Divine Mage

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Can you please not have every protagonist come from a slum and have a genius sister? I used to long for having a sister when I watched anime, but now I hate my sister the most.

If you think about it carefully, the levels in the book may be doubled ten times... I originally felt that a level one monster could actually become a small boss with a territory in the abyss. This abyss seemed a bit worthless. Later, I saw that in many fantasy works, the Balrog is often a high-level monster, and it is only a level two. I still feel that the setting of the Balrog is a bit too weak? But think about it again, the feathered snake that can destroy the world is only level five... Maybe think about it from another angle, expand the levels of the characters in the book ten times, and then treat the world in the book as some imitation DND world... Based on the setting of a copy of a DND-like work I once read, professionals from level 1 to level 5 are considered apprentices, such as knight apprentices. Level 5 and above are formal professionals, such as regular knights. Joining the subordinates of nobles is an existence that can own a small territory. Those above level 10 are considered great knights, who are very powerful figures among ordinary humans. Level 20 and above are legendary professionals, the pinnacle of the evolution of ordinary demons, and Balor Balrog is only level 20... If you change the levels in this book and multiply the levels ten times as mentioned before, a level one poison flame demon can be regarded as a tenth level professional. The peak of an ordinary knight is only one step away from that of a great knight. Even if the power level of the abyss is higher than that of the human world, at this level, it should not be too much to become a knight with a small territory. And the level two can be regarded as level 20, under the legend. The highest level, the pinnacle of the evolution of ordinary demons, is the level of the Balor Balrog. The Balrog Lord in this book is probably the second level. The third and fourth levels are naturally equivalent to a legendary professional above level 20. A legendary professional can become the boss behind a country. This level seems to be enough. The fifth-level feathered snake is already a world-destroying level. It is considered a level 50 monster, so naturally it is not too much... I originally felt that the protagonist was only level 1, so weak and unappreciative. Now that I think about it, Level 1 seems to be not as weak and unappreciative as I thought before...

I have been looking forward to the author publishing a new book, but it turns out that it has not been published after several years 😢

What about Sig's plug-in? It's been useless since I came back from the abyss, and the repair progress hasn't been touched for a long, long time.

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I saw that your bloodline was very pretentious, and I thought you were going to be a cold-blooded killer, but I never expected that you actually got a sister for the protagonist, and you also labeled it as a beast. Could it be that the protagonist was born of a beast? Nowadays, novels rarely give the protagonist a younger sister. This was a routine long ago. Now I can't stand it when I see a younger sister, because I know what the routine is. Do you want to take your sister to develop together, or do you think your sister is very talented and is favored by an expert, but after you take her away, someone likes your sister and then pretends to slap her in the face. I just can't stand the fact that the main character has a younger sister next to her. No matter how well you write the plot, if you insert a paragraph in the middle where the younger sister is so pretty and someone else teases her, I guess it can draw another 20 photos.

What a pity, the author's writing is very good

Fellow author, I feel this book can become a god, I should stick to it, don't I subscribe to it?

The author's writing is very good. I think it is very good to add the changes of the times in the novel. This is what distinguishes this novel from other wizarding novels. And the plot about the truth and falsehood of the world is also great. Witcher texts are inherently different from routine and cool texts, and I hope the author maintains this writing style. In addition, I would also like to give some suggestions to the author. First of all, there is the issue of the younger sister. Although the special identity of the younger sister has been revealed before, I think it is not good to just throw the younger sister into the academy and ignore it. The younger sister should be given some plot, even if it is just a look at, otherwise it will not match the relationship between the brother and the younger sister described at the beginning. Second, regarding the setting of the protagonist's character, the protagonist's character has changed too much between the previous chapters of the novel and now, and the change is without reason. It can be said that the protagonist's development on the road of warlock affects his character, but there should be enough time and events as a foreshadowing, and it should not make people feel too abrupt. And I really don't like Xie Mei's character who has a secondary style. It can be cold-blooded or cruel, but it must be consistent with common sense. The third is that the transcendent status of the mystic is not reflected enough, and there is no sense of the wizarding world. There are similarities between the wizard stream and the mortal cultivating stream. Wizards and ordinary people should be people from two real worlds. Their power, life span, world view and values ​​are all very different. The author's description in this aspect has some shadows of fantasy. The life exchanges between the two are too dense and there is no sense of disconnection. Of course, to put it bluntly, the world of wizards is similar to the world of mortals. The relationships and struggles between characters are definitely no different. But I still hope that the author can pay attention to this issue in the future. The emergence of faults is definitely inevitable, and it would be better to write it out. Finally, there is the setting of the world frame. There is generally no problem with the world frame. Generally speaking, it is dnd, the skeleton of Warcraft, with more or less shadows inside. You can set it yourself, but you must try to be more rigorous and logically justify it. There are also nouns in it. Wizards should write them in a purely Western style. Don't use things like "combining east and west". I feel like it means east is not east and west is not west. It is extremely painful to read. It is best not to use words like "little friend" that appeared before. You can just say what you are, Mr., Which is in line with everyone's common sense of communication between Westerners. Finally, I hope the author can continue to work hard. This book really makes me feel that it is unusual among many wizards and has great potential for development.