I, Kimimaro, Seek Immortality!

Taking immortality as the main route is quite good, but I personally feel that there is no need to deliberately emphasize immortality, immortality, etc. It seems a bit awkward.

The pursuit of immortality flow seems to be quite popular recently, and I personally like it very much. Kimimaro suggested that we get a pair of high-purity Byakugan in the future. I have always felt that the Byakugan and the Corpse Veins are a good match. After all, they are also the eyes of immortals and the human body of immortals, and they are also very beneficial for subsequent surgical operations. 🙂 Corpse Bone Pulse is still more suitable for the fighting type. Personally, I feel that Kimimaro's dance of Hayabusa at the end of the original work is not as good as earth escape field control. If the bones are combined with Kakuzu's earth spear hardening technique, it may be good. There is no need to pursue a Gundam like Susana. The Gundam does not match the bone skills. If you must have a Gundam, you might as well just create another system of skills.

The most annoying thing now is being in the world of Naruto. I don't have to use ninjutsu or taijutsu. I have to use things from the pirate world. I'm speechless.

Now that I see it, my interest is almost gone, and the recent plot has been dragging on. You wrote it well in the early stage, why do you have to side with Konoha now?

I remember a fan said that Kimimaro's blood disease was due to the awakening of the trait of sharing the ashes of killing. It feels more reasonable. I hope the author can refer to it and cure it. It feels like Orochimaru is useless...

It feels like the author wants to do everything, everything is complete, and he gives the protagonist so many abilities that are of little use, and only a few are enough in real battles. It cannot be that more is better but more precise is better. He has many abilities and can do everything.

Daily poison😠😠😠

The system gives the protagonist various magical transformation skills in the world, and he can actually teach them to others, which is a bit poisonous 😰😰😰

Last but not least, to be honest, apart from fighting, daily writing is really not fun. Naruto is not suitable for substituting too many dark politics, otherwise it will immediately deviate from the theme. What are all the readers who watch Naruto doing? Because Naruto is their passionate, forceful, and brainless happy anime. If you want to play dark, it is better to write more and go out and cause trouble. Anyway, fight, fight, and as long as you don't kill the famous ninja in the original, you can brush other jounin. Even if you brush it with a statement that "the protagonist is allowed to give up the mission when he sees it", it does not infringe Golden Flash 🤫

Suddenly it occurred to me that some people said that Obito could never be cleansed, and one of the reasons was that he killed his teacher and his wife. I think the quality of this teacher should be discounted. I think Konoha's method of one jounin leading three genin is more like an old employee leading a new employee. When reporting, there will also be old employees who will familiarize new employees with the work. New employees will call old employees and also called masters. Ninjas with families like Obito are mainly trained by their families. They have their own system of fighting methods, and the teacher's role is limited. Unless they are ordinary people like Xiao Li who have received the teacher's true biography.