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Xiao Yuyu wants to read a book review, so I'll write one when I wake up. The glorious body is sometimes illusory and sometimes real. After a hundred years of cultivating the spiritual body, the dream turned into a butterfly and came to nothing. A small glimpse into the future of a swordsman, Chunyang rebuilds the Ice City. Weird trading is introduced into the game, and Baigou Village is slightly weird. Chunyang swordsmanship is greatly affected by the cold, and Zifu practices Qi and cultivates golden elixir. The mighty soldiers of the Qin Dynasty fight all over the world, and the mandarin dragon knights hunt for the soul. After ten long years and several days, the sword of wisdom cuts through the injustice in my heart. I, Zhao Yang, was the man who changed the destiny of Da Qin and was a dangerous member of Da Xia. Now I am willing to exchange the lives of tens of millions of people for the strength of returning to the ruins to fight. I do not ask for a long-lasting reputation, but I hope that Da Xia's kingdom will be extended for more than a hundred years.

The worst thing about this book is that In terms of setting, the protagonist is awesome, but in terms of plot, it's very low-key. The protagonist either doesn't make a plan, but once he makes a plan, unexpected events will disrupt his plan. In the final analysis, the author is suppressing the protagonist's combat power, and it is a bit deliberate. There are similar poisonous points in many novels The protagonist upgrades very slowly in the early stage, but skyrockets in the later stage.

After reading Chapter 30, the protagonist, a Yuanshen monk, was reborn. He knew clearly that it was a golden age and that the future would be very dangerous. However, he did not practice, develop or improve himself. Instead, he hung around a woman. The woman also had a bad attitude. However, as long as she threw two bones or said a word, the protagonist would lick her without hesitation and leave.

When I read Chapter 21, the previous chapter was okay, but here it is a direct **. As mentioned before by those who attended the party, they are all big bosses from various provinces. Who are you? You come from a rural area. Can you attend the party? Your cousin had no choice but to bring you here according to her mother's wishes, and ran directly over to force you to toast! Not to mention the one who was forcibly toasted, I want the second-generation rich people present not to let your cousin come to events in the future. Most poor relatives have it, but there are still very few people who are so stunned. What does it mean for your cousin to bring a lunatic here (this behavior seems to be the case). What if he brings someone who is even more stupid to kill directly next time? ? ? ? You (the Yuanshen Great Monk) don't care about other people's opinions. The result of this inversion is that your cousin's family will lose a lot of face in the eyes of others. What's more serious may even be suppressed. Is this what a reborn great monk does? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

After reading the setting in the first chapter, I felt that this book would definitely be a hit. Except for a small number of people and newcomers, I really can't stand it. They have already cultivated to the level of the Yuanshen Great Monk. So rebuilding the body should be a trivial matter, and it can't even repair the foundation. So what's the use of the Yuan Shen Great Monk? Being invincible at the same level is just a way. You can't say that because several best-selling novels emphasize invincibility at the same level, you can say that there is only one way. The reason why many people who cultivate immortality and Taoism say that it depends on qualifications in the early stage and spiritual understanding in the later stage. It is just that good qualifications can make it easier to reach the later stage. You are already in the late stage and can't even make up for the foundation in the early stage. Are you practicing hammer? And when it comes to the soul, don't tell me that once you are reborn, you will treat the past as if it never happened, or that you can make up for the soul by reversing the plot a few times. Then I can tell you for sure that your soul will still not be able to pass the test. On the surface, you are deceiving yourself. Deep down, it is impossible to pretend that it never happened. It is even worse than in the previous life, no matter how many immortal ways you practice. Go home and pick shit! ! ! !

First-class world setting, third-rate chaotic writing The setting of the story background and world is so refreshing that I can't put it down. Unfortunately, the early plot is chaotic and the writing is clumsy and resembles Dou Po. It looks fine to middle school students, but it's really the same for old bookworms...

At first, the protagonist was reborn, but then he discovered that he was a fake immortal! Apprenticeship to Lu Chunyang - (I have written more than 100 chapters), I thought the protagonist was going to be awesome, but who knew he was still a piece of trash! There are about 6 shots in total, and there should be 20 chapters in total! The rest is in Shuiwen, non-stop in Bb! Talk about how awesome the other supporting characters are, and how you can predict and take the lead! It's always in the water, it's poisonous! Extremely poisonous! ☠️! Withdrawal, I really can't stand it anymore! 😵😵😵What a trashy protagonist! With so much foreshadowing, it's still rubbish! 2 Of the 8 Destined Sons have appeared so far! I don't know where to save it, 8 supporting characters who must die! 🤮Hematemesis I think it should be at least 1,000,000 words! The author is awesome! Niu b You won and left, so disappointed! The Qidian app has just been released! It's been 5 years since I posted a comment for the first time. I thought I found fairy grass. . . . . ! 88

Good and refreshing articles cannot be circulated, and they have to be written with some flashy stuff. I don't go all day to fight monsters, upgrade, change maps, hang out with some Qiao Yue ghost, I don't know. I wanted to see the plot of pretending to be a slap in the face, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but there was not a single one. Although I usually vomit when reading novels, I still wanted to feel more comfortable. Using a good setting like this is speechless. So many people can't understand it. Doesn't it prove that there is something wrong with your writing? If you let others read it as a piece of writing, don't you have any idea what you wrote? Originally, the first three chapters pointed out the main plot, but in the end, there were foreshadowings everywhere, and the readers were not allowed to see it. Do you want to write a mystery novel? How? Like grandma? Really sick. Do you think having the protagonist say a few specious words is enough to be convincing? Did the author write this story for himself? Sorry, I can't afford to offend the author. I really can't stand the author living in his own world, so I slipped away.

The most annoying thing about reading this rebirth article is that you said that in the previous life, you achieved a high level of cultivation, but once you come down, your character cannot keep up, and you are still a loser. The character is like the protagonist. That is, because he is the protagonist in this book, in other books, this kind of person is reborn 100 times, and he is also a supporting character who is beaten to death.

The writing in this book is too messy and keeps skipping the plot. The author always likes to write half of a plot and let the readers guess the second half based on the context. It's so annoying that I gave up the book.