Wandering Through Hogwarts

"How many people did he kill?" "More than a hundred people." "One morning?" "A total of". After saying this, Voldemort suddenly fell into the well. His active period should be the end of World War II. And then until the Cold War in the 1980s. Even if 200 people were killed over 30 years, the average would be 6 per year. If you can't do it, really don't do it to the Dark Lord. 6 KPIs a year are not fucking enough for terrorists.

The writing is not bad, but it is very unfriendly to new readers to keep blocking the front lines. If you write well, people will naturally read your previous works. It feels very bad to push them like this; In addition, it is a Chinese curse... To be honest, this was considered highly toxic ten years ago.

The plot is good, but there are too many interactions with various women. It feels like Jia Baoyu has fallen into a magical world. After reading more than a hundred chapters, he has begun to annoy the male protagonist. If you want to be a central air conditioner, then warm up your male friends equally. Otherwise, what are you doing, preparing a harem?

Is it possible to identify a professor in this way?

The author is too casual. He can change the curse as he wants. How much you look down on the natives

Maybe it's because I don't like to be smart anymore, or maybe Durian has been limited by the follow-up of the book, but can you write less about the plot of "I'll stop there, everyone understands it"... If you can't post it after you finish it, don't write it. I spend money every day to guess and decode with you, what on earth am I reading...

There are a lot of logic bugs, and the writing technique is a bit self-indulgent. For example, he said he was a wizard, but not a magician, and then Dumbledore joked that he was not a magician. Many descriptions are too self-interpreted and written without considering the writing skills and actual situation.

Why are there only three pieces? It shouldn't be the complete set: Imperius Curse, Cruciatus, Avada Kedavra, and Fire Curse.

It is recommended to increase the population of the wizarding world. If there are only more than 3,000 people according to Rowling's setting, then the population ratio will only be 0.0053% Of the total British population, not even one ten thousandth. If the worldview of Hogwarts Legacy is added, the British wizarding world will not be able to survive. After all, several dark wizards have to be killed on the way to school. It is not reasonable that the protagonist Voldemort of the Hogwarts legacy and the Grindelwald family will have more than 3,000 people left after three rounds. It is recommended to change the population ratio to one in a thousand, but this way Voldemort will be even lower. After all, he and the Death Eaters should not have killed more than a thousand people, which accounts for less than 1.7% Of the population of the British wizarding world. But in this case, the feeling of fear he brings cannot reach the level of the original work.

If you want to have a plot like this HP where you use a space-time converter and flirt with a girl, don't do the plot where you fall in love with your father and then marry your son. . .