Master of the Night Ravens

I read the first part and felt that the biggest poisonous point of this book is that the author always thinks what he thinks, but what we readers want is not what you think, but what we think, understand? You always force us to keep up with your ideas. Who are you writing this book for? Are you enjoying yourself? If this problem can be corrected, then this book will be a good book and a fine product. Not much to say, there is a shortage of books. If you don't want to read this book, you won't have to read it for the time being. (The above is only my personal opinion and I refuse to refute it)

Brother, I have read Chapter 44, and I have a question. The Crow Mage was a summoner yesterday. He can't level up by killing the summoned monsters, so why is he just playing chicken? It's like when I play DNF Summoner and don't learn a single output skill of my own. I summon a dozen monsters to help clear the map. I still have to turn my wand to make the last blow to gain experience?

. . . In fact, I think kindness is a very good quality. Why do you have to be criticized? In reality, do you want to be scolded if someone helps you? emmmmmm, I posted it on my grave a few months ago, and I'm still making noise. Goodness is a matter of three views, and everyone's understanding is different. It is good to discuss opinions, but it is forbidden to argue. I believe that the world is not black and white. We all know who is the hero and who is the enemy. Goodness is not absolute. All we need is not to harm society and to have a clear conscience.

I can accept the setting and three views of this book, and I also appreciate the author's plot concept, but the author's writing skills are really... It's hard to describe in one sentence... The layout is very large, but what I want to express cannot be expressed smoothly and completely, which always leaves readers confused (Red Rose Banquet Incident)... I can't put it into words The setting contents are infiltrated and reflected in stages, but are all given to the readers in one go. The game text cannot directly copy the settings (there are three chapters analyzing and summarizing the skill arrangements before level 10)... The writing is sometimes too procrastinating, bloated and meaningless. It is obviously a match-up that cannot survive three or five chapters, but it takes a chapter to introduce it in detail (the mercenary team was wiped out by the magic wolf). If you need to write a few characters to death and earn tears while letting the protagonist wake up and change his mind, there can be a better way of writing... The above are personal opinions and suggestions. The comment area also reflects on these issues. I hope the author can see it. In addition, I really hate some unintelligent trolls and unreasonable comments, such as "I love to watch but don't watch", "I still scream when I don't understand", "I only write as many words as you say" and other violent or unreasonable speeches. Although I haven't read much, I really hope that the author can write better and better. If you really don't like reading, you can just quit and delete the book, and you won't waste time typing so many words!

A book with excellent writing and setting, worth reading

I really don't think this book is poisonous, but it made me see the cruelty of the Internet literary circle. The cake is only so big, and there are too many people who want to eat it. It's terrible. It's hard for new authors to be surrounded by hackers, trolls, trolls, and river crabs!

Having a heroine in this kind of novel is like having a fly in a glass of water It would be even more disgusting if there was a crow that turned into a monster girl or something.

Although I couldn't continue reading because of the plot and some settings, the setting of the Crow Mage actually made me write a book based on crows, a pure Crow Mage. Instead of using crow as an auxiliary. For example, the first ring: summon crows, the second ring: plague infection, the second ring: Crow's Eye, the third ring: surrounded by crows, the fourth ring: death declaration... If it is to defeat the evil god, it is estimated that there will be special individuals with high infection such as Thousand-Eyed Crows.

To be honest, whether I am playing games or reading novels, I have never seen a profession in which the protagonist is so weak, and the skills are contradictory to reduce the strength. The core skill of the Crow Mage is that you can share skills with the crow. If you want to share, the core skills must have the highest priority. And if you want to share the skills, then the different body structures, different bloodlines, etc. Can definitely be overcome. As a result, when I encountered the first skill, Meditation, I was told that crows and humans have different structures and don't have wizard blood, so they couldn't use it. Why do you want to do this? As long as the crow's body structure is different from that of humans, he can share the success of any skill with you?

The main character, Mao, doesn't even have the strength to go out and travel every day. He is abused every day. It's so pitiful. The more I watch, the angrier I get. I want to transform into a character in the book and go up and break his legs. 👿