I Fabricate Myths in America

Just go through the process in the world of Shan Hai Jing. The main point is to do things in the real world. Don't put the cart before the horse. . .

I read a lot of books of many types! As a 23-year-old bookworm, I really liked this book. The last time I was so excited was the first time I came across this kind of book three years ago. It fits my thoughts on spiritual recovery very well. I think the length of the world of seas and mountains needs to be reduced too much. After all, most readers come here for the sense of immersion and refreshment, not to see the mountains and seas. Otherwise, there is nothing wrong with it, and the rhythm and writing are good! Very detailed and thoughtful! Never force your wits down. I will carry the banner for the author!

Generally speaking, it's okay. The biggest problem among the characters is Christine, the policewoman. She has too little description. Compared with other characters, the way she obtains extraordinary power is too easy. Others have their own pain and despair before gaining strength. Christine has not suffered much in this regard. Paji, just touch the stone and it will be there. And she has been in the plot so far. Confronted with other extraordinary beings who have great suffering and hatred, they say that it is wrong for you to do this. Come on, sister, you have never suffered any hardships. It doesn't hurt to just stand and talk like this. Later, Christine is also a strong protector. The cross appears suddenly without any foreshadowing. In fact, a new character is about to appear here. At least the author should describe a loyal believer in God first, right?

Originally the writing was quite interesting, but when it was written that the policewoman survived and was saved by a cross, it was simply too tacky. From here on, one can almost predict the brainless plot of the classic American Superman versus the villain later in the chapter. Since the policewoman's ability can be passed down through rituals, this character who gained the ability through good luck can completely go offline and pass on the gems to the next one. Arrange a teacher such as Frank's daughter or some other kind-hearted woman to design some stories about redemption and tell the meaning of redemption and protection given by this ability. The first two characters who gained the ability both died because of protection. The ability of physical manifestation represents both protection and curse. Even if this ability is allowed to flow into the public, be acquired by gangsters, drug addicts, politicians, etc., And become a prop that can gain power through evil rituals as long as the original ability user is killed, causing chaos in the whole world, it will be much better than a lucky policewoman picking up the ability for nothing again and again.

This is why I don't want to update these articles, which only have a few hundred thousand words, and they become eunuchs at every turn.

There won't be anyone watching, right?😭😭

Every time someone came to the rescue, and they succeeded. . . Have you, the author, ever thought about writing a story where no one can save the situation or where the rescue is unsuccessful, leading to a situation that ends in chaos/hell on earth? The parasitism next door has compromised the animal kingdom. The trees planted in Tokyo are almost gone in Australia. The long-standing main road of gods (although it is a mess) Japan has become a demon country. . . Just, how should I put it, your way of writing now gives me the feeling of watching Ultraman, desperate but not desperate. The people in the story are okay, they are all written by you, but the readers you are targeting have a God's perspective. Let me talk about another poisonous point for me (layered armor: only for me), that is, the extraordinary "holographic projection" is very similar to the sky curtain flow. Whenever the upper management is confused, to advance the plot, an image is presented in the sky, and then the supporting characters and passers-by have various emotions, but there is no doubt. Really, it is very inconsistent

One chapter a day, which is about 30 chapters a month, not counting leave. In this way, many people will become addicted to books. As time goes by, they will not be able to remember the previous plots, and they will no longer be able to read them. If they keep reading, they will die. If this continues, there will only be fewer and fewer subscriptions. Once there are few subscribers, authors will have no motivation to update, creating a vicious cycle. If the author has not made changes and added daily updated chapters, then he can cut it in advance The author can look at other books with high subscriptions, which either update at least 2 chapters every day, or the quality of one chapter is also a big chapter. Based on the current update quality, he can consider whether to cut it or not Unless it is not for money, if not for money, then just pretend that I didn't say it.

Why can we gain strength through suffering and hatred? The main character is God and he can give it to whomever he wants. He can turn an ant on the roadside into Godzilla if he thinks it's interesting. What's the point of a plot where revenge is everywhere and the United States can't counter it? It must be evenly matched to make it fun. I also think it's too much to kill. Tens of thousands have been killed in just a few days. If there is no frontal Superman, the United States will disintegrate.

It feels like now I am just trying to save the day and then the cycle continues. It all depends on fatigue.