Ultimate Dao Monsters and Ghosts

The author lacks experience in writing novels and doesn't know how to change the novel. After seeing the comments, he panics and changes according to the readers' ideas. This is not good. As a veteran, I tell you, don't express your own ideas and don't explain. You can change it like this and put the changed content in the next chapter. For example: after eating the tree demon, the pig's trotters left there, and then the tree demon's remaining tree roots and tree tops came to life, and then Youyue ran back and revived the big tree, and then the pig's trotters lifted the inflammation state, and later found that this state can make themselves more cold-blooded. Another example: you can write that after the pig's trotters left, a big demon passed by, saw that the tree head was full of life, and then put some demonic power on the tree, and then Youyue came back and found that the tree was still alive! Then the pig's foot is released from the state, and it is found that the state is more cold-blooded, so that's enough! Don't explain the following comments after reading them. They are all in the content of the novel, so it's perfect. There is no need to worry about whether the pig's feet are cruel, because the pig's feet live for themselves at the beginning, and then they just become a little more humane!

I just saw it on the shelves and I have some thoughts: Why does the protagonist attract readers to complain so much? Because the author created a chaotic and evil protagonist who does things without logic. The popular protagonists of dark literature are all lawful evil, because readers can understand the logic of the protagonist's actions. There is a reason for the protagonist to kill and set fire, and there is a reason for sparing people's lives. However, many of the protagonist's behaviors are incomprehensible. Many book reviews say that the protagonist is mentally ill, and this is why.

The protagonist of "Go away" can be called a hero, but the author's protagonist can only be called a "scumbag", which is an insult to the word "scumbag".

Dark flow should at least have some bottom line, right? Why did the protagonist kill the scholar who saved people? There is no bottom line at all. You can ignore life and kill people, but you must at least be like a human being and have a certain sense of right and wrong to support your belief in living. To be honest, things like the protagonist can no longer be considered human beings. Abandoned the book, it is too subversive of morality and cannot be read, and it is too anti-human.

One complaint every day. I'm just waiting for the author to give me more updates because he sees how diligent I am. To be honest, what are you complaining about? Renew? Or something? Forget it. The author tried his best. Today I want to share with you the author's pen name. The crab crawls slowly. The name. It's so powerless. To be honest, crabs don't crawl very slowly. Why do you tell people to crawl slowly? You can't learn people's names. Let's start with the Three Kingdoms. Everyone knows Lu Bu, his nickname is Fengxian. Before anything else, you have to look at the number one general in the Three Kingdoms. Okay, it's far away so let's not talk about it. Just say this pen name. Those who are named by others are called turtles, and they look very weak. But I have a transcendent spirit. People can't afford to be like a turtle and crawl slowly. His name is so domineering, he rides a turtle chasing a rocket. Take the turtle to the universe. Turtle rides missile. The tortoise beats the hare in the worst case. There are also those mosquitoes picking up the moon, and the bears on the mosquitoes. . . . There are too many like that. I can understand if you choose a pen name and tell the horse to run fast. They all show the author's determination. You said you, the crab, crawled slowly. So unmotivated. Too gray. Too tasteless. Too. . . . . . . . Not much to say. Why did we find this today? The author remembers to add details. I will make up for whatever is missing in the future.

I've read Chapter 180. The protagonist is a complete trash, killing innocent people indiscriminately, and relying too much on the boss's ability in his body, knowing full well that the boss will rebel against him. If I were to go away from the master, I would probably find a way to increase the upper limit of martial arts, or try to solve the hidden dangers of the boss in the body. What I see now is just a brainless idiot running around recklessly.

Book reviews are really disgusting. Just because Dada is not as famous as Go Away, the plot of the book Go Away is always well-received no matter what. And no matter what the book is, there are always people who criticize it and talk about plagiarism to gain a sense of existence.

Are you all stupid? I don't know that this is a dark novel, so I'm going to take it for granted. If you don't like reading, read your holy scriptures

The author has a problem with the portrayal of the protagonist. The protagonist's dark and cold-blooded character is not the focus. The problem is that the author's own writing skills are not enough, and he does not understand the complex changes in the human heart. The written protagonist is full of loopholes. This is what brings down this work. Readers can look at the comments in the book. Most of them have the same opinion.

I've read dozens of chapters and I can't stand it anymore. We are born as human beings. If we lose even the basic humanity, can we still be called human beings?