Ace of Diamond: The Pitcher Returns

I really don't understand what benefits the author will bring to him by arranging for the protagonist to have sex with a 13-year-old underage girl?

The writing is getting better and better, but I feel like the protagonist still lacks something. The "Big Demon King" represents the final boss, which makes people feel the presence of fear and despair. Sawamura seems to not have this temperament yet. In the last year of high school, can high school students across Japan experience what "fear" and "despair" mean?

The author seems to have been reading the book circle seriously, and he was really moved. In addition, he has been reading some of the original text for a few days, so he will write about Rongjun seriously. Because I am not interested in Akagi, I started watching Qingdao, and now I see the part where the little wolf cubs and the others are taking the entrance test. The biggest feeling is the little angel written by the author. Rebirth, adult, past life superstar. Together with these attributes, the little angel must have undergone a radical change, so I watched it with a tolerant mind. But at first, it was indeed very uncomfortable, but later, there were some shining points in the author's writing that gradually moved me! I stopped now simply because Wakana's plot was too abrupt and I was so angry. It was thundering and I just wanted to do something else and write down my feelings about the little angel in the article. First of all, why is Rongjun being scolded so badly. That is really not unfair! The first is the problem of expression, which is a fatal flaw. It just so happens that the post downstairs pointed out the word "sneer", so I'll add another one, "seeking death". When I saw it, my expression was almost the same as that of Senior Di Dongqian - it was really like being struck by lightning. How could Eijun think of such words in his heart? This is like fielding on the field. There are two people on the base. The fielding could have made the catch, but you missed the catch! The opponent directly scored two points! I understand that this is all because the author was too invested in writing, and there may not be any guide who is familiar with Little Angel to help, so the sense of self-involvement is too strong. Because I really haven't seen this kind of word in the future. But such words are still in my mind and have a fixed impression. This is what readers are like. After all, reading articles is much faster than writing them. This is one of them. This is an obvious problem in terms of expression. The second one is more serious. This is a question that runs throughout the entire article. Why can Ace of Diamonds post "little angel" openly in the barrage without being scolded by fans? The direction of cursing people in the comment area is always to bully the character, rather than "shouldn't post little angels". Because Eijun is indeed an angel. Even if he works as a relief pitcher every day to clean up the mess of Jianggu, even if he is forced to get yips, even if Chunjia is benched and gets a handful of bullpen dirt, even if he knows that he is almost not expected to become an ace... After experiencing so many things, he still treats Qingdao as he always has. "There are no more people holding you back, let them see the power of Qingdao!" "Do you know why the supervisors don't care about your fate? It's because they trust your identity as the ace!" Using words that are almost masochistic to encourage and lift others up is something that ordinary people can never do. Because like a fool. But Eijun can do it. Don't he know that his behavior is stupid? No, he knew it very well! It is precisely because he has this clarity but is willing to do stupid things that he is called an "angel". Such a character is like a dazzling diamond, which cannot be erased by time. The author did not grasp the very important essence of this part of him. Eongjun in this article is too aggressive. In the original work, Eijun is definitely not like this in terms of interpersonal communication. I absolutely believe that even if he joins Qingdao as the "Demon King", the relationship between him and his seniors will not be worse, it will only be better! Sawamura Eijun is a genius in interpersonal communication, and everyone in the team dislikes him. Even soy bones and an iceberg can be melted by him. So Eijun, who joined Qingdao at the beginning, was really OOC. Being scolded is really not unjust. The reason for this distortion is probably that the author naturally added Eijun's state and sense of self-awareness during the game to the little angel state in daily life. The most taboo thing about fan fiction is too much self-introduction. Fan humanities require empathy and analysis of characters. The author has put too many filters on Rongjun. For example, his appearance is actually about the same as Koharu's cuteness, and his personality is somewhat androgynous and feminine. These are probably subconsciously ignored by the author as a straight man. Actually, I am looking forward to the author's reply after writing so much. Also why do I say polarization? Because I am indeed very satisfied with Eijun on the court. Except for the part where his character is not OK, there are many aspects of Eijun's performance in the game that make me accept that this is what Eijun will look like in the future. For example, Eijun absolutely trusts Miyuki's matchmaking. For example, Eijun is a person who thoroughly reflects on himself. For example, Eijun is absolutely dedicated to the pitcher's mound. For example, Eijun is indeed a thinking person. The author wrote that point! And behaved very well! In terms of pitchers, the research and performance of Little Angel has basically reached its peak. This part made me believe in the author's love for Ace of Diamonds. Without that love, some things simply wouldn't have the same level and feel as the original. So I skipped Wakana Chapter and am willing to write this long review. I am very grateful to the author for bringing me this fanfic. In my ideal ending, Eijun and Miyuki will be selected by the Giants together, catalyzing each other to become stronger, and finally becoming baseball legends in the major leagues. Because they are on the same team, they are definitely the best choice. It would be fine if there was no CP. It would be nice if the character of the little angel was more original. It would be fine if there were no blunt emotional lines. Unfortunately there is no if.

He is simply an original character wearing Eijun's coat. Although they are usually neither older nor younger, I respect them both in my heart and in my behavior. What is written in this chapter? "But your Kawakami's ball, how powerful is it?" "Eijun withdrew a sneer from the corner of his mouth." Haha, if the author can't control the character's personality, don't write fan fiction, just write it all original. Even if it has been ten or twenty years since Eijun graduated from professional baseball and went to play in the major leagues, the memory of Seido will be indelible. It is as if he met Kuramochi on the first day. He despised his seniors, was arrogant, and only had eyes for himself. Is this the Eijun you see?

To be honest, I was quite immersed in reading it in the early stage, because the original Little Angel was always struggling, which made me wonder what it would be like to return to the first grade after becoming an ace. This book satisfied my fantasy. It's a pity that I no longer have the motivation to read Chun Jia at the end. Although the original book is terrible, it embodies the idea of ​​​​Ace of Diamonds. However, this book no longer has this idea. It is an invincible template. I know the result of the game from the beginning of the game. The plot is like a running account, and the protagonist's personality is too different from the original book. It's a drama every minute.

After losing the second match with Narimiya Daocheng, the organizer of Koshien actually said that it would not work without Seido, especially since Sawamura brought great popularity and the match was suspenseful, so they gave him a wild card. This is poisonous. It makes it like a celebrity entertainment. It is not pure and its nature has changed. It does not rely on strength and star aura? Then there are the five major star players of Qingdao, Chen Ping of the Star of Tomorrow program group. The star nature is too rampant. After watching it, I feel that it is not a diamond, but the star pitcher is a legend.

Coming from your third book, it means that this book is completely unreadable. It is full of Long Aotian patterns from many years ago. The Great Demon King Sawamura? Demon King's Guards? Have you watched too much anime or something? This is a baseball player, not a star idol, not akb!

Overall it's pretty good-looking, but the aura of the main character is so awesome. There is no suspense about the crushing. It's okay if it's a fantasy theme, but it's a bit boring if it's a sports competition. Although the author is not forcing the protagonist team to lose, it is too much to keep a clean sheet at every turn.

I have read it three times. There is no more beautiful diamond book than this one.

Hey, forcibly weakening Qingdao's strength and increasing Daocheng's strength seems a bit boring.