Naruto: the Strongest Insect Master

This book is just a little bit addictive in its plot, but the rest is okay! I really couldn't stand the part where Haku was abandoned by Zabuza. The main reason is that I couldn't stand the relationship between the characters. The protagonist had a good impression of Naruto as soon as he came out, and later on he desperately wanted to save Haku. These plots are a bit too poisonous for me and feel a bit abrupt. The foreshadowing of saving Bai is just one or two sentences, and the dialogue is very sympathetic to Bai's experience. I think it would be better if the origin of the plot could be more complete. 😂😂😂 (Personal opinion, and I haven't read the rest, please don't mind if there are any deviations.)

For every genius who travels to Naruto, there will be a Danzo who will forcefully invite him back and want to forcibly control the protagonist, whether the protagonist is an Uchiha, a Byakugan or a member of the Senju clan (of course this is just a metaphor), and then the protagonist resists and kills the Roots and his gang. Is this Danzo so unscrupulous? What makes me complain about Naruto fics recently is that whenever Danzo invites ninjas, they are killed by the protagonist during the invitation. You are also a Konoha ninja, and you are just inviting me. Before they even attack you, the protagonist immediately resists and kills you. Damn it, I have watched this plot too much, I think it is the problem of the protagonist.

Isn't Danzo afraid of causing public outrage by doing this to the nephew of a family patriarch, especially in peaceful times? Especially since he had already taken advantage of special circumstances to force a family ninja and asked someone to work for him. It is estimated that a tacit understanding has been reached, and only one person is interested. He can deal with the Uchiha family unscrupulously because they seek death, and at the same time he has the acquiescence of the harmonious and amiable Hokage-sama in the author's words. At the same time, other families also deliberately want a piece of the Uchiha pie.

Just kidding, the third generation is a good person

Brief review of "The Shock of Naruto": Looking at this work, the words are smooth and full of description, and there is no impetuousness between the lines but a sense of sincerity. Yu Qingran followed him for a long time, and when he looked back, he suddenly felt confused - it seemed that he hadn't seen the "Jingwei Heavenly Man" for a long time. (I wanted to say this a long time ago, the author has such a good temper) ——A well-known person who generally expressed encouragement does not have

What I admire about the author is not the writing style, nor the subject matter, nor even the imagination and character setting, but the mentality is one of the best authors I have ever seen. He is self-deprecating and truthful and has a high level of self-awareness. Both trolls and readers can read the comments with an open mind. Overall, if the full score is 100 points, the average score for each item is 20. Writing 9 points 12 points for theme The character setting is 3 points (the N (brain) C (disabled) guard (Eemon) with extremely bad personality, seems to be a zz-like Danzo, plus the green tea version of the scheming B Yakumo, which makes people feel simple when watching it. Fortunately, the original characters have not changed that much, but there are still some changes. The world view style in the article is very similar to the modern China + Naruto world style, and the dialogue is even more bizarre. What a young boy, a street boy, and I have said this 236 times more than the chapters) 15 points for very good imagination. The locations in Sage Mode, Sage, and Tosai are quite good. The last point is character, character and mentality. If the average score for one item is 20 points, I will give you 25 points. Overall, in my eyes, this book has: 25+3+9+12+15=64 points

I saw that the protagonist was under a genjutsu and he gave up decisively when he saw a ghost. He knew it was Naruto and had just rejected Danzo. He was under a genjutsu and still pretended to be a ghost. He was really like ZZ.

The protagonist is so stupid. He has been over 40 years old in two lifetimes. He makes a fuss and shouts when something happens. He is still calmer than a 12-year-old brother.

It's actually pretty good to watch, except that the pig's feet are often too weak and the emotional scenes look like he's feeding shit.

Too poisonous, the front and back settings are opposite. This entomologist's virtue makes me laugh to death.

No wonder the eunuch, the protagonist is like a 250-year-old man, he's making noises

This book is poisonous and I strongly encourage you to withdraw from it.

This book is so poisonous that I couldn't resist it past chapter 30

The comment section is really unsightly and I can understand why the author stopped writing.

Well, this book is already a eunuch, right?

You can read Chapter 23 first. If you feel you can bear it, then read it from the beginning. Don't be insulted by your intelligence.

The biggest thing about this book is that there is nothing to watch

The setting is good, but the writing is like a piece of shit, and you still want to hit the wall? The author's writing style is probably that of a primary school student.

The most interesting thing about this novel is that it has no interesting points. Abandon books.

After reading this book, the ability system is quite good. It's just that the protagonist's character is so disgusting.

The heroine Eemon is made to be really annoying, and the author enjoys being tortured. She is extremely poisonous.

It's better to ask the strongest talker to escape. After learning the tricks of the prince, his strength is even uglier than the prince's. After reading more than a hundred chapters, if he hadn't taken advantage of the prophet, he probably wouldn't even have the strength of an elite chuunin, the strongest insect master. I haven't seen him develop any secret techniques, and he has never studied insects. At first, I thought it was a book about genes, but I didn't expect it to be a book about mouth escape. Well.

I was really speechless watching it, it was disgusting.

I am recommending a new book "Job Jumping from Paradise". The Death/Fire/Sea fandom is very arrogant in the introduction. It even adds unlimited streams and the classification of the universe. Everyone please laugh at it with me

To be honest, the fact that you wrote the three golden chapters so unattractively is also a sign of your ability. Do you know what it means if you omit it in detail? Who the hell cares about Shino's fucking name!

If you don't tear down the cp and you don't destroy the original work, if you write it according to the original plot, then I'll be confused?

The first 23 chapters are quite well written.

Why do people who write about Naruto write about mass funerals? There are so many conspiracy theories about mass funerals. I saw the emergence of mass funerals. I lost my appetite and wanted to jump to the moment of his death. When I read novels, I want to read them to be entertained, not to be annoyed and hold my breath in my heart.

I'd rather the protagonist have sex with Bai than the right gatekeeper.

Bland and unattractive,