Emperor of the Desert

Young man, you are on a narrow road. Good guy, the more you write, the more niche you become. The opening chapter is LOL + A Certain Magical Index + Scientific Railgun, so except for random passers-by, most people who read your book are fans of the above three categories. For example, I came here for the golden crispy chicken... I have never read A Certain Magical Index and Scientific Railgun, but because I am already very familiar with the plot. I understand, so it's okay... PS: I've been spoiled by various authors' novels (spoilers) to the point where I don't want to read them anymore, Then, Persona + Headless Horseman Persona, Good Guys Headless Horseman Persona is okay, it's been around a few years, I believe most people have heard of it even if they haven't read it, but what is Persona? Never heard of it! You are invisibly screening readers... And even if you want to write about a niche, you should also write something simple and easy to understand. I read the two or three chapters of your introduction three times and still didn't understand it. Maybe my understanding ability is not very good, but I believe that most people who read novels will not understand it in detail. I think your book is quite to your liking. I suggest you ask the readers about their situation in the book club (if there is one) or in the book review section without affecting the outline. It is best to take advantage of the fact that you have not written much and delete this volume and rewrite it. Of course, it's just a suggestion, because I think your writing is very interesting to my taste, so I kindly give you a suggestion. If you think you can write it well, don't write it as a fan, write it in an original way, and write down all the settings clearly. If you can express it clearly, that's also good. Above

Just write fanfics properly. What the hell are you going to do with a bunch of gender-changing homosexists? Apart from feeling disgusting, I don't feel good at all.

The system currency is always regarded as "golden sand dollar" by me (*/ω＼*)

Shurima, your emperor has joined the Kentucky Fried Chicken combo

I knew this author when I saw the author said that Magic Forbidden is greater than Dragon Ball 🤭

Brother, I've given you the tickets, please give me more 🔨🔨🔨

I signed the contract as I kept raising it. . .

This novel is a work for the author's own entertainment. The author is often proud of himself (I really don't understand what he is proud of). The protagonist has no logic at all in his actions and does whatever he wants. All the messy settings are completely incomprehensible.

Good guy, I endured the nausea and read twenty chapters, but I really can't stand it anymore. You have to do a good job of banning demons and have twins change their genders. It's just disgusting. I'm not interested in the rest anymore. Fans are generally read only if they are familiar with them. I hope the author can take a good look at what readers want to read.

This is purely a self-pleasure novel. Those who have been exposed to the games and animations written in the book may find it interesting, but those who have not read it have no idea what the author is writing. They feel that the relationship between the characters is confusing and it does not make sense at all. If the author is the kind of author, I will just let my thoughts become words, then OK, write whatever you want. If the author regards writing a book as his own job, look at the comments and how many bad reviews there are.