The Evil God of Hogwarts

After reading Chapter 20, I feel that the author's writing and opening are very good, but the results are not very good. I personally think there may be two reasons (both reasons made me not want to read it for a while). The first is the inexplicable Oriental opening and the repeated emphasis on racial discrimination brought about by it. There is no mention of racial discrimination in the original Harry Potter books. I don't understand why the author insists on emphasizing this point. You know Orientals like us are the ones who read the book, so it would be very uncomfortable to be the protagonist. The second reason is the lack of satisfaction mentioned above. In fact, the author can write about being discriminated against, which forms the "inhibition" in the plot of the novel. If there is a slap in the face immediately afterwards, it will be very satisfying, but I saw in Chapter 20 that the protagonist, as the hero who saved the train, needs bribes to enter the campus gate, which is extremely poisonous. After all, if you like online articles, you just want to have fun. No one likes to watch the protagonist who is a dog-licker. The author can think about it, if the plot of the protagonist returning to campus is to be praised by others, then the "repression" in the previous article will be "exaggerated" here, and 20 chapters will be used to form a small climax of the whole work. Isn't this a good start? The above is my humble opinion. I really can't bear to read such a thoughtful novel but it doesn't have the results it deserves, so I can't help but say a few more words.

Please give me some suggestions. This book is hopeless, but I hope the author's future books will get better and better. 1. The issue of world view, Harry Potter is a popular fairy tale, and its tone is also a fairy tale. The readers who got into the trap first came for Harry Potter. Although Cthulhu has become popular, many of them are Yun fans. I don't have a deep understanding of Cthulhu's desperate worldview. This worldview conflicts with the tone of Harry Potter. It is best to use the Harry Potter worldview as the master, and add evil monsters to weaken the sense of existence of the despair worldview. 2. Racial discrimination also conflicts with Harry Potter's worldview. Although there is a conflict between nobles and Muggle-borns in the original book, this conflict is more similar to the conflict between the base and the contempt of the superiors. Similar to the rich looking down on the poor. The poor hate the rich. In the end, the nobles were miserable. 3. Stop creating this kind of protagonist who wants to go home! It fell out of fashion a long time ago. As a new author, you don't have the luxury of being willful. A large part of reading online articles is to escape from boring and realistic reality. It's like you are trying to break the reader's dream, and you will definitely be dissuaded. But it cannot be completely disregarded by reality. There is a certain degree of control. This depends on the individual's ability to control. 4. People who escape reality are unwilling to accept a more tragic and dull illusory world. If it is not enjoyable enough, or if the protagonist is a little bit abusive, many readers will not want to continue reading. After staying up all night, I am really tired, so I will just write this much. I hope I will get better results in my next book. Goodbye. ps Internet uncle can hardly tolerate the author's willfulness. There is no shame in catering to readers. You can also see many great writers catering to readers, such as the happy ending of the third young master of the Tang family.

I don't understand. If I'm not recommended, my collection is very stable. If I'm recommended, I'll lose a lot of hair. Are you trying to compete with me for hair loss?

You find a yellowed job posting on a street corner billboard. You read curiously and found that an organization you had never heard of was recruiting adventurers. Because the rewards are huge, you plan to give it a try. Volume 2 of the secret room is about to begin, recruit characters and leave your investigators behind.

This book is really a breath of fresh air in HP. I finally left the ivory tower of school and entered the real world. The book's HP + Cthulhu worldview completes the world to your liking, and it is no longer a monotonous world with low magic. In terms of content: solving the case + setting up the plot + exploring the truth + human feelings and sophistication + detailed description/foreshadowing + storyboards of each character, it makes people read it in one go. It is worth savoring carefully and hearing the thunder in the silent place. [Human beings are complex animals, but this is not the reason why you become a monster. I'm not doing it for so-called justice, I have my own reasons. PS: In Britain at that time, racism was really real. . . PPS: And... Author, although I like your book very much, it is really not good to implicitly attack other protagonists in the book, which makes people uncomfortable (><)

First, the overall evaluation: This is a good book. It is not so much a Harry Potter fanfic as it is a Cthulhu novel that borrows some basic settings from the Harry Potter world. It is not suitable for ordinary Harry Potter fans, but is suitable for regular fans, "Plague Doctor" fans and readers who consider themselves old or above. Let's go into details slowly: After reading about 30 chapters, I must say that the author's writing style and character creation are actually quite good. But after reading it further, my overall feeling was that the atmosphere was depressing, and I even felt "tired from reading". From the plot I read, the Ministry of Magic is a decadent and rigid thousand-year-old castle, while Hogwarts is a heretical fortress led by Dumbledore. The two families are hostile to each other. The only thing they have in common is that they are wary, suspicious, trying to take advantage of, and full of hostility towards the protagonist. As for the protagonist himself, he looks like he has many secrets that he has not revealed. Intuitively, he is either a "traitor" who ran away resolutely after a conflict with his family, or an orphan who lives outside and has a blood feud. This determines that the tone of this book must be depressing, wandering among various conflicts, and may become more and more depressing and dark as the plot develops. Readers need a certain amount of patience to continue reading, especially if they have not received positive feedback for a long time. By the way: It is of course the author's freedom to set the background of the novel in this way, but if the Harry Potter world originated from fairy tales is written into a realistic or even dark world, most readers who read the Harry Potter theme will be maladaptive. The author had better be mentally prepared. In addition, according to the orthodox line of suppression, evil gods and certain families cannot be seen directly or even heard. The protagonist is likely to be able to barely survive after trying hard, which may be regarded as an abuse of the master. But if this book follows the Japanese Cthulhu style, the protagonist may be able to defeat or drive away the evil god. There is also the question of whether his combat power is heaven-defying and how to complete it from the perspective of the power system. Moreover, for Japanese Cthulhu, the atmosphere should be more relaxed.

The original picture was drawn by Klein and his wife GauraL on LOFTER Hmm. It still feels more similar to Xingze, temperament + tentacles emmm... (If there is any inappropriateness/infringement, I will delete it immediately)

I felt that the writing was really good. I felt a bit confused after reading the title of the book before, but when Long Kong recommended the book, I came in and took a look. It was really well written. It is not like the vision of those Harry Potter classmates, but the vision of Harry Potter teacher. It can be said that Harry Potter fan fiction is novel and unique. Combined with the Cthulhu style, I personally feel very good. Others say that we should rely more on Harry. I'm tired after reading too many Harry fanfics, and I just want a novel vision. The background Harry, the real Cthulhu incident is also very good. Harry Potter only goes to school for 7 years in total. How many things will Harry write in 7 years? And with Harry as the background, it continues to expand, and Harry is slowly extradited to 7 years later... In short, I think this book is very good. It can also be said that it fills in the gaps in Harry fan fiction, it depends on other people's preferences. The reason why I didn't read it before was because I read the book title Hogwarts: The Evil God. My first impression was that modern people traveled to the Harry Potter world and became evil gods. They are basically the best fighting force in the Harry Potter world. They are simply like Long Aotian. I don't want to read it at all. But Long Kong pushed the book in and looked at it, and found that it was not like this, but the world of Harry Potter + Cthulhu. And the g-spots are suitable everywhere, it can be said to be a real herb. Wish the author a big hit🔥

Well written. Keep writing.

I have always believed that HP and Cthulhu actually have many places where they can be integrated. As the saying goes, everything can be Cthulhu 😁😁😁. I offer my monthly ticket in the hope that the author can continue to work hard.