Card Tactics: Starting with the Headless Horseman Trait

The first battle begins in Chapter 21. If you don't attack, who will?

The rules of Yu-Gi-Oh are already very complicated, and you also added a war chess game. And it's not combined well, it's too confusing.

Can Guan Yu and Zhang Fei be considered the Headless Horseman? After all, there is no head.

😅😅I just caught up with the latest and cut it for me, wasting my money. The setting of this book is okay, but the war chess and card systems are incompatible. The author insists on integrating them together. It would be much better to write war chess separately. Moreover, the base effect that was changed midway disrupted the protagonist's previous adaptations to the base, and it was tiring to have to do the adaptation again. The main plot written by the author is very clear, which is the resurrection of the evil dragon and then defeating the evil dragon. The other plots are all branch plots. Normally, this kind of clear main plot should end well, but the author went sideways 🤔🤔

​ Card war chess worldview, classics join the magic academy, then use materials to refine the deck, and then play cards This process is basically the same in the early stage, and readers are happy to watch it, but there is a problem in the middle stage. Generally, this kind of novel will design another "original protagonist" (the protagonist in the card game), and then design an original main line based on the original protagonist However, the main plot of this original book is very poorly written. It is very superficial and not in-depth at all. It is all foreshadowing. Even the traditional semester competition is only superficial. In the end, the campus plot is very poorly written and it is directly GG (I have been following it, but I stopped reading when I left the campus to find a mermaid, and then the author cut it off) Crash point: In the early stage, I stayed in the comfort zone for too long and did not delve into the world view at all. I waited until the readers got tired of making cards, then hurriedly expanded the world view, and then g On the one hand, I stopped writing half of the original noble VS academy, on the other hand, I inserted the real world view, and on the other hand, the mermaid plot was also very difficult to write, and in the end it was a mess that I couldn't stand. Possibility of improvement: In fact, the author is a person who deeply digs into the plot of the nobles vs. The academy. He writes about why the nobles hate the undead, and then reveals that ancient demons and dragons can be resurrected through card making This way, it can be a foreshadowing of the nobles resurrecting the evil dragons. The protagonist is also an undead type + an undead killer, which is the best candidate to solve the current crisis. It can also expand the protagonist's ability, so that the protagonist can also resurrect ancient creatures (classic card elves) Summary It was a very good novel written in the early stage. The setting was novel and interesting, but the author did not know how to write the main plot. After getting tired of traditional card-making routines, he had to write the main plot, and then it collapsed.

I feel that the descriptions of chess pieces and battles are too rigid. According to the author's explanation of the chess pieces, the activation of the chess pieces' effects are all marked with words (learn from Yu-Gi-Oh's K language). Without them, there is no effect at all (the one is useless against the magic level and below, and it is useless against super power). It is not acceptable. No real-time combat look

First of all, the author has a good idea, but if he doesn't make any choices and sews it all in, 100 chapters will not be enough for your setting instructions, and may even confuse you and the readers, making it easier for bugs to occur later. Then, after the battle descriptions are sewn together, the scenes become more boring. They have to be explained, step by step, and there is no passion. I don't play Yu-Gi-Oh, but I like to read Yu-Gi-Oh novels. Just reading the stories makes me feel aroused. You really can't substitute it. If your writing is not good, don't add the battle flag setting. This kind of chessboard battle scene is difficult to control

Ask, those who post fitness photos without patting their heads, do they count as Headless Horseman entries? Be a bodybuilding statue chess piece of the Headless Horseman

Then let me ask you, you dedicated a chapter in Chapter 44 to saying that you don't want to engrave a magic spell and let the material play its own role, but there is still a plot to engrave a magic spell and seal the chess piece later... At that time, I felt that the protagonist's explanation was quite far-fetched. You can have all kinds of chess pieces by relying on the entries. What does it have to do with the need to orient chess pieces with certain functions? As a result, the author's left brain attacked the right brain.

Believe first, then believe 😊 In fact, I am writing a novel called Crow Mage. I think it's okay. Or maybe there's nothing that can be done about the Western fantasy genre of wizards like Crow, so I might consider giving it a try.