Max-Level Account in Another World

If the author reads this chapter, I don't know what to think

School is about to start😭, and I may not be able to watch it for a long time. It hurts when I think about it😭😭

This book, it's a mess at the beginning, but it's really good in the middle. I was particularly impressed by the part about Beauty Under the Moon, but it was a bit weak in the later part. Anyway, the middle part of the whole book is the best. I gave up before just looking at it. . . Later, when I was in the middle of a book shortage, I realized that the writing was really good.

I feel that some parts are a bit too dark, including the new book. I don't know if it's because my outlook on life is too correct. I feel that it's so dark to describe a very distorted outlook on life with plain words.

Does anyone know where I can read the book "Loli Paradise"? Is there any prototype in reality? Waiting online, quite urgent.

Seeing that Raymond couldn't stand it anymore, the protagonist was like a tool without a thought. He was not a human being, but a dead thing who only knew women.

It's over! Tell me how you feel about the ending. First choice, when I first read this book, I felt a novel feeling. What this book does very well is the world setting and plot, which are basically obtained by the author killing brain cells. But the shortcoming is also the arrangement of the world and plot. It feels like each chapter is describing the story of the protagonist in a different town. So every time a story ends, it only opens a corner of the world in which the story takes place. Just one lick of ice cream with different flavors may be a pleasure for the taste buds, but for the stomach, it is not a qualified spiritual food. Then, in terms of style, since it is a daily genre of Invincible Style, the writing style may tend to be biased toward Japanese comics. It's not that Japanese comics are bad, but sometimes the story takes place in China and can be expressed clearly in normal Chinese, but the tone of the dialogue between the characters is "Where's **, Nana~, ** said", which is very awkward. In general, the author thought about each world very seriously, but each world was not seriously improved. I hope that the next book can make progress. Come on! (Due to the nature of the work, book reviews are basically about picking up mistakes subconsciously, but as the saying goes: "After picking out the mistakes, the rest are just minor problems.")

The author's writing style is good, but because the plot develops too quickly and lacks details, and the characters change drastically without buffering, it feels rushed, as if the entire article is just an outline without detailed content. However, this is a common problem for new authors. Overall, please give it a thumbs up! (ง•̀_•́)ง

This author's imagination is so big that people look up to him. Let the system learn the homework manually... Damn it, this operation, tsk tsk, it's a pity that the protagonist is too cold and doesn't have much emotion (except for the daughter). It would be better to have more emotional interactions with the heroines.

I can't even find this book in the author column. The first light novel I read was also Yinghuo's debut novel.