Immortality Since the World of Uncle Jiu

I think it's written alright for now, so why is the review section full of criticism? I often browse the new books section, and this is already the best among the fifty or sixty new books released in the past month or so. It deserves some encouragement! Author, keep up the good work! Your book hasn't completely collapsed yet, so I hope you maintain that level, or improve in your next book.

What's wrong with the author? I haven't checked in half a month, and you've only updated 5 chapters?

The update frequency is quite generous; let's cast our recommendation votes!

The early chapters were alright, but things completely fell apart in "Covering the Sky." A character who had attained the Golden Immortal Dao Fruit was only a Great Sage. Even the Great Emperors had become Great Luo Golden Immortals. What were the immortals supposed to do? The Primordial Saints? Shi Hao hadn't even reached the Great Dao realm. This kind of writing goes against the readers' usual understanding, so it's no wonder no one could continue reading.

As a single person, I don't want the protagonist of this novel to also be single. Of course, I certainly won't tell you that I hope there are 6 or 7 female leads. It's mainly because I want to see if the author has the ability to write them well. Otherwise, I generally don't say anything because some authors' female leads are just toxic, and it's really hard to arrange them properly.

Up to this point, everything was pretty good, but suddenly the author forced the protagonist into the world of "Covering the Sky." Entering "Covering the Sky" isn't inherently bad, but the problem is that someone who has attained the Golden Immortal Dao Fruit and coexisted with the world finds himself with only the strength of a Great Sage at the end of "Covering the Sky"? Are you kidding me? This level mismatch is just awful.

Well, there's a reason why the author failed. First, the protagonist's personality, which was originally domineering but changed after suffering from illness for five years. Secondly, while the protagonist enjoys the benefits of the cheat system that cures his ALS, he is also wary of the potential side effects and hidden dangers of the cheat system.

This is the most uncharacteristic protagonist I've ever seen. He constantly emphasizes that he's a so-called "tyrant," a figure who possesses strength, ambition, and the will to rule the world. The story relentlessly focuses on the small amount of territory he's built in the main world, repeatedly emphasizing his own persona and mentioning accumulating good deeds.

To be honest, if you're going to write about cultivation realms in the "All Heavens" genre according to the levels of Celestial Immortal, Earthly Immortal, Golden Immortal, and Great Luo Immortal, then write them properly. The descriptions of these realms in your novels are completely unworthy of their titles; you might as well create your own. What is a Great Luo Golden Immortal?

I've only read a bit, but I feel the protagonist is a bit pretentious. He uses the system, yet he complains about it and doesn't trust it; that's a bit too much.