Tokyo: Parasite

No man, what I wrote after it was put on the shelves was like shit. Obviously he portrays a timid plumber with an immigrant background who lives in a slum. When his racist brother was killed and his mother was admitted to the hospital, he still had the strength to choose between protecting his remaining relatives or using his abilities to save a politician who spoke out for immigrants. Our immigrant Frenchman abandoned his timidity and cowardice under his mother's understanding and affection, and transformed into an immigrant Frenchman, who was brutally beaten by the revengeful magician Lao Den. Of course, the Immigrant Frenchman has an immortality buff. The Immortal Frenchman relies on his ability to stabilize the French Tower that is about to fall. There are a lot of complaints. Let's not protect your family. You tried your best to protect the tower. You will die and still think about your tower. This chapter is tolerable, but I never expected to see scenes of stealing money in the classroom, gambling with my father in the episode, my mother forming a second family, JK living alone with three buffs being persecuted, it's so good, so good.

I found it through the new book storage module. I stayed up late and read it. It is very well written. The behind-the-scenes angle design is quite satisfactory, and I really like the protagonist's character. The multi-role play behind the scenes, dealing with the different human choices of extraordinary ordinary people, reflects the true and chaotic character, and perfectly integrates the real situation and the magical plot structure. I have also read a lot of behind-the-scenes articles. Some behind-the-scenes characters have become heroes, and they are always leaning towards the positive side; Judging from the current chapters, this book is considered a masterpiece among behind-the-scenes works.

The author's writing style and rhythm are actually quite good. Even if there are suspicions of containing private goods, at least they are handled reasonably. However, your behavior of piling up a lot of "negative combustibles" in front of the readers without causing a big fire is really not flattering. After all, I can understand that if you want to be strong, you should suppress it first, but when you suppress it until you feel sick, you don't want to raise it high enough. Who can endure the nausea and subscribe?

This is a batch that is watery as soon as it is put on the shelves. It is rubbish and a waste of my money.

I really like to read about the behind-the-scenes flow and creation system, but there are not many books that are written at a high level. The quality of this book is very good. Although the protagonist is both a decent and a villain, and sometimes behaves in a dark and controversial way, I personally feel that this kind of behind-the-scenes flow is a grand cosplay. Just treat it as a game. Anyway, good luck to the author. If you like this type, you can read it.

，， But the author's plot is too "scattered", written one by one in small theaters, but each small theater cannot be linked together. The story line is segmented, and some characters feel drawn out. The plot of the small theater is discarded as soon as it is over. The current plot seems to be that the protagonist keeps doing things in different places for more than ten chapters, and then changes to the next place. But what must be said is that I will definitely continue to book the whole book, because the author's writing skills are really good. I still want to continue reading this kind of writing. After all, it is rare to see a book with this kind of subject that matches my taste and can write the soul of the character. Is the author a trumpet account of some big boss? Purely personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, hahahaha 😜

I've seen a lot of behind-the-scenes videos, many of which were not good or even toxic in the early stages, but slowly started to attract people. And maybe it's because these protagonists are high school students, and they flirted with many women but couldn't get on base, which made me feel a little like high school protagonist PTSD. This book is okay. At least the protagonist is not a high school student anymore. It's really fast to get married. You meet in one chapter, set the stage in two chapters, and they're all together in the next chapter. However, many people don't like women in this kind of novels, even if they are tool men. I just feel like it's okay, just don't be pretentious. If a woman is pretentious, the book will most likely be flooded with water. When I read a book, I would cut the protagonist off from his waistcoat. Maybe it doesn't feel so embarrassing because of this. I have read a good book before, and there are really many words in it when the left and right are fighting each other. I am afraid that the official will not understand it enough, so I won't mention the specific title of the book. In fact, unless this kind of book is a gou Daoliu, otherwise the behavioral logic must be sacrificed for the big scene. The most important thing is that the IQ of the supporting characters does not drop. Hurry up, I want to see the demons dancing in the divine toilet!

In fact, many people don't really like dark novels. They just hate the Madonna and the licking dog. However, except for dark novels, most novels like to write that the protagonists are the Madonna and the licking dog. For the same reason, most people don't like the Madonna protagonist, not because they hate it. Holy Mother, I don't have a sense of empathy. You asked me to devote my heart and soul to strangers and risk my life to save strangers. This is unrealistic from any angle. It's not that such people do not exist in the world, but that I am not such a person Similarly, many people read dark literature. It's not that he really likes crazy perverted murderers, but he likes egoism. Don't be kidnapped by morality or restricted by rules and regulations. There are not so many concerns. I don't have any oil bottles on me. To put it bluntly, you can be bad and unscrupulous. You can kill people and set fires. But just don't disgust people.

It's weird. I wanted to portray a very cautious and cold protagonist, but the result was that he was portrayed like an idiot. The protagonist has just traveled through time and has super powers, but he is afraid that there are also super powers in society, so he only dares to test them on small animals. Every once in a while, if he wanted to experiment on people, he would directly manipulate the angle and launch a terrorist attack. To be honest, I really don't understand this brain circuit. 1. You initially thought that someone could detect superpowers, but then why did you think that you could remotely control others and that people with superpowers couldn't detect it? 2. If you want to obtain human body data, you have to add more information layer by layer. How can you just launch an attack directly? 3. You are afraid of being discovered, so why don't you go directly to some remote places to conduct experiments instead of conducting experiments in a metropolis? 4. Using cultivated members of the society to conduct experiments directly is also a genius, so why do you need a society? It's better to just tie someone up for experimentation

Does the author not understand the position of his readers? The dark flow you wrote earlier has attracted a group of readers who love to see the dark behind-the-scenes flow. Then you put it on the shelves and started a painful stream of white-left youth literature? ! Or is it the kind where the official must win (note that there are no official reductions in personnel), especially since it is generally emphasized that those super criminals are seeking revenge and have their own reasons, and they are attacking the bad guys to make them fail. If you like writing tragedies so much and disgusting readers, why don't you just stop playing the dark stream in the future?

Before the French chapter, I can only say that the behind-the-scenes writing here is a pretty good one, but after reading the French chapter, I just want to say that everyone should cut their losses as soon as possible. The author is probably suffering from literary youth syndrome. The plot is so awkward that I was moved by it.

Probably above food and grass. If you like behind-the-scenes, you can watch it. The current plot is considered a masterpiece of behind-the-scenes. This book has relatively few poisonous points. Currently, there is only one, which is that the combat power increases a bit too quickly. In a few months, the protagonist can recruit monsters that can carry nuclear bombs. The plot arrangement behind it is easy to collapse. This book has many advantages. It is written fluently and mixed with some interesting jokes. It feels like a joke from hell when read. The second one is the character of the protagonist, a chaotic happy person. I like this kind of character the most in behind-the-scenes novels. Finally, the author's arrangement of the plot so far is quite reasonable. As for other things that some people think are failures, such as extraordinary historical inheritance, and the daily goddaughter of the protagonist, I feel that it is not bad, because other behind-the-scenes novels have more or less such plots, and this book is quite well controlled. Moreover, it has not been put on the shelves yet, and the plot has not been fully developed. There is no need to give harsh comments so early. After all, there are only a few people who read and speak, and most people read quietly. In short, cheers for the author.

Just read the free chapter, don't subscribe, otherwise you will see forgiveness for the accomplice who protected the criminal who raped his daughter, forgiveness for the enemy who killed his father, forgiveness for the person who designed to frame him 😁

I used to think you were better than the one who planted the sacred tree, but now it seems you are just a dead-end literary youth, and it will make people happy after all.

The French chapter is really disgusting. Some of the plots written by other authors can be debated by at least some people who like them and some who dislike them. It can also be said that everyone has their own preferences for carrots and greens. This author has the ability to write plots that make everyone feel disgusting. There is really no one who can write plots that make everyone feel disgusting. From the comments, no one said it was good. It's really a mess💩💩 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

Can the author stop being a literary person and start adding private goods from the moment it is put on the shelves, and express his various opinions like crazy. Each chapter seems to have only two words - redemption. I save nmlg Why don't you write this in the public chapter?

You can describe in your drama how to defeat the enemy and how to return with honor; but you cannot describe in your drama how to bully ordinary people, bully the weak, and how to engage in big shark attacks. I don't quite remember the original words spoken by Shakespeare, I can only express a rough idea, but I think this sentence is a truth in literary creation, the kind that will never fade no matter when or where it is If you insist I am happy to say that it was done by the Japanese people, then "the flower-growing people and the Japanese people have a common enemy, and that is the Japanese imperialism and the scum of the flower-growing nation"" I don't know what you think of this sentence and the person who said it

The big taboos behind the scenes are that the protagonist has too many scenes, too few scenes involving trouble-making vests and group portraits, and b-patterns. Since the protagonist has that woman, it seems like he has returned to a classic novel protagonist, and the b-patterns have completely disappeared.

The author is French in spirit, and the substitute is still a black chicken immigrant Fortunately, I will not substitute a chimpanzee. Previous subscriptions were like feeding dogs.

The French chapter is really hard to describe in one sentence. An accomplice who "showed the way" to those two disgusting black men actually became a hero in the end! ? Why are you still calling for the sake of the country? He is just a plumber. He has no idea of ​​​​solving the immigration problem and only knows about "integration" and protection. What have you done? The author wanted to create such a character, but I only saw his weakness and irresponsibility. He did not dare to speak out when he was incompetent. He killed a good man, committed perjury and received black money. After his family died, he would only stay in the hospital. When he had the ability, he said that he wanted to protect the hope of the country (a politician). Also, his patriotism comes from something strange. Considering his situation in France and his immigrant status, I can't see the reason why he is so patriotic (he wants to die to protect the Eiffel Tower) just because of his mother's chicken soup. A person living at the bottom is so loyal to the dark and corrupt government that has oppressed his motherland (you can get a glimpse of it from that case and the living conditions of the immigrants). This may be in line with Western values, but sorry, it is not in line with mine. There is also the one who says that politician is the hope of France. Does he know that politician? I met him a few times and overheard a few words before I believed him. In the article, I didn't see this politician doing anything meaningful, so I just said that he was always giving speeches, and his speeches were useless. It depends on a person's character, not on what he says, but on what he does.

Dude, what did you write after it was released? What position does the immigrant in France have to say that he has given up hatred to others? Damn, did he perjure himself? Let's talk about our country… I don't even know if I pay taxes or not. Then Sanjk is purely an epidemic of literary youth disease and has no main line. Just be happy and moist.

The previous article was well written, but as soon as it was published, the author started to show off his dirty shit.

Really, really, just read the previous free chapters. Don't subscribe to the ones that are on the shelves. Once they are on the shelves, there are nearly 20 chapters of water. There is no nutrition at all. It is just an irrelevant story. I really regret ordering it. I was disgusted 😰🤫

What is this about France? Who is disgusting? Will the victim be labeled as a villain? No, pigeons, why do you spend so much time writing about an honest man who is oppressed and tortured but still can't take revenge? This makes me sicker than the worst novel I've ever read. md, forget about spending money, I stayed up all night and watched a French episode at 4 in the morning. If I had known better, I might as well have slept.

It's shit after it's released, just watch it for free and leave.

Strictly speaking, creation streams such as I am God and raising all mankind, and the Fourth Catastrophe stream are also considered behind-the-scenes streams, but here they specifically refer to the behind-the-scenes streams that are all about me and deceiving the world. There are some that you can recommend. My Lilliputian Country - The portion is large and filling, but it feels a bit watery. Mysterious screenwriter - America creates strange stories Rebirth of Tokyo, Japan with Naruto - If I dared to write like him, I would have been buried long ago I created the monster sequence - a certain episode, it was cool and over I was a Hokage in Tokyo - you can take a look Tokyo: My super power is refreshed every week - Seese 😄 ⬆️The above are all completed or have a relatively large number of words.

Before it was put on the shelves, the writing was barely acceptable. What happened after it was put on the shelves? Like this, you go write a short story, it's very good. Now that your book is on the shelves, there will be a pile of it.

Drive too high and drive low, what the hell is written on the back?

Drive high and leave low. If I had known it would be so bad later, I shouldn't have ordered it 😐

What a good beginning, but in the end we don't know what to think. My thoughts have declined. What are they writing about?