My Manga Artist Strategy Guide

Please support the author. The book is actually good. I quite like the rhythm and have already subscribed to it. However, I would like to make a few suggestions from my personal point of view: 1. So far, the comic that impressed me the most is "Chess Soul". I believe most readers have this feeling. Although I am writing about steel training so far, my impression is far less profound than that of "Chess Soul". The portrayal of "Chess Soul" is more vivid and vivid. It is recommended to write it. Readers can appropriately improve the sense of immersion and description in comics, because many people have not read comics. From another perspective, reading a story alone and listening to others telling stories are two completely different feelings. However, the current description of Steel Refining feels a little awkward. I feel that the author hesitated between detailed and abbreviated writing, resulting in the plot of Steel Refining not being deep enough. In fact, for the novel, it is not a good thing. 2. Let's talk about a few regrettable places. The Beidou Cup movie version should be a big hit. Since it has not been produced in reality, it must be an indelible regret for most readers, so the author should use his ideas more freely in the novel. , Allowing the Beidou Cup to truly appear in the reader's field of vision, and allowing this two-dimensional world to truly collide with the three-dimensional world, but unfortunately, it is not developed here, especially because the rendering and appeal of the movie are stronger. As a reader, I have not seen it, so I just skipped it, which is a pity. 3. It can be regarded as the part about animation. It has less to do with the protagonist, which makes this part of the plot a bit embarrassing. What is related to the protagonist is the selection of the company. For the production of subsequent animations, the protagonist has no role at all. This is probably the same in life, but it is not good to write like this in novels. This is why many people write system flow novels. Therefore, by adding a universal system plug-in, the protagonist becomes omnipotent, making it easier for all parts to be connected with the protagonist and preventing the plot from being awkward. For example, letting the protagonist participate in the selection of voice actors and the production of animation can enhance the sense of participation. For example, in terms of the expression of some pictures, animation is not necessarily better than comics, and this can also be reflected. In fact, there are also realities. For example, in Dragon Ball, the animation is not as good as the manga. There is also Rurouni Kenshin. The animated version of Kenshin is several dimensions worse than the manga. 4. The protagonist's drawing skills are not described in detail. In fact, he was a third-rate cartoonist at the beginning. This is a vague cartoonist grade classification, but it has not been continued in the future, nor has the concept of cartoonist classification been strengthened. The protagonist goes directly to the top level. This is not a big problem, but as a reader, I actually enjoy the plot where the protagonist's drawing skills are loved by others. In the middle, the character design of the senior sister's game is actually very good, but the problem is not developed, and the lack of a protagonist The hard work of creating a character, and the follow-up development after the completion of the character design. Although this plot exists, it can still be summarized. For example, if you add some players' praise for this character, this plot can actually intuitively reflect the protagonist's drawing skills. For example, add a small easter egg to the character, or what awards the game character will win later, or write about the topic of the comic exhibition. Especially at the comic exhibition, this can more intuitively reflect the popularity of the protagonist. Then there is the possibility of giving the protagonist an award for his painting achievements, and arranging lectures. Giving lessons to peers is also a very typical example of attracting readers, for example, Zuo Yuan? To use an analogy. Let's write these first. It's too hard to press the phone. Come on, author.

After reading a few chapters, I was really discouraged. The protagonist got a golden finger of all the comic memories from his previous life. As a result, he kept making up some bad stories on his own. I was embarrassed and panicked. I don't know if there will be changes in the future. But if a novel starts with a few poisonous points and forcibly dissuades readers, it will be difficult to attract readers no matter how good the subsequent plot is.

The reason why the last copy of the book was abandoned was because almost half of the book was written. There is a more important point, as you said in your book, cartoonists should just draw cartoons properly and leave other things to the editor. As a result, your copywriter doesn't do the copywriter's work. The first and middle chapters are all about intrigues. What's the use of this plug-in? What I want to see is the merciless crushing of a good work and the proof of "power". Instead of finally succeeding after all the hard work Maybe this is the author's idea, but the subject matter and introduction should attract people's attention. This idea should be mine.

Rubbish novel, I can only say that your novel is just like the original comics in it, which makes me sick to my stomach.

Among the comic novels I have read, I personally feel that the one with the best pacing is (a certain mangaka who is a sophomore). It depicts an evenly matched showdown between cartoonists based on the rhythm of the Dream Eater fandom, rather than a one-man show by the protagonist. It feels good (the manga is so embarrassing). This book also has this trend, a strong showdown rather than a crushing one, a showdown between newcomers, a strong counterattack by veteran cartoonists, and a challenge from the rise of younger cartoonists. It feels much better to watch than a plot that is purely copied from comics and repeated over and over again. The pace of this book is very good, not too fast, and certainly not fast-paced. Don't quickly skip the duels with other cartoonists just for the sake of fun, causing comics to be written out like an assembly line. This is not fun. The plot of the author's micro-original comic is very good. The non-full-text copy adapted from the classic comic will have more plots to describe. As for other online novels, comic adaptations, martial arts novels, movie scripts, etc., There are so many secondary creations that can be described, why do you have to read Japanese comics that repeat the same routine one after another? As for the rest, I don't feel very good about being a supervisor, producer, peripherals, and personal weekly. I just draw comics well and add some daily life at Microsoft. A novel is enough. Don't be too greedy for business. Even after the period when money is urgently needed in the later period, you should not put too much emphasis on the royalties and adaptation fees, and try to be as vague as possible. Secondary creation of comic adaptations and micro-original creations are two good medicines that I personally think can help this type of novel avoid being so boring in the future. As for using daily life to enrich the plot, well, Tokyo Gentleman Story, this book can be said to have surpassed the daily life, and we can learn from it. After reading many such novels, I personally feel that the author should not be disturbed too much and can delete them if it is inconvenient.

Stay away from Song Ren as soon as possible

Those who read comics and write books like novels are all here for copywriting. Who wants to see you write original works?

I am convinced by time travel and originality. Anyway, I am confused. I don't know what you are writing. I have a feeling of nothingness.

It feels like the author is deliberately suppressing the protagonist. Even without the three capsules, the protagonist travels to another world and relies on the settings of the comics in his memory. His ability can reach 70. With the addition of three capsules, the ability is 200. As a result, the author's various operations successfully pushed the protagonist to the line of 50.

The book is very good, but I really struggled with the fact that after the protagonist traveled to a parallel world, he did not copy the work but wanted to be original. It is rare for me to copy a comic that is not that popular now and has never been read by a nerd 😅. This is like a child of a few years old who goes to school, eats and clothes, but insists on making money by himself without using their parents. When you look at this kind of person, you will feel one word: work! It's really boring. If you want to be original, just write a story about working hard on Earth. Writing a story about traveling to a world without Earth comics to draw original comics is simply unreasonable! 😆