Tomie's Infinite Journey

Come on, author! It can be said that your book, even though I am a bookworm for ten years, the writing skills are still a bit lacking. The characterization is not deep enough. Especially the protagonist. But I still highly recommend it. It's just that the index is too small and not satisfying. I would like to make a suggestion, Fujiang's ability must be reflected. Infinite world words. I can give you some reference directions. Nowadays, Infinite Streaming mainly writes about two-dimensional movies. So can we travel through other novels? I felt really good writing those scenes. No one has ever written about it.

Come on, I haven't seen Tomie's novel in a long time.

Why is it always like this? Every time I see a powerful theme~ But in the end it will change... It is obviously based on the body~ If you don't develop your own strengths... Buy a gun... Then why use Tomie theme? The writing in the back is not as good as I thought~ I think it's interesting that I haven't read the book "Fujiang by Passerby"

This is not about Fu Jiang at all. I was deceived. All the characteristics of Fu Jiang are not shown. I came to see Fu Jiang. This book is not about Fu Jiang. The title is deceiving.

Guan Yu looked down at Takeda and said, "Have everyone brought them?" Takeda raised his head and said, "They are all here." After saying that, he waved his hand and the following people came out from behind him: Oda Nobunaga (166cm) Uesugi Kenshin (156cm) Toyotomi Hideyoshi (140cm) Date Masamune (159cm) Tokugawa Ieyasu (156cm) Yamagō Masokage (130cm) Tokugawa Tsunayoshi (124cm) Saito Yoshiryu (175cm) Ikeda Terumasa (130cm) Ishida Mitsunari (156cm) Takeda then said: "Where are your people" Guan Yu turned around and said: "Come out!" Only the following people appeared: Zhang Fei (190cm) Zhao Yun (188cm) Lü Bu (210cm) Zhang Liao (186cm) Zhou Yu (181cm) Xiahou Dun (190cm) Cao Ren (180cm) Sun Quan (180cm) Sun Ce (183cm) Sima Yi (182cm) Guan Yu: "Single fight or group fight?" Takeda: "Let's fight in a group." …Lu Bu: "Who the hell hugged my knee?!" "Baga! Wow, Tokugawa Tsunayoshi!" As soon as Lu Bu lowered his head, he saw someone climbing up holding him on his knees.

Disgusting, it turned out to be a transformation text 😰😰 I feel like vomiting

First of all, let me say that this book is not good-looking in my opinion 1: Without Tomie's characteristics, Tomie should be a collection of evil 2: This book should not focus on Tomie, and the title should not be called Tomie's Infinite Adventure. It is more like the adventure of a person who has acquired Tomie's abilities, because reading the title of the book gave me a kind of expectation. The greater the expectation, the greater my disappointment. 3: The books written mainly about Tomie should be written as fanfics, and Tomie's ability must be weakened. Tomie's characteristics are not highlighted at all. This book is a fantasy novel disguised as a fanbook, although I know that those who really write about Tomie will be blocked. The subject matter of Tomie is very difficult to write about, and I played the role of Tomie. Tomie should write a story, or say that Tomie is chasing me, etc., Because Tomie will give people a sense of mystery from beginning to end. If it is written as I am Tomie, it will be less mysterious and more likely to make people feel boring The author may have submitted to the wrong area, or he originally wanted to write about a fan, but this book is a fantasy novel, and readers in this area may have more expectations after seeing the title. If the author really wants to write about Tomie, let me tell you my opinion. Tomie is very difficult to write because he is composed of small stories, with no connection and no plot In short, it is not good to watch, and I can't read it even if I skip chapters. Maybe it's because I have high expectations.

After writing about Fu Jiang, I ended up getting a low-key ring. I was really convinced by the author.

Am I the only one who thinks the writing is messy? I really felt that the writing was very messy, there was no rhythm at all, and someone else would write it the next moment. On the contrary, the protagonist's sense of existence was horribly low.

Can this author write well? He always makes some jokes that he thinks are right. Not only does it not fit the theme, but it is also quite dramatic. I came to see the protagonist use Fujiang's abilities to struggle to survive in a dangerous environment, not to see all the playful smiles and malicious jokes!