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Little Fish wanted to read book reviews, so I decided to write one since I was awake. Glory and wealth, fleeting illusion, fleeting reality. A hundred years of cultivation yielded a primordial spirit, a grand dream transformed into a butterfly, all vanished. A glimpse into the future of a sword immortal, Pure Yang re-established in the Ice City.

The worst thing about this book is... The protagonist is incredibly powerful in terms of character design, but the plot is utterly terrible. The protagonist either doesn't plan at all, or if they do, their plans are inevitably disrupted by unexpected events. Ultimately, the author is suppressing the protagonist's combat power, and it seems to be done somewhat deliberately.

After reading 30 chapters, I've learned that the protagonist, a Nascent Soul cultivator, is reborn. He clearly knows this is his golden age, yet the future is fraught with danger. Instead of cultivating and improving himself, he revolves around a woman. That woman's attitude is terrible, but if she throws out a few bones or says a few words, the protagonist will rush over without hesitation to fawn over her. And then...

Having read up to chapter 21, the beginning was alright, but this part just blew up. It's been mentioned before that everyone at the gathering is a big shot from their respective provinces. Who are you? Just some country bumpkin? You were only allowed to attend because your cousin was forced to bring you along at her mother's behest, and you just barged in and forced a toast!

From the very first chapter's premise, I knew this book was destined to flop. Aside from a small group and newbies, it was truly unreadable. Reaching the Nascent Soul stage shouldn't be a big deal, right? If you can't even repair your foundation, what's the point of being a Nascent Soul cultivator? Being invincible among your peers is just one path.

First-rate world setting, third-rate chaotic writing The story's world setting is refreshing and captivating, but unfortunately, the early plot is chaotic and the writing and plot are clumsy, similar to Battle Through the Heavens. It might be okay for middle school students, but for veteran readers, it's really tedious...

It started with the protagonist's rebirth, then he discovers he's cultivating a fake immortality! He becomes an apprentice of Lü Chunyang (over 100 chapters have been written), and I thought the protagonist was about to become powerful, but he's still trash! He only makes about 6 appearances, totaling about 20 chapters! The rest is just filler text and endless chatter!

Instead of letting a perfectly good, enjoyable story flow smoothly, they insist on writing some flashy and frivolous stuff. Instead of fighting monsters, leveling up, and changing maps, he spends all his time hanging out with that Qiao Yue guy, and he's completely out of touch with reality.

I hate reading rebirth novels. You say someone cultivated to a high level in their past life, but once they descend, their mental fortitude can't keep up, so they're still a useless character. That's the kind of protagonist character I only have because they're the protagonist in this book. In other books, even if this kind of person were reborn 100 times, they'd still be a dead supporting character.

This book is too disorganized, with frequent plot jumps. The author always likes to only write half of a story, leaving the reader to guess the second half from the context. It's so annoying, I'm dropping it.