
In Tokyo, the World Helps Me Become a God
人在东京,世界助我成神
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 145k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
58Chapters
136Votes
679Recs
15Fans
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Reader comments 18
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In fact, if you use the One Piece system, you can't apply it to spiritual energy recovery at all, because there is no system to absorb energy at all. It is not as good as the Naruto system. Currently, the strongest performance of the Pirates is one Im, and the strength is just that.
I personally like to read this kind of novel where magic changes reality.
Most of these people are good at eunuchs. Everyone thinks this book will be cut in the end. If so, it will last for a few months.
The policewoman is so classic, I thought about it, and I think the problem lies in the mismatch of virtue. A character who jumped out on the roadside gained the strongest ability at present, making the previously created werewolf like a clown, purely used as a cushion, and the character has no charm. Silly white sweet is not popular in the current version. It may be better to change the character, or become someone around the protagonist to gain abilities, and being related to the protagonist can also increase acceptance. It's just a suggestion. You don't have to listen to it. I've read a lot of similar stories, and stories about female police characters are very toxic when they appear. Can you please read it to see how poisonous it is?
A little bit of rant
In fact, there is one thing I have always wanted to complain about, especially about the behind-the-scenes scenes in Tokyo where our country exists but is just a shrine. The old eunuch wanted to write about Nigaru at the beginning, so there was a common Japanese routine of soul traveling through Japan, and later people imitated it. In recent years, soul traveling has become a vague poison, and it has also been changed to reincarnation and awakening memories of past lives. Our country has completely disappeared, and there is no trace. This makes me never care about becoming Japanese. But you mentioned that the main character's skills have Chinese characters, which means that the existence of our country is just a ghost. I suddenly thought that our country actually exists, why do you still write about Japanese people? Couldn't you just write about international students? Of course, this is just a complaint. In fact, I am extremely disgusted with the existence of our country behind the scenes in Tokyo. There must be no trace of it. Japanese mythology and history cannot avoid our country. It is extremely wise for the Tokyo behind-the-scenes to completely remove our presence in our country.
Except for the female police officer, there are no other big highlights. We can consider integrating it into Japanese mythology later.
The protagonist appears too little
It's just a background. Everyone is here to watch the protagonist show off. Those who are given abilities are all sudden. The protagonist has no role at all and is boring. Like other routines, the protagonist pretends to be cool and shows off his abilities. Although the routine is old, it works well. And I don't see any obvious main line.
I suggest you use the One Piece system instead of using the spiritual energy recovery system. One Piece does not have a universal and unified extraordinary energy similar to spiritual energy. The domineering energy has been patched many times. It is either derived from the body or struck by will. You might as well say that it is a blessing from God.
Is there a possibility that the so-called Tokyo super trouble is just a regional endemic disease that becomes ineffective outside the island country?
It's already well written for a newcomer, keep up the good work