Ace of Diamond: The Power Hitter Arrives

Sigh, the author keeps writing about the limitations of Zhang Han's pitching, saying things like it's bad for his body and bad for his future career. I looked at the table of contents, and you're not even writing about a professional career! You're just sealing off one of the protagonist's amazing skills.

I came in to take a look because of the book title. Looking at the author, oh, it's you again.

Celebrating the release of Chapter 1000 of this book by Xiaoxiong! This is Xiaoxiong's third A-level book, and it's been over a year since then. During this time, Xiaoxiong has often been criticized by other readers for the slow updates, the lack of substance, and the excessive amount of unnecessary content.

It's enjoyable, 3.5 Stars. Writing style: 3.5 Stars. Character, 3.5 Stars. Plot: 4 stars. Story structure: 3 stars. Overall rating: 17.5 Stars. The book is a bit niche, but the various settings and exciting match scenes are quite good. Those who like sports novels might want to check it out. There's plenty of good content, but not many great reads.

This is the third baseball book I've read by Flying Bear, and to be honest, this is the worst. It's too padded; almost every chapter contains less than a third of the actual content, mostly consisting of analysis. Often, a single ball is the subject of a whole chapter. Compared to the previous two books, this one is too loosely paced, making it easy to skip three chapters while reading one.

You're being so vague lately; these introductions are unnecessary and just repeating themselves like you're padding the word count.

I've been supporting you for at least six months, and you still haven't reached a professional level. Hurry up! 🤫

Too much nonsense!! The whole thing is just drivel.

Doesn't it feel like the writing is getting increasingly padded? The pacing is really slow. A single match is about 25 chapters and 60,000 words long, of which at least 20,000 words are character descriptions outside of the main plot. Add to that other unnecessary and repetitive sentences, and at least 30,000 words are either unnecessary or reduced in length. I used to subscribe to every chapter, but now I only need to read the beginning and the ending. 🙂

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