Mecha Customization Master

My personal opinion is that after reading more than a hundred chapters, the writing is pretty good, but the parts I've read so far are just one show-off after another. Although most mecha science fiction novels revolve around battles, if they are told too quickly, it will easily make readers more and more tired of reading. It is better to add about ten chapters of daily life after each battle, whether it is funny or nothing, to let the readers adjust their emotions.

How should I put it? It is modeled after the architect. The understanding and mastery of mecha script is superficial. Interaction with the world is still Keyu's weakness. For example, in the front, he turned the tide to save the bloody battle, but in the back, the brother-in-law was bullied in the bloody battle and had to fight; in the front, there were various inscriptions and plaques, but people still came to provoke him. It was like a gangster-like social experience, but all kinds of big brothers blocked the way, building a world background without any filler or inner connection. The whole book has no personality or soul except for fun. It can be considered good in terms of writing and description, but the characters are empty and emotionless, and the plot is only enjoyable, which will prevent the author from improving his abilities.

The author's ability to come up with names is really not impressive. Very cool. B.

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Yes, the protagonist is the most awesome, developing high technology, no, it should be called wholesale high technology.

Can anyone congratulate me on becoming the first hall leader?

It's open! It's open! Let's see how long it lasts this time. I used a pack of spicy strips to make it last for at least a week. Buy it and leave! The opportunity to make a fortune and marry Bai Fumei has arrived! ! ! !

You said that today's novels are boring at first glance! You spent money and couldn't see the end! Having been a bookworm for so many years, I have now developed a habit of not wanting to read a book until I'm halfway through it! Hey! ! ! How to fix it!

I think this book is quite good, but I don't know why it was discontinued for some reason. I came here today to visit my grave.

It feels so poisonous. The resource integration and research and development of the entire country is not as good as that of the protagonist. I am shocked at every turn. Such a big country has allowed a mere small country to assassinate and destroy it more than once. The big country is majestic. As a nuclear-weapon hegemon, it is easy to talk about calculations, but then gently expose them. The cost of provoking major powers is too low. There is not a single supporting character with an online IQ in the whole book. A big country actually allows the surrounding small countries to provoke, assassinate and destroy without any preparation or counterattack.

The routine is the same. Every time I get something good, something happens to someone immediately, and then... I immediately turn over the good thing and process it to help others serve the society. And the heroine, it's just a matter of helping the heroine's brother and herself transform mechas and equip weapons. Even if the heroine just finds a roommate, she will directly give them the latest and best weapons and equipment [for free], and they are much better than the heroine's...

I vaguely remember that I saw the author Eunuch when I was in junior high school. Now that I am in college, I have gone from expecting the author to keep reading to doubting whether the author is alive. To be honest, the author, I want to greet your family, *you*! Can you finish the last mecha? ! !

This novel is all about writing about people and then insisting that they are mechas. It has no feeling of mechas at all. It is a mecha technology novel disguised as a martial arts novel, with all kinds of pretense and slap in the face. It is all the same routine and completely uninteresting.

It's a very good book. If it hadn't been for a sudden accident, this book could be said to be the best mecha book I have ever read! Pity! What a shame! Sad!

After reading the first few dozen chapters, it is a mecha-type work. The protagonist is a mecha maker, but the book barely mentions various data and plots about mecha technology. I feel that the protagonist's mecha is the same as the one synthesized from cards in the game. There is no production idea, no data on various components, and no description of the production process. Anyway, just a tap of the gold finger, and the mecha comes out. Then it was praised by various people, and the author was recommended to read the Legend of Shishi! Although this novel is not very eye-catching now, the description of the mecha is what you lack!

Damn it, come back and fill in the holes. At least it's a bad one. Don't be a eunuch. This book is very good. How can I say that a eunuch is just a eunuch?

The first seven days are over, let's burn incense

To be honest, this author's book feels a little bit poisonous. 🌚The empire can't compare to others. Every time, you can only find the protagonist. After all, it is a big empire. Don't blindly make the empire too weak just to promote the protagonist.

Author! Mechas use electricity! It's powered by electricity! It's powered by electricity! You use an internal combustion engine? How big of an oil tank do you want to carry? The YouTuber is a bigger player than your mecha.

If you really don't want to continue writing, why don't you come up with an "end"? I've been waiting for three months and you still haven't updated. I'm really speechless.

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The author could have driven a Maybach

It's a masterpiece that I watched before. It's a pity to stop it. Is there any short drama company using this as a script? It's much better than a brainless drama.

The death of this book is really unclear Place an incense stick

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