Sipping Tea Calmly at Hogwarts

Just read Chapter 21. The author of the complaint: Others are like water, but you are abusing your good ideas! The plot is interesting and innovative. The writing is quite fluent. The setting is quite innovative. There are some innovations from time to time, which is quite interesting. What is very annoying is that the writing techniques and the emotions of the characters in some cases are unconvincing.

This book is the first one I have seen in which Chinese elements are not poisonous points but bright spots. The author has carefully considered what a Chinese "wizard" should look like based on China's own history, culture, legends, customs, etc., And these Chinese elements do play an important role in the plot. The author has seriously considered whether and how China exists in the world of this book. Unlike other books I have seen, there is no need for any Chinese elements in the plot itself, and it is not even suitable to add Chinese elements. However, it is necessary to rigidly integrate Chinese things into irrelevant settings. I have read some hp fanfiction, and the whole book is set in the UK, including the protagonists, who are all foreigners, and the magic wand is an oriental dragon scale, and the magical weapons are both unicorn and gluttonous. It's terribly awkward. Some books are even more extreme. The world is a different world. The entire world view, history, culture, and geographical environment are all from another world. The protagonist even talks about the descendants of dragons from the ancient Eastern countries when meeting people. He cooks Chinese food for people every day and talks about the food from my hometown. The best thing is that obviously the whole world has Western names or Japanese names, and then the protagonist tells people that my name is Lin Feng and Qin Yan. What is even more retarded is that in some books, the protagonist has parents in a different world, and then the parents in the Western world name the protagonist Li Qi, Chen Yu...

I know that when you, the experienced bookworms, choose a novel, you will first read the synopsis and book reviews, look for the bad points, and then decide whether to add it to your bookshelf. So after reading about halfway through this book, I couldn't help but want to recommend it to everyone and write some comments. Who would have thought that this book is so magical that I would not sleep until I read it before I had time to write. So let's talk about the poisonous points first and the points that may persuade people to quit: 1. If you want to read a classic novel about noobs slapping people in the face and pretending to be cool and upgrading, you can take a detour as this book requires you to use your brain. There are no particularly obvious or major omissions in logic. It is suitable for readers who like magical bookworms and have knowledge of the original HP Harry Potter books or movies. 2. This book is one of Qidian's numerous novels that uses emojis very brilliantly. Many of the magical emojis are particularly fun, but at the same time they cost the author a lot of words and space. However, considering that other fan authors will plagiarize large paragraphs from the original work, the author of this book obviously realizes that this is not flattering, so there are very few original paragraphs, and he basically writes according to the development of the plot, so he can accept it in a moderate way. 3. Perhaps because this is the author's first long-form (more than 1,000,000 words) online article, and most of the starting points are now written and updated. Unlike traditional novels, which can be continuously revised and edited after the entire book is written, there are some problems in some writing techniques and plot structure, which occasionally make people feel disgusted. One: The development of some plots will suddenly stop and then be narrated again after dozens or hundreds of chapters. Especially when the main plot is suddenly put on hold, and then recalled after the plot has developed for a while, it makes the reader uncomfortable. You can understand some of the foreshadowing, and it will be very attractive when you see it later, but it is not good that the obvious plot often cuts off suddenly. Two: The dialogue between the protagonist and supporting characters in the novel often does not indicate the names of the characters, and uses a lot of jokes and slang, which is difficult to understand. In some conversations, it is easy to guess who is talking to whom, and what the weird jokes that appear in the conversation mean, but sometimes it is not necessarily possible. This requires the help of this chapter to understand, not every sentence is said and explained in this chapter. This leads to too many terms for other interests and hobbies, making it very confusing for readers who are not familiar with that field, such as famous two-dimensional animation. In passages where it is clear who is talking to someone, these names appear later. You need to know who is speaking to better understand the meaning of the conversation, so readers need to look at the names at the back before reading what is said at the front. For example: "jadskljaklsdjkalwadsasddddasdasddddsdadasdasdqdsdjldasdasdasd (garbled code here *100)" Harry Potter told everyone. 4. Regarding the CP of the protagonist... According to the principle of reader substitution, the protagonist usually has a beautiful woman/male or has a harem, which will make readers feel happy... But you can either be more specific and stop having so many beauties surrounding the protagonist to woo and compete for favor, or you can simply have a harem and don't covertly show that the protagonist is a dedicated person. These plots of palace fighting or jealousy will be very poisonous if you read too many, and it is easy to write discordant parts and get 404, so there is no CP or all kinds of stories that are simply ignored will be very good. In addition, there are many metaphorical driving passages. After talking about the shortcomings, we can talk about the attractive points: 1. His honey, my poison can also be reversed. Therefore, the above views need to be based on your own feelings after reading this comment. 2. The author's supplementary explanation and expansion of the original work. For example, the magic system from the East and the vast world has been added, and the plot has been re-expanded and told at the author's pace. 1: The alchemist practitioner system in the East (Celestial Dynasty) is quite interesting, and the rise of the Celestial Dynasty can also satisfy some people's patriotism. Two: Unlike other fanfics that copy the text and ignore the "butterfly effect", a protagonist did all kinds of messy pretentious things in time, and then the characters and plot of the original work did not change much. The author developed a different main line and various branch lines. Three: With the foundation of the world view of the original work, further explanations of magic - magic, spells, wands, magic, jinxes, magic circles, enchantment alchemy, magic potions, etc. Are created to create a world with fascinating magic theories. At the same time, it was completed and the original author Rowling did not describe too much about the magic and Muggle world which is full of loopholes because she was new to politics and economics. Although the author is not an expert in this aspect, at least he gave a seemingly reasonable explanation when describing it. 3. The villain does not have a particularly obvious aura of wisdom, but is intelligent. In Harry's fan fiction, the dark wizards represented by Voldemort and the pure-blooded Death Eaters are not upgraded by the protagonist's constant pretense. They will also learn to think and fight back after encountering new things. 4. The protagonist is not silly and sweet.

For a moment, I was so moved by the description of the changes in world affairs at the end that I didn't know what to say. The author's imagination is amazing, the layout is also grand, the various jokes are seamlessly connected with the original text, and the vivid emojis are really vivid. From the plot point of view, it really suits my taste. I read the book reviews and mentally prepared the writing style, but I found that it was useless. I didn't encounter any bad points that I couldn't stand. What impressed me deeply was that the historical wheel of magic reform, driven by the confrontation between Voldemort's pseudo-Ministry of Magic and the Ministry of Magic, rolled to the point where wizards and the wizarding world had to be open to ordinary people and seek common development. It's a pity that some of the plots are too brief. I always think it will be very exciting to write based on my imagination. Of course, it is much more difficult to write in detail... And some plots may not be described in detail. Well, long live understanding All in all, I really like this book and thank the author for such a good story. I plan to read it again when I have time, and then continue to pursue the author's next book 😁

You can probably guess the reason why the author chose Hermione to become a black girl. If Hermione is white, readers will subconsciously bring Emma into the past, forming the feeling that Hermione is the heroine of the book. Many readers like to bring Hermione into the protagonist to watch. In the end, they will form a beautiful woman around them, and a very lovable character, but in the end she is not with the protagonist, which is an advantage to others. It is better to let her eliminate the image of the heroine from the beginning and become less lovable, then it will not matter... As for readers, there are many. Some simply prefer white women to black women. Are there beautiful black women? Of course there are, but if there are two beauties, one black and one white, I believe most people will choose the white beauty. This is not racial discrimination, just for purely aesthetic reasons. When there are characters in novels that have images as reference, they will subconsciously bring in the actors. Black actors in the drama can only speak, which is indeed not in line with Chinese aesthetics. Audiences who have watched little Hermione grow up will definitely have deeper feelings for her. Most people have never seen the drama about Hermione becoming black, and many readers have already found the plot of the original novel that Hermione is white, so I won't go into it. Readers just feel happy when they see the pictures in the novel (this is my personal feeling). In fact, I don't like the black girl Hermione very much (after all, I am a player of Beng 3, FGO, Gran Blue III, and I hate being dark). Let me tell you my reaction after seeing this plot. Seeing Hermione say she is black (shocked) → I subconsciously read the 99+ small book reviews at the back, and a lot of them said they didn't like them (I felt uncomfortable) → Baidu "Hermione becomes black" keyword, see the actor's photo (in contrast, I don't like it) → Come back and read the big book reviews, some people are also arguing → Go back and read the novel, immerse yourself in the plot, and form pictures in your mind (this is how I read the book personally) → As long as Hermione appears, it will conflict with the picture and cause drama. You have to replace the image in your mind and supplement the appearance of the black loli Hermione (tired) → Then I started writing a book review (the origin of this book review chapter) I am personally quite selfish and like to look at things from a malicious perspective. After reading other book reviews, I felt that if I were the author: 1. Too troublesome 2. The book is finished, it doesn't matter anymore. 3. I casually changed my skin color from the beginning. I didn't expect that readers would react so strongly. I wanted to change it. I saw some bad book reviews, which made me unhappy. However, I deleted the negative comments. I deliberately didn't change the skin color. It's disgusting for people like that. It's a disaster for others. (I like to get into trouble) 5. I originally thought about writing a few items, but after writing three items I forgot all of them. Is it true that if you write too much, you will become forgetful? (Surprise!?) In fact, after I read the novel, I will download it and save it. If I think about it one day, I can find the relevant plot and modify it myself. I can avoid it the next time I read it, but I hate it a bit and feel like I am going to have a schizophrenia. 😭 I haven't watched too much yet, but I heard that there is not much plot about the black girl scene, only the first sentence and a few jokes at the end. I just sincerely plead, please change it a little bit, please sir! 🙏

The most disgusting things among the fans are two points. The first time traveler is arrogant towards the indigenous people and the plot, and the second time the dynasty is arrogant towards other cultures. It feels like an anti-Japanese drama. You are so awesome, can the European magic world still exist? As a result, the entire world view of the original work becomes false, and it seems completely obscene. It is really unauthentic to write a fan without that flavor. A single laboratory rule has overturned the essence of other people's potions, making it seem like Europeans have never produced a genius in eight lifetimes. Modern scientists have been ahead in development for hundreds of years. China is not afraid of catching up with others. What is afraid of it is the arrogance of thinking that it is the emperor before the Opium War.

How to put it, this is a book that people both love and hate. Love is absolute, after all, the author's slightly older imprints of his peers are so familiar: Shishi, Premier League, Sword, World of Warcraft, Oriental... All kinds of old jokes make people extremely nostalgic and affectionate. Furthermore, because the original works of Harry Potter are too heavy on morals and fairy tales, few authors can weave the reality and rationality behind the Harry Potter stories and fairy tales into a reasonable and reasonable way. In this regard, this book really far exceeds expectations. Coupled with the author's own extremely interesting creativity and the occasional comic elements, a lot of things become very interesting. But there are also flaws, or things that I personally don't like, and the most critical thing is probably the characters themselves. As far as I am concerned, the protagonist Zhang Xu is definitely an interesting protagonist, but he is also 100% not a likeable person. After reading the book again after the initial fun, I realized that this man is cruel, selfish, and has no sparkle in his character. It is true that it is the author's freedom to create a time traveler with the character of a small citizen, and it should be considered a very courageous thing, but it is destined that in the weightless plot, it is difficult for the entire work to become a classic from a spiritual level. It can be said that from the perspective of creativity and knowledge, it can be regarded as (that I know) Taishan Beidou, but at the soul level, it is a bit pity.

In fact, in the novel, although Hermione is a pure-bred Englishman, her appearance is very average. JK and the director both said that Emma's Hermione is too beautiful. In Hogwarts, Qiu Zhang is the most beautiful in the novel, Fleur, who has Veela blood, is the most beautiful, and Ginny is also prettier than Hermione. The idea that Hermione is beautiful is just a stereotype brought to the movie party by the movie. Although Hermione is not black in the novel, this is a spoof novel by a fan, a novel that is meant to make jokes. After reading this book, I felt that I could go away just to read the fan fiction. I read this book just for the jokes. After reading the introduction, I thought this book would be very interesting. I support the author.

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Voldemort's body was made of "the bones of his father, the flesh of his servants, and the blood of his enemies." Now the question arises: Whose child is Bellatrix's belly?