Master of the Night Ravens

I've read the first part, and I think the biggest flaw in this book is that the author always presents his own interpretations, while we readers don't want your interpretations, we want ours, understand? It constantly forces us to follow your wild ideas. Who is this book even for? Is it just self-indulgence? If this flaw could be corrected, then this book would be a good one, a masterpiece.

Bro, I've read up to chapter 44. I have a question. If the Raven Mage is a Summoner and can't level up by killing summoned monsters, what's the point of playing? It's like when I play a Summoner in DNF, I don't learn any offensive skills, I summon a dozen monsters to help me clear maps, and I still have to use my wand to finish them off to gain experience?

... Actually, I think kindness is a very good quality, so why should it be criticized? In real life, if someone helps you, would you yell at them back? Hmmmm, this post from months ago is still going on. Goodness is a matter of values; everyone's understanding is different. Discussing opinions is good, but arguing is prohibited.

I can accept the premise and values ​​of this book, and I also appreciate the author's plot concept, but the author's writing style is truly... Indescribable... The scope is vast, yet it fails to express its intended message smoothly and completely, often leaving readers confused (the Red Rose Banquet incident)...

A book with excellent writing and setting; worth reading.

I honestly don't think this book is bad. On the contrary, it made me see the cruelty of the online literature circle. The pie is only so big, but there are too many people who want to eat it. It's terrifying. There are competitors who hate on the industry, trolls, online trolls, and censorship. It's really not easy for new authors!

The presence of a female lead in this kind of novel is like a fly getting into a glass of water. That would be even more disgusting if something like a crow turning into a monster girl appeared.

Although I couldn't continue reading due to the plot and some settings, the Raven Mage setting does make me want to write a book centered around ravens, a pure Raven Mage story. Instead of using crows as an auxiliary tool. For example, the first ring: Summon Ravens, the second ring: Plague Infection, the third ring: Raven's Eye, the fourth ring: Surrounded by Ravens, the fifth ring: Death…

Honestly, whether in games or novels, I've never seen a protagonist with such a weak class, and whose skills contradict each other to suppress their power. The Raven Mage's core skill is the ability to share skills with other ravens. Logically, the core skill should have the highest priority, and differences in physical structure and bloodline should be overcome.

The protagonist has absolutely no strength but goes out traveling every day, getting abused daily. He's so pathetic! The more I read, the angrier I get; I even want to transform into a character in the book and break his legs. 👿