The Great Creator

My heart is like a tree. The more the tree yearns for the light at high places, the more its roots will go downward, toward the soil and into the depths of darkness. Being strong does not mean being emotionless. But feelings cannot dominate the strong, only the strong can dominate feelings. I really feel comfortable reading the author's book. Unlike other creation stories, you use the heart of a diaosi to do the things of gods. The protagonist in the author's works has a strong heart. Yours sincerely

When I first started to create objects, there was a part where I didn't understand the microstructure of matter, and I tried to force it to be reasonable, so I made very hard paper and two-dimensional bread. This is very reasonable, and it tells us that the Creator also wants to read. Hahaha, so fun

At the beginning, the inner emotional drama was well written, the plot was well controlled, and the story flow was in place. Although there were still some flaws, the author did not look too far ahead - for example, he wrote a huge world view from the beginning. On the contrary, the writing is very depressing, but it is the foreshadowing of the plot that makes the whole book enter the soul, like emerging from the chrysalis. Although this book is still in its infancy, we cannot be complacent because of our previous achievements (screams from two updates a day), otherwise the traffic we finally obtained will regress. Although I don't know what your attitude is towards writing, if you really want to write, you should write seriously. Comparing your articles before Three Worlds Dispute, I can see that there is a gap between the writing style and the creation of characters. The portrayal of characters is often overshadowed by slightly emotional descriptions and some unimportant writing styles. But considering that this is just a writer who has only been writing for three months, it is already very valuable to be able to write this niche work. I just clicked through

Haha, the author has lost the outline. The first twenty chapters are well written, but the protagonist, as the God of Creation, personally apologizes and is confused? Reducing one's own authority in exchange for the ambition of his subordinates simply does more harm than good. What was originally a good story about the mastermind behind the creation of the world has become like this. The protagonist was relatively calm and collected in the first few chapters, but in the end, the protagonist just lost the setting and took advantage of the outline, and it became ridiculous. Originally, I was very happy to see this kind of article. As a result. . . , I can only say that it is doomed to have no achievements, and you can treat your subordinates as human beings, but what do you mean by treating you as an equal? ​​They were originally created by the protagonist, and they violated the protagonist's orders. So far, my favorite is Xiao Ke,? ? ? , The protagonist doesn't understand this kind of operation. If he lets the artificial intelligence offend him at will, this will make the artificial intelligence think that God the Father can be offended, and then he will push it further. This is simply because he thinks that artificial intelligence will not rebel. Since they have the ability to learn, they should control them better. I have to say that this poisonous point can directly persuade them to quit.

I saw the protagonist apologize to the intelligent AI. What to apologize for, it's the protagonist's decision. Let smart Al not accept it. So the protagonist apologizes. You can explain it, you can explain why you need to apologize. . There was a thorn in my heart, and the more I thought about it, the more uncomfortable I became.

The previous writing is very good. Starting from the small black room farming setting, the loneliness emotions are well described. However, when it comes to the human race, it doesn't work. The protagonist's character completely collapses. Both the protagonist and the artificial intelligence look funny. There is absolutely no majesty and dignity of the Creator and God. Confucius once said, only women and villains are difficult to raise. Those who are close will not be inferior, and those who are far away will be resentful. If you want people to respect you, you can't get too close, otherwise you will lose your majesty. Not only will you not gain respect if you have no airs, you will also lose your majesty. The current relationship between the protagonist and artificial intelligence and his funny personality are completely inappropriate to be placed in this kind of creation story.

At one moment he is divine and at the other he starts to make fun of his own children. I am confused as to whether you want a funny book or a normal book. Do you want to attract readers who like funny books or a book with a normal writing style that uses creativity and ideas to attract readers? I can only say that I don't know what the author wants to write. The various characters of the protagonist are very conflicting.

It's an interesting book, but I started to be discouraged from it starting from chapter 29. The various dialogues are just like playing, creating artificial intelligence, what else can I say about making a contract, and respecting equal treatment. After reading more than fifty chapters, I was shocked by various manipulations. I talked about research, but I didn't see much research. It was just a person who was out of tune and mentally ill, leading a group of people who said they were gods and didn't have the intelligence of apes. I couldn't see the main line in all kinds of games.

This article is already considered a masterpiece with more than 3 stars in the creation category. The author obviously has a higher education level than high school, and at least chemistry can still be used. Although it is a bit nonsense when creating atoms, because according to the author's setting, creation can only be done after complete understanding. Atoms can be further divided into quarks, and it does not mean that the ingredients are fully analyzed, and there is quantum mechanics, etc. So later he said that the force of creation is unscientific. I laughed at the time, but only now have I discovered? And the author is probably not a computer major. What is the level of the protagonist? I can actually independently create a virtual world like the Mountain and Sea Realm and 12 artificial intelligences that can move on their own and even evolve into life. My major is artificial intelligence. To be honest, the starting conditions of the protagonist, whether it is algorithm, hardware, electricity, or data scale, there is no possibility of realizing artificial intelligence. In the early stage, when he was cooped up at home, the description of the change in the protagonist's heart was very good. But after arriving in the green world, you will find a lot of contradictions. For example, the protagonist's soul has reached level three. The author's setting is that he will basically have no mental fluctuations, but when managing a group of self-created apes, he will be moody and angry, and he will often be unhappy and angry. Another thing is, it's okay for the protagonist to do all kinds of cruel experiments, it's okay to create intelligent life like a creator, it's okay to rule stupid people as a god, but there's a problem to assimilate the favored ones and just grind them off. The difference is that the protagonist is condescending, and the ape-men have no choice. This is very awkward. When the protagonist asked his beloved to call him comrade, I really couldn't stand it. Abandon books.

I gave it up. I saw it by accident. After watching it for a while, I thought it was good. However, the character design of the protagonist and the plot are all messed up. Some of the plots are simply disgusting. I can't stand it anymore until the water god and that Yan. What is written is so annoying. Mao Ni. Jiangnan has been criticized by people for being a literary youth, but he is really a literary youth. The author is just writing nonsense.