I Really Didn't Mean to Challenge Anyone to a Duel

This book and The Wizard are both very creative books, but the background environment is not set well, which makes the two books look strange, as if the seeds are good but no suitable soil has been found for planting. The problem with the settings is that the author directly borrowed the environment settings that are popular in online articles. There is nothing wrong with borrowing from them. If the settings that are borrowed have many loopholes, there will be problems.                                                                                                                                                                                                                             our witch's fairy tale being all based on the system flow and the settings of the black and white witches, but this type of setting itself has been criticized. Regardless of China or the West, the earliest people who were willing to spread knowledge and inherit culture were the sages, all for selfless purposes. A group of selfish wizards with low morals are just looking for subordinates. They have various systems. How can they adopt a system like an academy? Will there be a group relationship such as friendship, family, and affection between apprentices? The teacher tricked most of the apprentices to death, and the remaining apprentices grew up to be wizards. Then some of them staged revenge. Are those wizards with low moral standards worthy of their reputation? Moreover, these wizards don't trust each other, so why should they form an academy? A group of people who don't trust each other can't even save their lives together, so why are they still doing research? Therefore, readers with this world background feel awkward when reading it. ​ ​​​​This duel combines infinite flow and cards. It is also a good idea, but the background environment is not clearly described at the beginning, and many conflicts are displayed very abruptly. What kind of political system is used to manage the island where the protagonist is located, whether the rule of law is strict, what level of science and technology is, and the past history are not clearly explained enough at the beginning. There are twenty-seven towns in total. How can the Li family be a powerful person in Longbian Town instead of just an ordinary rich person? Force? Are there no police and laws here? Control the economy of a certain industry? If the protagonist does not work in a related industry, he will be restricted. It is really influential. The protagonist has graduated. You can just change the town, set up a house and work until the college entrance examination. After all, your Li family is just a powerful person in this town. It is better to be in charge of the county magistrate after leaving the town.         ，​，，，，（，） Similarly, as they travel through more worlds, they will find that most of the worlds they travel through are stories about a planet called Earth, etc. . . Only with the past and present, culture and institutions can we build a complete social background. You can learn from Squid on this point. "Lord of Mysteries" borrows from Cthulhu and the running group. Someone has written about this in the past, but it can't be separated from the game-like setting and background, so they all jumped on it. Only Squid has completely constructed a world view - the country where the protagonist lives is an obvious constitutional monarchy. In the past, it was a monarchy, but in many remote areas it was even more backward and chaotic. The cultural atmosphere of the society written by the author can also be displayed with the help of various dialogues and descriptions. Since the current Duel book lacks these, many of the choices made by the characters in the book are not that sufficient. Why are the Li family so arrogant, and why are those classmates so ingratiating themselves with the Li family. If there is a child from a wealthy family in your school, will the classmates in the class join in trying to please him? No way! If your family has a lot of money, can you share it? Etc. These behaviors are not enough without a social environment to support them. It feels like the author still has a lot to fill in.

The book starts in middle school, with an inexplicable threat, childhood sweethearts, time travel and the consciousness of the past. Personally, I don't like sneaking away.

I was confused after reading this book. The background of the world is incomplete, and there is no political system or economic system. The protagonist's body remains with the consciousness of the original owner after time travel, and he causes trouble from time to time, making the protagonist suffer from chuunibyou. It's so disgusting. The protagonist is also very patriotic and harms his own interests. , It's not that I don't want you to be patriotic, but you are too abrupt. Originally, in order to destroy the plot, you obtained the force and sabotaged the anti-drug gang's operation. Later, you forcibly attacked the Golden Triangle with zombies, which caused a backlash from heaven. What do you mean, did the author not write an outline? All kinds of surprises

It's pretty cool to persuade him to quit in just three chapters! (￣ｏ￣)

Could you please stop being so blunt at the beginning? Forget about the awkward hierarchy. The opening scene is a standard school villain. The standard villain is hostile because of being a woman. This kind of brainless villain slipped away.

Update this book as fast as I can, I won't even read the wizard.

I think the author should go back and write about Uncle Nine. I don't know if the heat is over. But I am still interested in going to Uncle Jiu's comment section and scolding him a few times. None of them came back to repay Uncle Jiu after becoming immortals and proclaiming themselves ancestors. Now that we have sacrificed rationality and become brainless, it is not satisfying enough. No one in the niche audience will read it, and the public will feel uncomfortable if the writing is not good enough. If it is neither good nor bad, it is better to write about Jiu Shu.

In fact, the first part is quite good, although it is also a cliched little villain who adds a dog-leg to attract hatred, and beats the young to get old... But the later part of the story about killing drug lords for the sake of the country is meaningless. Yes, this is a matter of upright views, but you are now in the plot world, and the most important thing is to get as many points as possible to upgrade yourself, for justice and so on... And you come from time and space, so you shouldn't have this concept. Just like when you play games, you won't blindly pay for NPCs regardless of your own gains and losses? A little suggestion, I hope the author will write better and better.

The protagonist shows off every day. It's so uncomfortable to watch,

You've got it all. It's still a 2,000-word chapter, which is meaningless. Not many people would pursue it at all. Naturally, there are no recommendations later. Then there are the eunuchs.