Immortality Since the World of Uncle Jiu

I think the writing is okay for now. Why is the book review section full of criticism? I often look for it in the new book section, and this one is the highest among the fifty or sixty new books published in the past month or so. I must give you some encouragement! Good luck, author. Your book has not collapsed so far. I hope you can maintain it in the future or improve it in the next book. Although I feel that this book will definitely collapse later on. But it can definitely be used as nourishment to improve the author's level. Ask the author to write carefully, so that your next book will be rewarded.

What happened to the author? I haven't read it for half a month and you've only updated Chapter 5?

Very kind in terms of updates, vote for recommendation

The writing was fine in the early stages, but when it came to Zhe Tian, ​​everything fell into chaos. A person who has attained the Golden Immortal Path is actually a great sage. The great emperors have all become Daluo Jinxian cultivators. What do you want the mortal fairies to do? A prehistoric saint? Shi Hao has not yet reached the realm of the Great Dao. Writing like this goes against the readers' common understanding, so not everyone can stand it.

As a single person, I don't want the protagonist to be single in this novel. Of course, I won't tell you. I hope there will be 6 or 7 female protagonists. Mainly because I want to see if the author has the ability to write well. Otherwise, I usually won't say it because some people write female protagonists who are just vicious and it's really hard to arrange.

Seeing now, it was pretty good before, but suddenly the author forced the protagonist to enter Zhetian. In fact, it doesn't matter if you enter Zhetian. The key is that you, a person who has attained the Golden Immortal Dao Fruit and coexisted with the world, went to Zhetian and only had the strength of the Great Sage. Are you kidding me? This level matches, but the difference is panic

Well, there are reasons why the author jumped on the street. First of all, the protagonist's character is a domineering character that has been suffering from illness for 5 years, and has changed. Secondly, while enjoying the benefits of cheats and curing his own ALS disease, the protagonist is worried about the possible side effects and hidden tricks of cheats, and decides not to use cheats to enhance his strength. The secret method "Yin De Secret Technique" is based on the Chinese art of Xingyiquan... Again, I want to say that a big boss who can give you cheats wants to plot against you, a mortal? Or is the author planning to create a protagonist who is the reincarnation of a powerful person from all over the world, whose sworn enemy in the previous life is using plug-ins to plot against the protagonist, and all the fears of the protagonist are instinctive? Finally, let me talk about the common poisonous points of this book: First, the protagonist enjoys the benefits of the cheat while being afraid of the unknown possible side effects of the cheat, and then secretly intends to eat the sugar coating and take possession of the cheat in the form of throwing away cannonballs. Second, in the first world after time travel, the protagonist said that his own martial arts were the foundation and could not be improved with plug-ins. On the other hand, the Taoist skills obtained were insignificant and he tried his best to improve them with plug-ins. Third, the character of the protagonist has changed back and forth several times. One moment, he is childish, another is domineering, one is decisive, one is compassionate, one is saying that he has to learn a lesson, and one is turning around and suffering a loss in a similar place... A bit speechless =_=

The most uncharacteristic protagonist I have ever seen, he insists that he is a so-called hero. A hero can be called a hero only if he has the strength, ambition, and the ability to dominate the world. The article blindly expresses the little foundation he has built in the main world, repeatedly emphasizes his character, and writes about accumulating evil deeds. So the question is? How can a person accumulate virtue and do good in the character of a villain who is plotting and scheming? A person who deliberately sets up a trap for his own benefit at all costs, will Heaven admit it? Maybe, a hero can also do good deeds and accumulate virtue, but isn't that a hero? I don't know how the author wrote the character of this protagonist, but I can see the awkwardness and I will say it

To be honest, if you write about the cultivation realms of Zhutianliu according to the levels of Celestial Immortal, Earth Immortal, Golden Immortal, and Daluo, then you should write it well. The description of these realms in your novel is totally unqualified, so you might as well make one by yourself. What is Daluo Jinxian? What is Jinxian? First of all, the Golden Immortal is immortal in nature and has no lifespan limit. What is the Daluo Golden Immortal? It is free in all time and space and jumps out of the long river of destiny. Do you think that the lords of the restricted areas or the great emperors in Zhetian are worthy of the honorific title of Daluo Golden Immortal? They are totally unqualified. If you set Da Luo Jinxian to be a giant of the Immortal King, a quasi-immortal emperor, or an immortal emperor, the Great Emperor Zhetian really does not deserve the title of Da Luo. For Zhutian Liuxian, you can either create your own system, or you can find a system that is similar and use Zhutian Liuxian's system to write about it. Please also look at Renjiaxian's system realm concepts and compare the combat power of each world.

I have only watched a few, and I feel that the protagonist is a bit pretentious. He uses the system, but also dislikes the system and does not trust the system. It is a bit too pretentious.