is no main line at all. The protagonist has no purpose at all. It is a big step back from the previous book.

Why are there no fan novels by Jiu Liu Xian Ren? The world view in them is so grand and rigorous that any character can be written separately.

As long as the main character has amnesia or loses his memory, the novel is basically cool. You don't need to read other novels. After all, the readers are reading it well. However, the protagonist suddenly loses his memory and has no sense of immersion. It is also frustrating to read. Basically, few people will insist on reading it. It's okay if you have short-term amnesia. Once you lose your memory, it will be hundreds of chapters. Who can endure it?

This book is as confusing as Jiu Liu Xian Ren. Jiuliuxianren is not bad, it is a masterpiece in the early stage. The back is full of garbage. It's better to overthrow and rewrite Jiuliu Xianren, which will definitely rank first in monthly votes.