The Immortal Venerable Who Adds Points

Does this protagonist have a brain? Even if you are a time traveler, you always have memories. What kind of thing is the Jin family that actually has emotions? I don't believe that a bigger branch of the family can't practice martial arts without him. With some system additions, you can become a wizard just by adding physical fitness. I haven't found one yet. In this sect, my predecessor was beaten to death in the mines after his martial arts skills were abolished. He returned home in despair and was threatened by the master of the family. He risked being killed by pretending to be a grandson just for a few secrets. Within two days, he was nailed to a wooden shelf by the second young master to be bled. After several narrow escapes, he took advantage of the opportunity to kill this person. A group of losers made secrets, packed them up, and took them away from the center of the whirlpool. They also regarded them as good people. Not only did they save people, but they also worked hard and swore to avenge others. Do they insist on giving you a death? What if a master comes and kills you? Isn't it crazy not to change the map at this time? In fact, you insist on writing about your family. It's okay to be deceived because of deep love and difficulties, but if you press the manager, press the guard, press the second child, press the boss, press the boss, press the boss, press the entire branch of his father, you will press it again. There is no good thing in a family that is so big, right, then it is better to take the opportunity to save the little fat man and leave. Anyway, it is almost the same. . . . . . Forget it, after saying so much, I just feel like my intelligence has been ravaged.

There are quite a few poisonous points. The protagonist's father was killed by his tribe, and even he was exploited. In the end, he was still thinking about how to avenge his tribe, not to mention that he traveled through time. You are trying to poison the readers in the opening chapter.

No matter how others bully the protagonist. The protagonist helps people when he meets them, without asking for benefits. The benefits obtained elsewhere, such as slashing mountain swords, are immediately given to others. Too righteous. Comparable to the great sages of ancient times, come and learn, everyone, study hard and make progress every day...

I'm happy when someone criticizes the author. Don't insult the intelligence of the general public, okay? With this kind of system, the protagonist cannot survive for three days.

Where did Chapter 2 go? Author, you ate it

It's a pity that this book doesn't have a clear focus. It's obvious that you can become stronger by adding more points, but you make up the plot. The protagonist has such a powerful system, but his life is threatened again and again. How can he become an immortal? The heroine wanted to get along with him, but he said he would have to wait for decades, and the heroine agreed. Male protagonist, are you a eunuch? Can't it be tough? Finally, when I saw the fee, the protagonist hadn't become stronger yet, and his wife hadn't been found yet. All in all, it's annoying to look at

In reality, rich people don't even have enough time to play, so how can they waste their time reading novels? Most of them are working people who read them. They wear masks in life and work to pretend to be grandsons. How can you feel like you are involved when you see various virgins torturing the protagonists in the novels? If you don't like it and don't criticize others, then click "close" to show your quality. At the very least, it must conform to the modern public view in order to be able to watch it.

The character, wisdom, and methods are not up to standard, and they are all supported by the golden finger and the halo of the protagonist. Not worthy of being the protagonist!

It feels like it was written by a junior high school student

I tipped the book before it was released, but I was poisoned by a woman before it was released. Don't write so many women in the next book. The protagonist is surrounded by women.