One Soul, Two Bodies: Killing Everything in the Wasteland

I read *The Misty World* when I was in school, and now I've been working for three years. After it finished, I was disappointed to see the author disappear. I was so surprised and delighted that they finally released a new book after four years! I hope the author can polish this book well and keep up the good work!

As a reader from the "Extreme Demon Era," I found this book to be a smooth read with no major flaws in the writing style. However, the pacing felt a bit off; it was somewhat exhilarating, yet not entirely satisfying. The cheat codes weren't straightforward enough, and the introduction of extraordinary powers in the world felt a bit late. It's almost chapter 20 and I've only just begun. I hope the author continues to improve. 🙂

It's normal to value your life, since you only get one chance. But in a fight, you're always the first to charge in, and when you encounter someone you can beat, you get arrogant and think you'll kill them all. It's contradictory. They beat up their parents and were planning to sell their younger sister.

Damn, now I know why this book's content was exempted from the limit. The author made a huge mistake. What kind of plot did they write after it was released? It's a complete mess! I was praising the author's plot yesterday, but before and after the release, they completely abandoned their writing style.

It feels like the account has been sold; it doesn't look as good as before.

Why did the war suddenly break out? It's a bit strange. Even if they wanted to rebel, their preparations didn't seem very thorough.

I read your "Extreme Demon" a few years ago, and then your "Misty World." I've always thought your books were well-written and I still love them. Even though you took a break for a few years, I still check your ID from time to time to see if you've written anything new.

I read a bit of it and it felt very strange. The previous parts about the Federation were really good, but then you had to come up with this messy side story. Shouldn't your theme be two bodies? If you can't grasp the exciting parts of your book, it's bound to flop.

It's quite unsettling that the protagonist, who holds a high position, is so fond of taking risks.

Haha, I'm so happy to see it's free for a limited time today! Even though I paid for each chapter, it means the book is running out of steam. Why are you free when others aren't? I should write more and find some problems with my writing. 😃