The Assassin’s Voyage

I originally thought that a good author should not let his readers guess the next step of the book. This may be consistent with the word "Qihang". The world of assassins in this book is based on Black Flag, and the time span of the Age of Sail is very large. For example, Kenway went to sea in 1715, and killed Julian in March 1716 and stole the battleship. Almost all subsequent major events occurred in years. This book is just an entertainment novel. I can't just jump a few years and finish the book in tens of thousands of words. So prepare to fill the blank time with something interesting, that is, Pirates of the Caribbean. Mysterious powers and magical creatures are more attractive after all. Say I don't have an outline? You should read a book that really doesn't have an outline. It was so exciting in the early stage and then collapsed, 300,000 words GG. Also, this book is actually hopeless. Because I was criticized too much before, I was ready to eunuch it, but I decided to finish it with an ending. After all, some people still like to read it. This book was created because I was tired of reading those cookie-cutter novels, where the protagonist is always rational, God's perspective, and the enemy's actions are clear, so I wanted to write a book that satisfied me, and I happen to like navigation games. So I would like to emphasize here: this is a nautical book, classified as a historical myth rather than a game fanfic. The Assassin's Creed Black Flag involved is not an assassin in the strict sense. If you don't like to see the door and turn right, I will delete the post because it makes me uncomfortable.

First, I hope the author will pay attention to one thing, and that is the difference between the gods of Caribbean and Assassin's Creed. The gods of Assassin's Creed clearly indicate that they are humans who mastered black technology in ancient times, while the gods of Caribbean are gods who truly possess a kind of power. Second, Edward and you are from the same era, and he only became an assassin after killing an assassin. When the protagonist meets him, Edward must be wary of the protagonist. Third, this system is poorly positioned. Since it is an assassin system, it will slowly lead the protagonist on the path of an assassin. But now I only see a golden finger that sends out tasks. Fourth, the two Blackbeards died in different ways. In Assassin's Creed, he died in a naval battle, while in Caribbean, he died in the Fountain of Youth.

Author, here is a suggestion: Control the rhythm of the plot. If you describe too many details, it is easy for people to say that the writing is poor (PS: I personally don't think it is poor, but the plot advances very slowly and is not interesting enough)

In the following voyage, Captain Gordon plans to build a large-capacity Galenic sailing ship as a cargo ship. Do you have any suggestions for a good ship name?

I update from time to time every day, because I don't know when I will finish writing. I try to update three times a day. If I have inspiration, I will update four or five times a day. If I get stuck... I ask for forgiveness 😭

The so-called assassin, of course, wears a hooded cloak and rushes through in broad daylight! ! ! Kill everyone who sees you, and then you can sneak in without anyone noticing! ! ! ! Stealth is all about killing! ! ! 🪖🪖🪖

Suddenly I found that this book looked familiar, and the author was lying. I remember that I would follow the updates every day, and I quite liked it.

God comes out too early, which always gives people the feeling that the power system is broken. If the protagonist has no power, don't do all these fancy things.

Why isn't such a good book popular?

Isn't this too damn cruel? There are constant setbacks