Naruto the Strongest Kakashi

Your writing style is really white. The dialogue between several characters is "Sandai Dao" and "Kakashi Dao". It's tiring to watch it all the time. Learn how to describe the dialogues of some characters, and if your writing is concise, more people will definitely read it.

Generally speaking, the writing style is okay, but the main plot is a bit strange. A lot of content is not explained in the front but is added later, and there is not much foreshadowing, which is very abrupt. The last boss is Orochimaru, which is a bit awkward. Orochimaru obtained the traveler's notes. Without any foreshadowing, the protagonist suddenly remembered that he had written a Chinese note and it was stolen by Orochimaru. Moreover, Orochimaru was translated perfectly. Although the Chinese and Japanese are somewhat similar, the meaning of the same word is too different. If there is no Chinese language environment, it would be the Book of Heaven. I can't understand this setting. I hope the author can consider this for his future novels.

If the author is not writing about a fan, then he can write whatever he wants. After all, the final right of interpretation belongs to the author. But if he is writing about a fan, can he respect the original work? Even if you don't respect the original work, you should understand the timeline. I burst out laughing when I saw Orochimaru defecting. Orochimaru defected because the Fourth Hokage ran for election and was betrayed by Danzo. Of course, it could also be Jiraiya's betrayal. After all, as a companion, Jiraiya He would know nothing about Orochimaru. After all, Jiraiya had to support his disciple to rise to power. He probably did not expect Orochimaru to defect directly. After all, the first-generation cell experiment, let alone ordinary villagers, even the Senju clan did not know that he had been captured. How much? It is estimated that the disappearance of the Senju clan later is directly related to this. Orochimaru's actions are not worth mentioning compared to Danzo and the third generation's first-generation cell experiment. Although he cannot become Hokage, there will be no big punishment. After all, the third generation wants to suppress It's very simple to go. Seeing that Danzo has been living well, you can know that at most there will be a clue to be caught in the hands of the third generation. As long as he is in Konoha, he cannot escape the control of the third generation. However, he did not expect that Orochimaru has his own dignity, betrayal of friendship, and Disappointed with the Third Generation, he immediately broke away and defected. The reason why Jiraiya went to pursue Orochimaru after Kushina became pregnant was not only to make up for the friendship between his companions, but also because of his guilt for Orochimaru. After he supported Minato's candidacy for Hokage, their friendship deteriorated. It has already broken down, and the friendship has been put behind the master-disciple relationship by him, so Orochimaru has always scorned Jiraiya's behavior. In his opinion, Jiraiya is very hypocritical like the third generation, with double standards for others and himself. He claims to like Tsunade, but always He showed that he valued friendship but gave his friend a knife at the critical moment. He said that he valued Naruto but ignored him for twelve years. It was not until Naruto was able to support himself that he pretended to be a good person. The important thing is to spend Naruto's money often. You know It is very difficult for Naruto to save money as a genin, but it is not without cost for Naruto to learn ninjutsu from him. Jiraiya is completely unworthy of Naruto's feelings for him. Naruto's thoughts are very twisted. Do you think Naruto's thoughts are healthy? My opponent has tortured me thousands of times, and I feel for my enemy like my first love. Like Naruto, who was tortured since childhood and turned into a saint by being tortured. Isn't this kind of thinking twisted? Just like the Manchu Qing Dynasty regarded the Han people as slaves, but the Han people regarded Kangxi as the Holy Emperor?

After reading about ten chapters, well, I would rather the author added cheats to the protagonist, which is better than changing the settings of the original work randomly.

Although it is a time-travel work, the protagonist truly cares about the people around him and is very immersive. It's passionate, heartwarming, and touching. It's a masterpiece among Naruto fans! However, there are still some shortcomings. In the early stage, it was relatively novice, the emotional description was slightly poor, and the logic was also flawed. Later, it improved. I've read a few Naruto fanfics and I still think this is a good story~

Water experience, and also hope that the author can write better and better

This is a Kakashi who is truly integrated into the world of Naruto, with sincere emotions and full personality. The protagonist is neither mindless nor masochistic. Overly stable, not pretentious, not slap in the face, not a noob, and has a good manner. Anyway, I like this kind of writing very much. I don't have many monthly votes and recommendation votes, so I've already given them to you. Big boost for the author.

Please just read Chapter 600. The writing is good, but the latter part is too poisonous and even makes people feel sick. Orochimaru stole the Hokage diary written by the protagonist and knew everything. He also ate the fruit of the sacred tree. He became invincible and became the last big boss. As a result, Orochimaru also traveled to another world. He may be able to dominate other worlds. Where is Kakashi. . He was instantly reduced to a supporting role, so the protagonist is Orochimaru, who is so awesome. I feel that all the stories about Kakashi that I took the exam before were all in vain. They are all foreshadowing Orochimaru's invincibility later. . . I really don't know how to describe it. I'm really angry. It doesn't matter if the whole article is not good, but the author's previous writing was very good, and then suddenly it took a turn, and it felt like he had eaten shit.

You may not believe it, but I only know all the plots of anime such as Naruto, One Piece, Fairy Tail, etc. By watching the same anime.

Forget about the crazy second setting of the novel, a lot of skills were added to Kakashi, but in the end, in order to balance the plot, his strength is still mediocre. Do you have the nerve to mock Kakashi for being 50-50? The writing is very poor, and the psychological descriptions and behavioral dialogues are just like those of elementary school students.

The God of Ninja World and Shura Ninja World also have such silly and cute moments~ The deep-rooted tsundere attribute of the Uchiha clan is also hopeless, but now that Kakashi has come to this era, hasn't he done anything? Has the tragedy of two great men remained unchanged? I always feel that people like Madara are unwilling to be deceived by a false dream for decades. It is most appropriate for people like him to live a vigorous and arrogant life, rather than being tricked and staying underground for decades, and finally being betrayed by Black Zetsu. However, Kakashi's personality should not tolerate such a situation between Madara and Hashira. After all, the two of them will also be included in Kakashi's protective circle.

How did White Fang die? Do you have such respect for the third generation? Traveling back in time to know the plot, but not thinking about revenge? It's Kakashi you traveled through! It was okay after reading a few pictures, but I couldn't figure it out about the Third Generation. Danzo, the Third Generation, and the advisors were all afraid of White Fang, so why should they respect the Third Generation! I really can't stand it anymore

It's tasteless because he's weak as hell, overpowering in battle, useless, and doesn't have 10% of Kakashi's original charm. Even though he knows all the plot, he's still 50/50, and he's even died. What's the strongest point? ? ? It's a pity to abandon it because there are not many stories about the protagonist Kakashi. It is the only long novel I found, but I still clicked on it ten times and couldn't finish it ten times. I sincerely plead, please don't write emotional scenes in male channels. They are awkward ones. When it comes to emotional scenes, they are all written with a lot of descriptions of body shapes, and the male protagonist is instantly wretched.

Feeling hopeless about the world? Feeling hopeless about life? , Want to know the meaning of the world? Want to understand the true meaning of life? I heard that there is a certain chance of traveling through this building!

Keywords: blunt, not decisive in killing, primary school student writing style, naive, taking it for granted, one sentence makes me feel frustrated and annoyed, bye!

I heard that Orochimaru deciphered Kakashi's Chinese diary? Is it true?

The final boss is Orochimaru, do you understand?

This book is a type of book that gets better the more you write it, the more you read it, the more interesting it becomes. Kakashi is very expressive, emotionally focused, and there is no confusing mess. The character description is also on point. There is nothing black for the sake of being black. Even Danzo has his shining points. To be honest, many Naruto fans mess with the characters and even make them OOC. No matter how good they are, I can't stand it. Especially for Uchiha Control, do you really understand their positioning when you hack them? This is a family of love. It is really well written in large letters. The situation of Itachi and Shisui struggling to swim between the two sides is very realistic. Kakashi is also charming. He has further improved on the original basis. He has not lost the reputation of his father White Fang, which can make more people love and admire him. It is true to the plot and helps Shisui and Itachi. Very good, much better than the ending of the original work. I have never felt sorry for my mentor. In Naruto's dark life, he became a beam of light that illuminated his path and saved more people. I believe he can bring better development to the ninja world. After all, he is the new Kakashi who combines Kakashi and the soul of another world. He has a vision beyond one world.

I have to say that this is the most attentive Naruto fanfic I have ever seen. I have read more than 20 Naruto fanfics and I am basically not very satisfied with it. I have only read ten chapters of this one so far, but there are highlights. The author is very attentive and has been chasing Naruto for twelve years. This is a passionate story that has accompanied my youth. Come on, author.

Kakashi's Naruto book was recommended by others, but I was a little disappointed when I came here to read it. Are kids playing house? In addition to letting the protagonist steal the show, doesn't this plot need to be more rigorous and reasonable? After reading Chapter 47, I really can't help but complain and get some information. Not to mention that Nima is still within the safety range of the village. Nima, there is a Jounin Kakashi here, but he actually wants a Chuunin to be the captain. Haha, the reason is because that Chuunin has done such a mission? ? ? Is the author awake? Do you know how Kakashi became a Jonin? How many missions did Kakashi complete to become a Jonin? Just to lead to a later plot where the protagonist pretends to be a bitch? Is it so disgusting? Forget it if a chuunin is the captain. It doesn't matter if you want to see how far behind a jounin you are and force him to challenge him in a duel. In anime, how about getting to know aristocratic ninjas and commoner ninjas? Can you check the ANBU in Naruto? They are just pretending to be cool, but it's just a plot in their head.

I have read many Naruto fanfics. If I rank the Naruto fanfics I have read, this one can only be ranked fourth or fifth. First: "Naruto: The Savior" (completed) Second: "The World of Naruto in the Eyes of Reincarnation" (updated to the later version of 1,100 chapters). If this book is completed, it will be tied for first. Third: "Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi" (completed) Fourth: "Naruto: The Strongest Water Release" (completed, written about Sakura) Tie for fourth place is "Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi" There is also a book "Naruto: Controlling Time from the beginning" which I think is similar to this one, but it only has 180 chapters and is not finished

The protagonist wrote a Chinese Hokage diary, but Orochimaru got it and translated it. As a result, the final boss turned out to be Orochimaru, and he actually let Orochimaru escape, which was a bit poisonous. . .

I've reached chapter 539 and don't want to read any more. There are a lot of poison points, a lot of poison points on the Danzo line, a lot of poison points on the emotional line. There are also many other small poisonous spots. Basically, it was concentrated in the early stage of this book. I thought I had survived, but at this point I was still addicted. I was really speechless.

This emotional line is about to poison me 😰😰😰 If you don't know how to write it, you don't have to write it.

I feel that other gods are different from Infinite Tsukuyomi. It should not be a continuous illusion. It should directly change the underlying logic of thinking after being used once. Therefore, if you want to make other gods invalid, you should use a similar technique to other gods to change the underlying logic of thinking back again. But in this book, the other gods are a continuous technique. As long as the other gods no longer continue, the other gods will be ineffective. It can be said that the power of the other gods against the single illusion ceiling has been greatly weakened.

I used to watch pirated copies, now I'm making a new apprenticeship 🙂

How did the author come up with the idea of ​​using Raikiri to penetrate the fire escape? People are not afraid of being burned to death in fire.

This is a relatively bland novel. . But I think the ending is a little bit toxic. The early stage is continuous and strong. . If you like to read cool articles, it may be a bit uncomfortable. I think it's okay😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

It's hard to say anything else, but the emotional aspect is really bad.

Well, I haven't watched much Naruto. I would like to ask if you have a fairy body and other various physiques and special chakra, can you resist the side effects of Kaiyakai? Bamen Dunjia doesn't look like it's meant for self-destruction, hehehe, it sounds more like a buff.