Slytherin's New Student

Honestly, if I were in Harry Potter, I'd be completely obsessed with magic. The plot doesn't matter; I could just leave England early, maybe flirt with Hermione. Forget the plot, forget the trio, forget Voldemort—as long as there's magic, that's all that matters…

The only downside to this book is that the female lead is Hermione. Seriously, a perfectly good book was ruined because of this.

After reading it, all I can say is I'm exhausted. Why are the vast majority of fanfictions about Granger? I'm disgusted. Have you only seen the movie and not read the original book? You're probably idolizing Watson, not Granger... Just when you're enjoying the story, suddenly there's a "kiss" scene—it's like a cruel twist of fate...

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What moved me about the original Harry Potter was its adventures, friendships, companions, and spirit of sacrifice, but absolutely no romance. Why did they have to add a love story when there was so much more to write about? And it's another example of Hermione groveling and breaking up couples!

Starting off like this is utterly off-putting, as if the world has stopped turning and you can't live without magical talent—it's disgusting! This is such outdated, amateurish writing style.

The romance scenes are the most delicate and nuanced I've ever seen in Harry Potter fanfiction. No bias, no exaggeration I really love Hermione in this book; I really hope the author continues writing; I'll definitely subscribe to the whole thing.

The protagonist, completely naive, delivers himself to the Dark Lord and makes a deal with him. Then, without any precautions, he goes to find the Dark Lord's notebook. After that, a supporting character is killed, so the protagonist can play with dark magic without any burden and has a reason to turn evil. This is like forcing readers to eat shit; it would be better to just make the protagonist evil from the start.

Another seven-month hiatus... I wonder what's wrong with the author? Also, I feel like Hermione can be kicked out; she's useless. The protagonist is a chaotic evil type, and a lawful justice type woman with some left-wing leanings won't have a good ending. A common problem with HP fanfiction is that the female lead is incredibly useless—either she only blushes, is just arrogant, or is a complete troublemaker. I suggest the author make the female lead more useful.

The writing became too aggressive in the early to mid-stages. I felt the protagonist's power had surpassed Dumbledore's, and he was all-powerful at Hogwarts. He'd drag some people out and beat them up one day, and drag others out and torture them to death the next. It was too ruthless.