A Wizard's Fairy Tale

I have a dream to collect all the fairy tale heroines and let the princes die.

The imagination is okay, the background setting is good, but the character of the protagonist is a disaster. In fact, no matter what the personality is, people will like it, but being brainless is really a flaw. IQ problem cannot save it. There is no preparation from the beginning. Wherever you think of, you can get the first clues by traveling through curiosity, and then Just think of it as it comes, act in a high-profile manner without any consequences, and have no plan after overturning, relying entirely on plug-ins to "pass through". On the one hand, you are showing off your IQ, and on the other hand, you are complaining about this and that. You complain about spending money like water, and you can't help but spend money. Why don't you think about how you spend money? Have you ever calculated carefully? You complain that your family is unfair to you, but you don't want to think that you got a body for nothing, and an illegitimate family gave you resources to cultivate and a title and land. You don't want to pay any price for taking these, and you even feel that the family is partial. From the beginning to the end, your attitude is hehe, mocking, complaining, and showing off your IQ. In other books, the status of an illegitimate child is almost the same as that of a servant. At first, the author explained that he was acting and could explain the past, and he was a little impressed, thinking that this was a protagonist with an intelligent quotient. Later, he found out that he was happy too early, and the further he went, the more he discovered that the mentality of the protagonist was really the above-mentioned ridicule. "Haha", is this an overacting of the role, or is the protagonist just such a bad character.

To be honest, this book is really incredible. I have read many books, but this is the first time I have seen such a divergent and stitched outline. Judging from the plot, the author's early mortal period was very obvious and unabashedly imitating "Release That Witch", but the writing style was completely lacking. The writing was a mess and the plot was extremely dragging. The entire mortal period was like a joke. The "Three Golden Chapters" were completely in vain, and the introduction of Golden Finger was extremely perfunctory. It can be said that half of it has been lost. It can be seen from the name of this book that it is mainly about "wizards" and its characteristics are about "fairy tales", but how did the author write it? Among wizards, from the first-class wizard apprentice to the third-class wizard apprentice, they have learned a witchcraft of "blood separation" in a few years, and then they have not learned any other knowledge, such as the situation of other wizards, the mystery of wizards, communication with other wizards, the magic of witchcraft, and witchcraft. What the world of the wizard is like is not described at all, because the protagonist is a "Pokémon" type wizard, the kind who contracts with the natal monster, and does not learn any witchcraft. The natal monster only has one talent in total, "space invisibility", the kind that can be hit by attacks, pure waste. The tutor gave him knowledge worth thousands of dollars without bothering to take a look at it. The protagonist had 5,000 yuan in his hand, and various basic witchcraft were sold for dozens of dollars. The protagonist's special witchcraft was not bought, and he did not learn any knowledge at all. He wanted to learn it later, but unfortunately he did not choose to "stay in school" after graduation to join the "system" and they did not allow you to buy it. As a result, the protagonist was officially a wizard and could not beat a wizard apprentice in witchcraft. Oh, by the way, the protagonist advanced using the Pokémon-style Warcraft Contract unique to this organization. The relevant knowledge is what this organization is good at, but he didn't join or study in advance, so he was confused and confused after he advanced, and he didn't know how to exert his combat effectiveness. In terms of fairy tales, it is extremely perfunctory. This should have been the highlight and essence of the book, but the time of the fairy tales written by the author always means that one year has passed, half a year has passed, and several months have passed... The protagonist has always been a ranger and has no connection with the world of fairy tales. He watches things develop and then takes the treasure and runs away. The content of each fairy tale The fantasy of the core, the world, and the epic feel of various legends are not at all... The background kingdom, geographical location and cultural background set by the author for each fairy tale place are originally some highlights that can be explored in depth, but they are just brushed off and extremely perfunctory. Those settings written by the author are a complete waste! The mortal period before it was put on the shelves was a waste, full of loopholes, incompatible with the main framework, and extremely fragmented. The writing was purely meaningless, and there was no linkage between the front and back. The author wrote more than a hundred chapters of Lord Farming before it was released. The power system is a very traditional "life energy" knight system, but the writing skills are too poor, and the farming is not clearly written. The front part is too trivial and crazy. Halfway through the book, I realized that I might not be able to write the key points before it was released, so I rushed to make progress. I wanted to write down all the little things day by day, but the result was illogical and various unnatural operations. In order to retain people, I suddenly started living for months and months. It was originally written that the protagonist's physical fitness slowly increased over a few months to 0.1 And 0.2. However, he offended a brother with wizard talent whom he had never met before. He was assassinated crazily while farming. The assassin was so strong that he could assassinate the protagonist and become the lord of a country. However, the protagonist was just an ordinary knight, surrounded by serfs who could not afford to eat black bread. The author directly cheated. The protagonist instantly went from being an ordinary knight in the previous chapter to becoming a king in the next chapter. He became a knight, and his strength increased dozens of times... After that, the mortal chapter was completed at the speed of light. The construction of the territory was not mentioned. A small village of less than one square kilometer was developed in the territory of 10,000 square kilometers. The swamp was not mentioned. The surrounding situation was not mentioned. The father who threw him here to die was not mentioned. The brother who sent someone to assassinate him was not even mentioned. And the hundreds of pictures after that were not mentioned at all. He never even went back to look at the territory... In terms of character image, let's put it this way, the protagonist's mental age is no higher than high school. The protagonist's style of doing things is arbitrary, likes to break the rules, does not consider any consequences, and has no foresight at all. Whether the protagonist is in the lord period, the cruel wizard period, or in the fairy tale world, you can't see that the protagonist has any plans for a rainy day. In the mortal period, the protagonist's old butler was loyal and persuasive. The protagonist reluctantly listened. He did not deal with the issue of granting nobles to the free people (the serfs of the lord next door) and sharing core technology for free, but he always ignored it and gave it to him as long as he felt like it. However, there are still things where the wages given to freedmen are as close as the most loyal subordinates of the protagonist, the old butler + the chief steward + the administrator. During the wizarding period, the protagonist just joined the organization. As a mortal, for a small task of 80 yuan, he thoughtlessly exposed his specialness. In the end, he gave hundreds of thousands of spells to the organization to seek asylum. A public trial was organized for all wizards to see the protagonist clearly inside and out. He also provoked an official wizard who refused to die, and the organization gave him a reward of 5,000 yuan. As a direct result, the protagonist is afraid to go out, study, explore, communicate, and has no choice but to study secretly on his own (I learned an apprentice-level witchcraft in a few years, and after being promoted to a formal wizard, I only know three apprentice-level witchcraft in total) Therefore, the author is indeed confusing. The farming lord's writing is not good, the theme characteristics cannot be expressed, and the plot structure cannot be grasped... It means that he has gone through all the pitfalls that can be avoided. The key is that it can be seen that the author has set up the settings very carefully, which means that he has used hard work, which is outrageous. It can only be said that it is a thankless effort and has some merits, but not many.

Traveling through fairy tales is still relatively new, and we'll have to wait and see how we can restructure the fairy tales.

The creativity is really good, but it's a pity. The logic, characterization, and plot development are all excellent. What a shame.

It's hard to watch, the plot is poor, the characters are poorly drawn, and I can't stand it even after halfway through.

The only wizard + fairy tale theme is over. It is estimated that no one will write the same theme again 😴

It's so strange. After the protagonist became a wizard, he no longer cared about his original territory

Why can't wizards do witchcraft? Are wizards who don't know witchcraft still wizards?

The author writes well, but the updates are too slow. Of course, I hope you can write excellent works. I'll give you a ticket if I have one