I'm an Uchiha, and It's Only Fair for Everyone to Have Mangekyo

You've already fallen out, and you've given up halfway through? It's like you've already shouted the slogan of "cleansing the emperor's inner circle" and even fought your way to the capital, but then the emperor issues an edict of self-reproach and dismisses the head of the Embroidered Uniform Guard, and you obediently retreat? My assessment is that the author's skill level is on par with that of Fugaku from the original work.

What's the difference between this and attacking the capital and then telling me to retreat? After completely severing ties, you give the enemy a chance to recover and redeploy troops. And this is only when you're at a disadvantage. And this is just the beginning? Even a tomato wouldn't do something like this.

This book is utterly trashy and all talk and no action.

The protagonist retrieved Shisui's eyes from Danzo, which gave him double kaleidoscopes. Shisui could also activate kaleidoscopes with only one eye, and Fugaku most likely also had kaleidoscopes. In other words, when they confronted each other at the village entrance, they had three pairs of kaleidoscopes. In this situation, aren't you going to show off your muscles by piloting a Gundam?

I didn't expect you to still be writing Naruto fanfiction. Back in 2017 when I was in high school, I read your Naruto: A Village fanfiction and almost completely subscribed to it. Now you've been working for a year or two, and you're still writing Naruto novels.

Well, it's a nanny-style system, and the two wolf cubs survived.

Why does the author choose to focus on weaknesses and avoid strengths? Instead of writing about baseball, a genre that has proven successful, he insists on writing two Naruto books. If he wants to make money, he should follow current trends. If he wants to write about what he likes, he should continue to study baseball. If he's tired of writing Diamond, he should write about real-world baseball/MLB/JPB. Bringing the style of Japanese anime into reality is a kind of innovation, isn't it?

Or maybe I should rewrite a baseball novel.

It's still Naruto, what should we do about the previous installment?

A "hexagonal warrior" indeed! Even with the Mangekyou Sharingan, you think you're no match for the Third Hokage; only the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan makes you think you can fight him. Your strength is so weak.