The Great Realm Fruit

The writing is very good, the plot is well connected, and there are no mentally retarded supporting characters. The farming story is very heartwarming! Praise! But the suspense left is not enough. Although the suspense of the main plot is sufficient, the suspense of the branch plot can basically be guessed from the beginning, middle and later, and there is no sense of divine twist. And the relationship between the male and female protagonists always feels a bit awkward. Moreover, the excessive feeling between the spirit planting competition and going to the secret realm is not good. Going to the central realm feels like the protagonist is driven by the plot, not the protagonist's own wishes! The protagonist's golden finger currently uses spiritual stones to expand the spiritual springs and spiritual fields of his beads, while the central realm's current attraction to the protagonist is only the elixir that changes the spiritual roots. The dangers in the central realm are obviously not something that can be manipulated during the Qi training period, and the teammates are from other sects, so the dangers and rewards are not proportional. Moreover, the protagonist's golden finger is an unlimited resource type, and the quality of the spiritual roots actually has little impact on the protagonist. But being a new author is absolutely awesome! I present my monthly ticket in my hand.

The pace is indeed slow, but I don't hate it. What I want to see is not how fast the protagonist upgrades, how to clear dungeons, or how to change maps. To be honest, I am tired of seeing these routines. Almost every fantasy novel is the same. This book is roughly the same formula, but I can feel that the author is carefully shaping the world and each character in the story, and is also trying to write something different. After reading so many books, most readers actually know that the protagonist will definitely soar all the way, not to mention the Nascent Soul Mahayana Void Realm and so on. They also know that there is a big map after the Novice Village, and that in the later stage, he will soar, break through the void, etc. After all, the plots of all fantasy novels are like this. So why not write the story in more detail? As an old bookworm, the protagonist has been upgraded very quickly. , Slaps in the face and the like can no longer bring me pleasure. Every time I open a new book, I look forward to new stories, even if they are similar routines. Therefore, this "slow pace" is the most suitable for me to watch

I have read Chapter 142, and it is also the New Year. By the way, I can really tell from reading Da Jie Guo from the beginning that this is a very thoughtful book, and the author will seriously consider many details. Although many book reviewers have raised a lot of questions, it is normal. After all, there is no comparison between one person and a group of people. I also like to write, and I have been reading books for more than ten years. I always feel that the author's strengths are not fully utilized. Maybe he deliberately made them up to cater to some characteristics of online articles, such as some cool and pretentious ones, but these are more incompatible with the author, a very inconsistent feeling, and it does not match the Dajieguo. The writing is a bit tough. What kind of author is what kind of book. It is good to have a master to teach you, but I feel that the author himself is restricted. He should obviously be one. This is a book that should make people more moved and like the protagonist more. It is a book that focuses on the relationship and depicts more characters. The plot of Xianxia is a line, a world view, and a means of enriching the story. But the main dish should be those emotions that stir people's hearts. From the lines, I feel that the author should be more emotional at heart, so use your strengths. I want to see a Dajie Guo that people can still remember ten years later, and a Chen Mo that people can still remember ten years later.

It's quite good. I personally like novels that are neither impatient nor impatient, and are slowly upgraded with plug-ins. I hope the author will keep an eye on you.

Can't everyone be a little patient? Without the foreshadowing of various geniuses, how would you feel that Chen Mo is so incredible that even geniuses cannot surpass him? Moreover, with the comparison of other geniuses, Chen Mo's performance later will be even more amazing. How difficult would it be to find a book these days where even the supporting characters are so carefully crafted and not just the same? Some people think that writing supporting characters is just water, but I think the author's care and sincerity can be felt in every word. Please read it patiently, maybe you will be happy when the protagonist explodes.

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Okay, it's a bit like watching mortals back in the day. Sanjiang is finally reliable for once.

The author is so annoying, I look nervous, I obviously see hope, but the author just won't let the male protagonist succeed easily, what can I do!

This novel adopts the routine of mortal flow, but reduces the inherent coldness and jungle law in mortal flow. The appearance of the character Ye Piaoling, the senior brother, undoubtedly adds a lot of warmth to the novel. The author's description of the senior brother is not very deliberate, but it naturally makes people feel the warmth of the senior brother. The author's writing style is very good, and he has a good control over the rhythm of the article. Although the story has just unfolded, it has already given people a general understanding of the background of the world. However, there is no such thing as spending a whole chapter introducing the world. Invisibly, people have already understood the general background. Moreover, the dialogue between the characters in the article is very well described, without making people feel awkward, and full of strong ancient style. Regarding the golden finger, the author still made restrictions, but the intensity of this restriction is not very high. I don't know how the author handles this problem, but I feel that if it is not handled well, it is likely to cause the collapse of the world in the later stage. My suggestion is that the author can downplay the existence of Golden Finger like in "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality". Guiding the story to the characters and plot, I think with the author's skill, this novel may become a masterpiece. (This is my homework. If there is any offense, please forgive me)