Slytherin's New Student

To be honest, if I were in Harry Potter, I would really be addicted to magic and couldn't help myself. The plot and all that. At worst, I would leave the UK early, maybe I would tease Hermione. What a crap plot, a crap threesome, a crap Voldemort, as long as there is magic...

The only drawback of this book is that the heroine is Hermione. . . Really, a good book is ruined just because of this. .

After reading it, I can only say that I am tired. Why do most of the fanfics focus on Tengu Granger? ? ? Vomited. . I'm afraid you've only watched the movie but not the original work, right? I'm afraid what you are licking is not Granger but Watson. . . . . It's really heart-wrenching to suddenly have a "kiss" while watching it well. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

We are running out of supporting characters. If you have any book friends who want to appear, you may wish to leave your imaginary characters below. The format is as follows Name (appropriate for Western context gender Appearance age The rest is a free description, such as whether Hope is a good person or a bad person, where she went to school, which college she came from, etc. It would be best to tell her about her character, maybe she could be promoted to a supporting role. Because he is a minor player, once he is hired, he is destined to live or die, and wealth is in the sky, so he is not responsible for receiving a box lunch or dying miserably (the author has the final right to interpret this post):-D

What moved me about the original Harry Potter was his adventure, friendship, companionship, and spirit of sacrifice and dedication, but there was absolutely no plot of love. There is obviously so much to write about, so why do we have to add a romance drama to it? And it's another plot of kneeling down and licking Hermione to remove the CP!

At the beginning, I just tried to persuade someone to quit, as if the world is no longer around. Without magic talent, I can't live. I'm disgusting. Who is this? How long ago was this written in a white paper?

The emotional scenes are the most delicate and delicate I have ever seen in HP fanfiction Not slanderous, not bragging I really like Hermione in this book. I really hope the author can make more chapters. I will definitely order all of them.

Pig's Foot stupidly sent himself to the Dark Lord to make a deal with him, but he found the Dark Lord's notes without any precautions, and then arranged for a supporting character to be killed, so that Pig's Foot could play black magic without any burden and have a reason to become evil. This is forcing readers to feed Xiang. It is better to just make the pig's feet black from the beginning.

By the way, it's another seven-month hiatus. . . I wonder what's wrong with the author? In addition, I feel like I could kick Hermione out, but it would be of no use. The protagonist is a chaotic evil type after all, and there will be no good results with a woman who is a lawful justice type and has some leftist tendencies. A common problem among HP fans is that the heroine is useless. She either only blushes, is only tsundere, or is just a cunt. I suggest the author make the heroine more useful.

The writing was too radical from the beginning to the middle. I felt that the protagonist's strength had surpassed that of Dumbledore, and he could dominate Hogwarts. Today, we would drag these ones out and hang them out, and tomorrow we would drag out those ones and gouge out their bones. It was too cruel.