Ace of Diamond: The Demon King Arrives

Japanese high school baseball has come to Koshien. There is not even a live commentary during the game. Many interesting points cannot be written. I feel that the author is still relying on the opponent's various shocks to promote the plot. I really can't stand it. It's too streamlined.

Forty chapters were written for one game, and they were paid chapters after they were released. Man, are they a bit watered down? 😅

Falling Valley is really a cheating template. It's a pity that the author's writing style is not interesting, and the reading experience is a bit poor. In addition, it is best to combine it with reality. It is very cool to drop the ball speed to 154, but if you go to 180, it will be distorted and completely meaningless. The highest ball speed in reality is only close to 170. When you go to 180, you will have no sense of substitution at all.

I remember in the anime, it was pretty cool for a normal person to break 160 in high school. Now it's 180. This is the reincarnation of a god. I don't know if a catcher, let alone a batter, can catch such a ball.

180What concept? Are aliens pitching?

A ball speed of 180 kilometers is not as good as understanding a different dimension.

Fanggu has improved his ball control ability. He has that super high-speed ball that is really invincible. He can also practice vertical sliders and crossballs early. He also has strong hitting ability and can shoot and hit yyds!

There are too many narrations in recent chapters. There is no description of the plot and no psychological activities of the characters. Only narrations account for one-third.

Things that can be said in one sentence must be described in two or even three paragraphs, which is very disturbing to the senses.

If you don't want to write it, don't write it. Just go to the finals. Write about youth and return to the field. You might as well write about super powers. It's quite down-to-earth in the first place, but as you write it, you get carried away. You're a newbie.