I, Kimimaro, Seek Immortality!

Making immortality the main goal is quite good, but I personally feel that there's no need to deliberately emphasize immortality, eternal life, or being ageless and indestructible; it seems a bit awkward.

The pursuit of immortality seems to be quite popular lately, and I personally like it a lot. Kimimaro suggested that they could get a pair of high-purity Byakugan later on, as he always felt that the Byakugan and Shikotsumyaku (Corpse Bone Pulse) were a good match, since they were both the eyes and body of a sage, and it would also be very beneficial for later surgical procedures. 🙂

What annoys me most right now is the Naruto world. Why do they insist on using One Piece techniques instead of ninjutsu and taijutsu? It's just ridiculous.

By now, my interest has almost completely vanished; the recent plot has been dragging. Why did it have to side with Konoha now when the earlier parts were going so well?

I remember a fanfiction saying that Kimimaro's bloodline disease was caused by the awakening of the All-Killing Ashes trait, which seems quite plausible. I hope the author can take that into consideration. Curing it all at once makes Orochimaru seem pretty useless...

It feels like the author wanted everything, but everything ended up being weak and unfinished. What's the point of giving the protagonist so many abilities? A few are enough for actual combat. It's not about having more, but about having more refined abilities. Having many abilities but being a jack-of-all-trades is just... Uninteresting.

Daily drug delivery 😠😠😠

The system grants the protagonist various modified skills from different worlds, which can even be taught to others—it's a bit toxic. 😰😰😰

Honestly, aside from the fighting, the slice-of-life scenes aren't very entertaining. Naruto isn't suited to incorporating too much dark politics; otherwise, it immediately deviates from the theme. What are all the Naruto readers watching for? Because Naruto is their fun anime of action, power, and mindless fun. Instead of playing with darkness, it's better to write more about causing trouble.

I suddenly had a thought: some people say Obito can never be redeemed, one reason being that he killed his teacher and his wife. I think the teacher's role needs to be discounted. I think the way Konoha had one Jonin leading three Genin was more like an experienced employee mentoring a new employee.