The Immortal Venerable Who Adds Points

Does this protagonist even have a brain? Even if you're a transmigrator, you should still have your memories, right? What kind of family is the Jin family that you actually developed feelings for? I don't believe a tiny branch of a family can't practice martial arts without them. With an attribute-adding system, you could become a prodigy just by adding to your physique and still not find a sect.

There are quite a few flaws here. The protagonist's father was killed by his own clan, and he himself was crippled and forced to work in the mines. Yet, he's still thinking about how to avenge his clan. And to make matters worse, he's a transmigrator! Are you trying to poison the readers right from the very beginning?

No matter how others bully the protagonist, he helps everyone he meets, refusing any personal gain. Any favors he receives elsewhere, like a cleaver used to cut down mountains, he immediately gives them away. He's so righteous! He's comparable to the great sages of old. Everyone should learn from him, study hard and improve every day…

I'm happy to see people criticizing the author. Don't insult the intelligence of the general public, okay? Even with a system, a protagonist like this wouldn't survive three days.

Where did Chapter 2 go? Author, are you living off it?

This book is such a waste; the central theme is unclear. The protagonist could clearly become stronger simply by adding points, yet you focus on the plot. With such a powerful system, the protagonist's life is constantly threatened—what's the point of cultivating immortality? The female lead wants to be with him, but he says he has to wait decades, and then she agrees. Male lead, are you a eunuch?

In reality, wealthy people don't even have enough time to play, let alone waste time reading novels. It's mostly working people who read them, wearing masks and acting subservient in their lives and work. How can they relate to the various saintly characters who abuse the protagonists in novels? If you don't like it, you're considered polite to just close it without criticizing others. At the very least, it should conform to modern public opinion to be able to read it.

Lacking in character, wisdom, and skills, relying entirely on cheat codes and protagonist halo, he doesn't deserve to be a protagonist!

It feels like it was written by a middle school student.

I tipped the author before the book was even released, but it got poisoned by a woman before it even went on sale. Don't write about so many women in your next book; the protagonist should be surrounded by women.