Ace of Diamond: The Power Hitter Arrives

Alas, the author keeps writing about the restrictions on Zhang Han's pitching, which are not good for his health or his future career. I looked at the catalog and saw that you are just writing about a profession. You just sealed the protagonist's magic skill so abruptly. If you plan to continue to write about a profession, that's all. You didn't write about a profession and you still keep such restrictions. I feel so uncomfortable. What's the point? Why not just let go of writing and let readers read it happily?

I saw the title of the book and came in to take a look. When I looked at the author, it was you again.

Celebrating the 1000th chapter update of Little Bear's book, this is Little Bear's third Diamond A. During this period of more than a year, Little Bear has been read by other readers frequently. The update is too slow and too watery. There are too many unnecessary things. Although Little Bear's update is indeed no longer the fifth-generation bear baby of the year, but everyone should know that it is not easy for Little Bear to persist in writing such a niche subject for a long time. I wish that Little Bear will write better and better in the future, and also hope that Little Bear can return to his former five-minute update as soon as possible🐻

Cool, three and a half stars. Writing, three and a half stars. Character, three and a half stars. Plot, four stars. Story structure, Samsung. Overall rating, 17.5 Stars. The book is a bit niche, but the various settings and the excitement of the game scenes are pretty good. If you like sports and competitive writing, you can take a look. Food and grass are abundant, but grass jelly is insufficient.

This is the third baseball book I have read about Flying Bear, and to be honest, this one is the worst. It's too watery. The actual content of almost every chapter is less than one-third. Most of the time it is analysis. Many times, one chapter is written in one ball. Compared with the pace of the previous two books, this book is too loose. You can skip three chapters after reading one chapter.

You are so good now. There is no need to repeat these introductions over and over again. It is just like trying to make up the word count

After raising you for at least half a year, you still haven't reached a career. . Hurry up🤫

Too much nonsense! ! Total nonsense

Don't you feel that the more you write, the more you write? The pace is really slow. A game has about 25 chapters and about 60,000 words. At least 20,000 words of the content are character descriptions outside of the heart's language. Plus other dispensable and repeated sentences, at least 30,000 words are unnecessary or reduced. In the past, all chapters were ordered, but now you only need to read the beginning and watch the ending 🙂

Please help all book friends to make some contributions every day and strive to reach the third level of the book friend circle as soon as possible to get the activity fund (if you find it troublesome, you can also vote for more monthly votes, and there are also monthly votes for the top 100) 🤓